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The Patron Saint of San Luis Rey (standard:Creative non-fiction, 3009 words) | |||
Author: Abaricia Garcia Santiago | Added: Aug 07 2006 | Views/Reads: 3777/2598 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Just when they needed a miracle, a healer arrived to change the people of San Luis Rey forever. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story woman escaped. “My name is Maria,” the young woman said to the good doctor when the soldier left the premises. "I want to thank you for helping me. " The doctor did not only save her from a severe sickness but from jail as well. “I don't know how can I ever repay you,” Maria said. The doctor replied that she could start by helping him clean the hospital premises. From then on Maria became a part of the regular hospital staff and a portion of donation by wealthy patients was saved for her wages so she could quietly leave whenever she is ready. Her constant wait for her husband was endless. The weeks became an excruciating month, the months become an agonizing year until one day she got tired of looking at the hospital calendar that she tore the calendar in half. One night as she mimicked the cry of ‘sarimanok' bird in the distant mountain she resolved to herself that her husband either perished in a fierce gun battle or had completely forgotten her. It was time to move on. When Maria woke up the next morning she saw the handsomest man she ever saw in her life. She bathed herself and wore the white dress she bought with her wages and slowly walked down the aisle of the hospital ward. She saw the doctor waiting for her at the end of the hall with his rugged looks and forlorn eyes. The doctor could not remember the last time his heart had felt so much love but the years of longing have brought him and Maria so much passion that the moment they touched each other they knew they would not have enough time to contain the fire they felt inside. In between seeing the dead and the dying or patients that could not wait for their check up in the morning as incessant pain torture them in their sleep, the two lovers locked themselves in each other's embrace like a couple of foxes mating in spring. They cried in each other arms from the severity of their sadness and in the middle of their sorrow they arched and bend and caressed the contour of their skin. They did not find the time to excuse one self because they find no use in relieving themselves. They breathe in order to salivate and the careful words they exchange throughout the whole time they were together were nothing but pleasant thought and unfounded worries. “What we are doing is wrong,” Maria said. The handsome doctor just looked at her and carefully examined the lips that he tenderly kissed and said to her that he did not travel far to make other people unhappy. In fact, he said to her she was the reason why he was there in the first place and that she is the woman he was looking for all his life. Three years, eleven months and twenty-six days later the inevitable happened. Thirty armed men arrived in San Luis Rey armed with powerful weapon including a grenade launcher and in a blitzkrieg attack overran the government army post. They took the army jeep and assorted weapon. The powerful blast of grenade and gunfire roused in their bed the sleeping townsfolk. Maria went up from her bed and ran towards the hospital ward. He saw Miguel running towards her as if he knew this thing would happen. “This must be the time Maria,” Miguel said. Maria cried. This has got to be the day her husband had promised her he would come back. The patient in the ward was in frenzy that they huddled themselves inside the female medical ward. The nurse gathered the elderly and moved them out of the male medical ward towards the pedia ward. “They don't touch children,” the nurse said. Maria shouted to Miguel, “What about you?” Miguel just looked at her. Maria ran towards the last room down the hall and began to undress. She wore the lovely white dress she bought for her wedding day and began to fix her hair. She waited so long for this day to come that this is the best time to make everything perfect. But she was filled with hesitation. Something was so wrong inside her that suddenly upset her stomach. She does not want her husband anymore. She wanted to be normal just like everyone else. She does not like the eerie sound of the mountain at night, the deafening sound of whistling bullet during gun battle and the sound of mortars and flying helicopters. She wanted to stay where she is right now. When the bandits arrived in the hospital they strafed with bullets the rows of precious medicine in the cabinet. The patients scampered for safety. They destroyed with axe and machetes the walls and hospital bed. Some patient cried when the lawless bandits began to aim their fire above their heads. “Don't kill them!” Miguel shouted. “So you are the brave doctor of this town?” the bandit leader said. He then quickly ordered his men. “Find Maria, my wife!” The he turned his ire to Miguel's direction.” How dare you?” The bandit said as he fired his armalite in the ceiling. “I asked you to take care of her wounds not own her!” Miguel was sheltered by a group of patient who ran to cover him. The fearsome bandit took his machetes and single handedly hacked to death the patient who covered Miguel from his ordeal. “You cannot escape my wrath! You will die in my hands!” But before he could cut the good doctor into pieces he heard a gun shot behind his back. When he looked back the bandit saw Maria standing behind him. It was something he did not expect. Something just told the bandit he was an enemy and he needed to die. He can't seem to grapple with the vision that appeared before him. Maria wore a glorious white wedding gown and instead of bouquet of flowers she was holding a gun in her hand. She was crying a well of tears that could possibly be for him. But the way her eyes slanted in her beautiful face it was undeniable that she felt hatred at that unfortunate time. “I cannot let you kill the most important person in my life!” Maria shouted. It was a word more powerful than the bullet she fired in her gun. The bandit felt a tightening feeling in his throat. He grabbed his heart and saw blood coming out of his chest. “How can you kill me, Maria?” the bandit said. “You should not have come anymore,” Maria said. When the bandits saw their fallen comrade they retaliated by locking up its occupant inside and without an ounce of mercy torched down the hospital. Miguel Olvido and Maria took the chance to save the numerous patients that were trapped during the fire and saved twenty-three patients from untimely death. During their grand trek in the mountains the bandits went down one by one with high-grade fever. They burned dried leaves and fanned the smoke to drive away the swarm of mosquitoes that harbor fatal Malaria. During their unsuccessful escape they saw in their dreams the ghost of men and women they have killed. They tried escaping as they wield their machetes and realized the ghost they have killed twice over were dismembered bodies of their sleeping comrades. They cried when they cannot find the route to escape as wall of tall grasses and trees hindered their way. They fall on their knees and told each other they were just having a bad dream from parasite that inhabited the cavity of their brain. “This is what Malaria does to its victim,” one of the bandit said. It changed everything one sees. The town was so shocked to learn that the hospital was razed down to the ground. They have no idea whether the couple Miguel Olvido, the doctor and Maria survived the one-hour fire. Patients who were ushered out of the burning hospital did not saw them come out during the last minute and efforts to exhume their bodies from the rubble did not yield conclusive proof of their untimely death due to heavy rain and flooding. Three typhoons and two major earthquakes later they almost forgot the tragic incident that happened in the outskirts of their town. Only when a number of children began to have fever and their noses and mouth began to bleed that they remembered Miguel Olvido, the doctor. He was like a mirage that only appeared in their dreams and only when they are too drunk or in the middle of some terrible pain or sickness they remember who he was. But no one can tell where he is. People who were tired of telling that he was dead pointed him at the deserted compound of the burned hospital that now houses Gemelina and Acacia Trees that grew to height of twenty feet. Numerous children began to vomit blood and they appealed to the nearest provincial capitol for help but the only help they had gotten were piles of leaflets and reading materials on how to combat dengue fever. No one was there to help them in times of need. They cried for Miguel Olvido the whole time their children bleed. In one peculiar incident a man told the authorities that Miguel Olvido, the doctor visited him and save his children from death. The grandiose tale he recounted in his drunken state spread like wildfire and took every unimaginable twist of plot as it passed through countless word-of-mouth stories. A search to look for Miguel Olvido created so much confusion among townsfolk that they experienced numerous cases of mass hysteria. As more and more people come out to support earlier claims of Miguel Olvido's personal intervention a rumor ensued that the church already step in to validate his 'miraculous' intervention. He said to have appeared in people's dream that no sooner they misconstrued every imaginable shadow as Miguel Olvido's miraculous images. They drowned their sadness with tales of his sacred stories that every bit of moment spent in hearing tales of his miraculous powers jettisoned its listeners and onlookers in a state that can only be describe as extreme euphoria. The miracle of Miguel Olvido not only reached the local Archbishop but the office of El Negros most corrupt congressman as well who shelled part of his pork barrel fund and erected a substandard hospital in the site where the gutted hospital once stood. It was inaugurated in a lavish fanfare that included the Provincial Governor and the town's council of elders. But it failed to attract enough attention from city doctors to migrate in San Luis Rey even with compensation that rivaled city wages. A year after it was established the hospital was left in neglect and began to collect dewdrops and green moss. Huge cracks began to appear in its floor and walls as roots sprouted out of the open crevices. Tiny plants ate the yellow figment in the coat of cheap China paint while puddle of mud began to harbor mosquitoes and harmful parasites. Trees skewered at unimaginable height from underneath the poorly cemented floors while rainwater washed the empty beds and rotten chairs from flash flood that become San Luis Rey's regular occurences. When a group of scavengers visited the abandoned government hospital building they saw the images of Miguel Olvido in its floor and walls. Expert on visionaries claimed that it was his way of telling the people of San Luis Rey that he was still looking after them even though he was gone. People began to flock in the hospital to light up candles and pray. It was an eerie sight. People lined up to take a peek at the wall that they claimed contain a human like images that is better seen in black and white photographs. No one disputed the claim of the poor scavengers at a time when majority of the hopeless people wanted miracles for themselves in whatever form or manner to alleviate their sufferings. They needed a sanctuary other than the church to pour out their frustrations and ask for deliverance. Later the town council declared it a holy ground and began to collect donations from visitors who come from as far away as Aparri and Jolo for construction of a holy church. The rumors and ancient story that was passed on during town's gatherings became a cacophony of twisted facts bloated truth and mythical lies. But whether the story is real or not it is undeniable that many people who were convinced of the town's incredulous stories flocked to the abandoned hospital to pay their homage to Miguel Olvido, the doctor and later the Patron Saint of San Luis Rey. Tweet
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