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Battle Of Blue Glade Fell (standard:fantasy, 2956 words) | |||
Author: Ben Miller | Added: Aug 03 2006 | Views/Reads: 3176/2139 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
The fantacy kingdom of kings is set to eaither raise or fall with the last battle, the final battle against royle and savage. But who will win and at what costs. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story Maw wanted. Silence, now took the field, it was the gasp before the roar and everyone, even the great War Princess, took a moment to say a few prayers before she unclasped her sword from her holster, thrusting it above her head, signalling forward. Her troops, charged with no hesitation, leaving Lillyanna and Gabriel stood, the black horse reared slightly then led over the field, closely followed by Gabriel. The two sides collided like waves upon a rocky shore and upon impact there were casualties. Still, not even at the front of the battle, Lilly dodged huge boulders that were clearing paths of her men, fired from the huge catapults bedded behind the savage. Others fell into camouflaged pits, impaled on long spears propped up right within their mouths. At long last the General and her Lieutenant cut their way to the front line of savages. They tried to strike up at them, when in swift slices, heads rolled off shoulders spraying jets of thick, red blood upon the horses silky fur. A distinct sound carried over the war cries to Lilly's keen ears, the distinct leader horn of Maw, the evil war lord that had exacerbated the crisis which now ended up in this conflict. She stared the horse in Maw's direction, giving no signal to Gabriel who had been hounding her every move, forgetting that it was her which was blocking blows to him, rather then the other way round. The Lieutenant was compelled to do his best to defend her, even with his life. Charging through the mass of bodies, both dead and alive, he chased Lilly when an enormous force barged into the side of him throwing him off his horse, sinking his heavily armoured body into the liquidised mud below. Gabriel climbed to his feet immediately blocking a hit from a mounted savage who was the culprit for knocking him off his ride. The bull snapped at him as the rider turned for another hit when luckily a stray catapulted boulder crashed across the ground, catching the rider in its first bounce, crushing the savage under the weight. Quickly, Gabriel was back on course, slashing limbs and lumps of flesh, with fantastic speed finding Lilly had disappeared out of view. Her horse bound over the small blind summit just to have the animal's neck rip open from an unforeseen wire stretched between two spears. The creature collapsed in a heap, while Lilly crawled from beneath its dead body. She was stood in a clearing, a small stretch of grass where she confronted Maw. The beast he rode snorted while it paced back and forth in front of her, she was dwarfed by the size of both of them. “Your farther was a fool to send a woman in to battle” Maw insulted, in his gruff voice. “As much as a fool he was to trust you, you loathsome animal” Lilly spat, getting in to her fighting stance, waiting for the hefty Maw to dismount, however, he did not take her proposal. Using his studded whip he pulled the bull in to a thunderous canter toward her, whirling the black mallet at his side he almost hit her, and as he strode passed she rose her blade that dripped with a slither of blood. Maw looked surprised touching his arm under the torn fold of fabric, exposing a deep gash that gushed with his own blood. His nostrils flared in a rage as he raised his dirt ridden fingers to his mouth, smearing the blood on his tongue. Lilly stood back watching as he dropped in to their arena, the final battle between the Generals. Lilly stood her ground throwing her arrow shaped helmet to the floor, allowing her matted hair to swish down her back. She was ready. Both her hands clenched the swords hilt, while Maw shrugged out of his antlered garments shuffling slowly towards her, the long shaft of the mallet held secure in Maw's large hands, the wound she had inflicted did not seem to pester him as much as she had hoped. She knew if she cut down the savages leader that the rest would depleat quickly, like a bee hive without a Queen. She could end it now! They glared into each others eyes, one waiting for the other to make the first move, when suddenly like a bolt of lightning Maw flung the head of the mallet in her direction. Sharp and agile she manoeuvred around his side taking a swipe, cutting in to the leather rug he wore as a piece of armour for his torso. It barely even nicked his skin as he spun to catch her swift movments, missing her yet again he released a roar of frustration as the mallot sank in to the earth for a second time. It was taking so much power to lift the heavey weapon, each time droplets of sweat rolled down his face. Before he could lift the mallot again he stood hovering his weapon, his head hanging while he gulped in lung full's of air. Lilly had done it! She had caught him in his weak spot a small gap in the vest at the middle of his spine, her blade had disappeared almost all the way into his body but because of his large structure the swords tip did not protrude. They stood joined in death, victory and defeat for only a moment. Maw's ginger beard was now coated with blood that had spewed out of his mouth, slowly he began to slip off Lilly's golden blade to the floor where he so rightly belonged. “Your Highness” A familiar voice called over to her from the lip of her arena. She smiled wearily over to Gabriel who scrambled bloodied and dented toward her. However, their moment of victory was short lived as a large figure appeared behind the fair Princess, in a horrific scream an almighty horn pushed throw the back of her, tearing upward, piercing her front armoured plate like a burning arrow through warm flesh. The savages pet had taken its revenge over its masters death, impailing her slim body upon its enormous right hand side horn, shaking her delicate frame with each jolt of the head. Gabriel's expression of relief shortly changed to disbelief as he now found himself charging head on to the beast. Quickly he dodged round the broad side of the bull into its blind spot where the Princess's body luckily restricted its vision. Gabriel sharply brought down his blade through the horn with little difficulty separating Lilly from its painful thrusts of the head as blood spouted out of the based stump which was left, with one final blow before the creature pulled its rage on to the perpetrator of its pain, he cut deep into the back of its neck almost detaching its head from its thick set shoulders. Lillyanna's weak body was pulled in to the Lieutenant's armoured arms. He had feared this sight more then anything he could imagine. The King, his charitable King will be devastated. Tears clouded his sight as he removed a fading strand of hair from her creamy porcelain face. For what breaths they were she still breathed in quivering judders and gulps and if only for a moment their eyes met, both knowing this was going to be the last the Princess would see. Her blueing lips parted as if to speak releasing a jewel of red blood down the corner of her mouth, which trickled down to drip off her chin. Lilly's hand, that held Gabriel's, went tight and then nothing, she became limp, lifeless. The War Princess was dead and her royal blood stained his virginal hands, his first sticky feel of what it was like to feel a comrades cold blood. Carefully he laid her down, her body just as beautiful in death as what she was in life. Gabriel rose to his feet walking sorely toward the savages body, which laid face down in a pool of his own blood. Detaching a long bladed dagger from his thigh he loomed over the body, lifting the corpse by the hair to expose the black neck that he was about to carve into. “Look upon your leader” Gabriel's voice roared through the thick pulsing cries of the war field and all stopped to gaze upon him. He brought up the decapitated head of Maw high above him, showing the savages their beloved General. They had lost and were fighting for a dead mans cause. Like rodents, caught in a farmers lamp, they dropped their weapons fleeing in the opposite direction from the silver army, depleting like the sea at high noon. The men looked up at him in confusion before they all rose their swords above their heads realising screams of victory, which Gabriel did not share, he simply threw down the already festering head wandering back to the resting place of Lilly. Galloping through the proud archway of the castle of the King Gabriel's horse tried to ignore its sore battle legs. It wheezed in trumpets of snorts until in urgency he leapt from its back into the darkened stone square to begin his climb up in to the castles column. Guard's called for the news but Gabriel's now harsh face just gave them an ounce of a glance before passing by into the King's chamber. Few candles were lit making the room dim in comparison to what it looked like in the day. Bright vibrant wall scrolls lavished the chamber now were mudded in deep purples, while luxurious gold ornaments lost their shine. From the curtained four poster bed, set in the middle of the room, a hoofing cough tore through the fabric, where a crouched frail looking old man sat amongst several large folds of a thick set of sheets. His greying eyes lit, for only a moment, hoping to see Lilly to be the one shadowing his door way but no, it was his most loyalist of Lieutenants. The young innocent face of his youngest Lieutenant was now captured in a shadow that only war could inflict on a man. “Where is Lilly?” The King asked in a tearing cough to have Gabriel come to his bedside, a single candle behind the King's bed allowed the one curtain to become slightly transparent so each could see one another. “The savage Maw is dead. Blue Glade Fell is ours once more and as for Lilly” Gabriel brought forward a satchel bringing forth the General's war helmet, he parted the curtain laying it in the King's lap. Slowly and shakily the King took it, in his talon like hands, feeling the coldness of the steal send a chill deep into his sole. Crystal tears ran the many cannons of his old face “Her death was not in vain, it was your daughter that ended the savages life, she brought us our victory” “Gabriel come closer” the King's voice was a wheezing whisper “I have no kin to take my place after I am gone, you are young but I know you are valiant. Rule over the land try and unit all which was broken years passed. Bring the savage back into the fold, that is all I ask of you.” They sat silent for a few moments when the King parted the curtain looking directly in to Gabriel's shaded eyes “Now take an old man to his daughters body” “The men fetch her, Sire” The Lieutenant said softly helping the hunching old King from his bed. Great torches of red flame snaked the purple hills on the armies return. The first line of men on limping steeds towed a cart behind them through the arched gates and into the square. Guards, servants and civilians lined the open corridors, which ran the walls of the yard. Emerging from the mouth of the stairs Gabriel escorted the dwarfed King toward the halted cart where his beloved daughter lay motionless, as if asleep. The crusted blood and flecks of mud that once decorated her face were now wiped away, her hair laid over her dainty shoulders while her body was lain on a bed of clubs, while across her chest hiding the gaping wound was Maw's fevered mallet. This was a token of the highest respect from the troops, taking the time to gather the savages weapons and arranging her as they did. Slowly the shaking, old hand of the King rested upon the freezing skin of Lilly, his sparrow like legs gave way from grief, his light body was quickly caught by Gabriel's strong arm that held him secure. A great sorrow filled the lands and upon the tomb of the War Princess flowers of all colours laced it, from yellows, pinks to royal reds and soft whites. As time slipped away and her father met her in the ground, a constant column of light that always broke the thickest of clouds shone upon them, like even their Gods graced them with eternal sunshine for their sacrifices. Over the peaceful lands the new King, King Gabriel watches over his new kingdom with high expectations, he remembers that first battle, the beautiful Lillyanna at his side and the aging face of the man who gave him this great responsibility. All is quite now but all wonder for just how long. Tweet
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