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Darkness (standard:Fan Fiction, 2025 words)
Author: DarkAngelAdded: Jun 25 2006Views/Reads: 3262/2246Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
This is written is Chapters, I will post chapter for chapter, it is about Bey-blade, a Anime tv show, but it goes about Brooklyn and a girl. Romance/horror
 



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tournament, by threatening everyone.” Kai said and Tyson gasped but 
then smiled. 

“All the more reason for me too enter, then I can help him out of this
state again, this is going to be so cool!” Tyson yelled like a school 
girl while everyone sighed in irritation. “Whatever Tyson, I'm heading 
out; my mom is probably getting worried.” Max said and waved everyone 
good-bye. “I have to go as well, since it's registration tomorrow.” Kai 
said and left without saying good-bye. “Is everyone going to leave me 
now?” Tyson asked and they nodded. “Sorry man, we got to go, you know, 
prepare for the tournament.” Ray said and left, followed by Chief and 
Diachi. 

Tyson sat down on the bed. “This really goes beyond the saying ‘love me
or leave me'.” Tyson said and lay down on the bed, drifting of to 
sleep... 

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Meanwhile Brooklyn was sitting in his room, all the lights were off, he
embraced the darkness, it welcomed him, just like Zeus did, he often 
heard his bit-beast speak to him, telling him to seek destruction. 
“Maybe this is just all a figment of my imagination...” Brooklyn said 
to the darkness. No... he heard in his head. “Yes Zeus, I know what I 
must do, I must eliminate this female before she does that to me, 
wasn't that your prediction?” He asked Zeus now. Yes... He heard again, 
this voices wasn't creeping him out anymore, even if it seemed unreal 
to him sometimes. 

Brooklyn pulled his legs up to his chin, he wasn't wearing his usually
white suit with the gold lining, he was wearing a black polo neck long 
sleeve t-shirt and black loose jeans, with a long black cape. He looked 
like a metal head if you looked at him quickly, he sighed in relief 
from being comforted by Zeus again. “So I must kill this girl, before 
the tournament?” He asked again at the familiar voice answered. Yes, 
you must kill her, but you must get close to her first, get her alone, 
you must not be kicked out of the tournament for murder, the tournament 
starts in 20 days, that's more than enough time to kill her, you will 
start tonight. Zeus said and Brooklyn smiled, that was the most Zeus 
had ever said too him, he was now sure this wasn't just a figment of 
his imagination. “Yes, I will go now, do you know were she is?” He 
figured if it wasn't his imagination, then Zeus would be able to tell 
him where she was. Yes of course, she is currently at a pub in 5th 
avenue, stalk her, find out where she lives, make sure you get her 
alone before you kill her, the sooner the better. He said and Brooklyn 
smiled again and then got up. “You are really talk active tonight, but 
do you mind telling me what she looks like, I can't follow the wrong 
girl home. “ Brooklyn said and walked to the front door of his house, 
he was in 4th avenue, which meant she wasn't far from him. Look for 
black, now go. Brooklyn didn't quite understand, but he would find her 
somehow, he took his dagger from the table and slid it up his sleeve 
and exited his house. “Very well Zeus, I will do this for you, you are 
the only one who cares for me.” Brooklyn said and he got no reply from 
Zeus, not that he expected one. 

Brooklyn walked down the street, it was just over 9 pm in the night, so
it was dark, and he was hardly noticeable, except for his leaf green 
eyes and orange hair, that looked like a tiny wild fire in the dark, 
people were giving him weird looks, while other people in black were 
yelling stuff at him in a language he didn't understand, nor wished to 
understand, he reached 5th avenue in less than 10 minutes, he was now 
just looking for the pub that Zeus spoke about, Brooklyn didn't know 
the city, he liked his own company, he didn't like other peoples 
company, or loud streets, the noisy people or the irritating critics or 
fans, he just wanted everyone to disappear. 

He spotted a pub called ‘Drink up', he eyed the lights that were emitted
from the pubs sign, it was bright, and it hurt his eyes, different 
colors, pink, blue and red, flashing, and a lot of noise coming from 
the pub, he wanted to turn around, walk away, run away, but he needed 
to do what Zeus said. “Is this the right place?” He asked and Zeus 
answered yes, now do what I told you. Brooklyn smiled and entered the 
pub, but he immediately wanted to run out, smoke was filling the room, 
drunks were everywhere, and he was disgusted with these people's 
actions. “Mortals...” He muttered but then heard Zeus's voice again 
Remember you're also mortal...Now do what I told you. Brooklyn growled. 
“I might be mortal, but I wish I wasn't, you promised me you'd change 
me, remember Zeus?” Brooklyn asked and Zeus replied. Yes, I remember, I 
remember I promised you I'll take you away from this place, strip you 
of your mortality, and I will, if you do what I say, and then you will 
get your reward. 

Brooklyn smiled. “No problem.” Brooklyn said as he looked around for the
female he was seeking, he had no idea how she looked, Zeus only told 
him to look for black, maybe the female was black. He looked around, he 
saw blondes that were dancing on tables with brunettes, he turned away 
from them, he was sure it wasn't one of them, he searched further, 
until his eyes locked on one, who fitted the black description, she was 
wearing only black, she looked mildly depressed, drinking red wine, and 
playing with the glass, probably out of boredom. “Is this the right 
girl?” He asked as he walked closer to her. Yes, do what I said. 
Brooklyn nodded to Zeus and walked closer to her, if she was drunk then 
it would be much easier to find out where she lived, or get her alone. 

“Hi Miss.” He said and she didn't turn to him. “Go away.” She said and
Brooklyn growled, but kept his cool. “How are you doing?” He asked and 
she growled now. “Fine, go away.” She said and Brooklyn growled again 
and then called the bartender. “Get her another glass of wine.” He said 
and the bartender nodded and she then hissed at him. “I didn't need you 
to buy me another glass, so leave me alone and take your wine with 
you!” She yelled and then turned to him, first with anger and then 
surprise. “Brooklyn Kingston?” She asked and he nodded. “Yes, nice to 
meet you too.” He said and she looked down. “Sorry for being rude, but 
you have no right to order for me.” She said, her anger returning. 
“Yes, sorry, let's forget about the wine then, there are some new rules 
in the tournament, I just wanted to know whether you knew them?” He 
asked and she shook her head. “No, I don't, what are they?” She asked 
and Brooklyn smiled, this would be easier than he thought. “Come with 
me, I really don't want to discuss it in such an open place, will you 
come?” He asked and she nodded, not really noticing or caring what she 
was getting herself into... 

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Hey the only way I'm writing further is if I get a review. So it's up
too you. 

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