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Darkness (standard:Fan Fiction, 2025 words) | |||
Author: DarkAngel | Added: Jun 25 2006 | Views/Reads: 3262/2246 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This is written is Chapters, I will post chapter for chapter, it is about Bey-blade, a Anime tv show, but it goes about Brooklyn and a girl. Romance/horror | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story tournament, by threatening everyone.” Kai said and Tyson gasped but then smiled. “All the more reason for me too enter, then I can help him out of this state again, this is going to be so cool!” Tyson yelled like a school girl while everyone sighed in irritation. “Whatever Tyson, I'm heading out; my mom is probably getting worried.” Max said and waved everyone good-bye. “I have to go as well, since it's registration tomorrow.” Kai said and left without saying good-bye. “Is everyone going to leave me now?” Tyson asked and they nodded. “Sorry man, we got to go, you know, prepare for the tournament.” Ray said and left, followed by Chief and Diachi. Tyson sat down on the bed. “This really goes beyond the saying ‘love me or leave me'.” Tyson said and lay down on the bed, drifting of to sleep... ___ Meanwhile Brooklyn was sitting in his room, all the lights were off, he embraced the darkness, it welcomed him, just like Zeus did, he often heard his bit-beast speak to him, telling him to seek destruction. “Maybe this is just all a figment of my imagination...” Brooklyn said to the darkness. No... he heard in his head. “Yes Zeus, I know what I must do, I must eliminate this female before she does that to me, wasn't that your prediction?” He asked Zeus now. Yes... He heard again, this voices wasn't creeping him out anymore, even if it seemed unreal to him sometimes. Brooklyn pulled his legs up to his chin, he wasn't wearing his usually white suit with the gold lining, he was wearing a black polo neck long sleeve t-shirt and black loose jeans, with a long black cape. He looked like a metal head if you looked at him quickly, he sighed in relief from being comforted by Zeus again. “So I must kill this girl, before the tournament?” He asked again at the familiar voice answered. Yes, you must kill her, but you must get close to her first, get her alone, you must not be kicked out of the tournament for murder, the tournament starts in 20 days, that's more than enough time to kill her, you will start tonight. Zeus said and Brooklyn smiled, that was the most Zeus had ever said too him, he was now sure this wasn't just a figment of his imagination. “Yes, I will go now, do you know were she is?” He figured if it wasn't his imagination, then Zeus would be able to tell him where she was. Yes of course, she is currently at a pub in 5th avenue, stalk her, find out where she lives, make sure you get her alone before you kill her, the sooner the better. He said and Brooklyn smiled again and then got up. “You are really talk active tonight, but do you mind telling me what she looks like, I can't follow the wrong girl home. “ Brooklyn said and walked to the front door of his house, he was in 4th avenue, which meant she wasn't far from him. Look for black, now go. Brooklyn didn't quite understand, but he would find her somehow, he took his dagger from the table and slid it up his sleeve and exited his house. “Very well Zeus, I will do this for you, you are the only one who cares for me.” Brooklyn said and he got no reply from Zeus, not that he expected one. Brooklyn walked down the street, it was just over 9 pm in the night, so it was dark, and he was hardly noticeable, except for his leaf green eyes and orange hair, that looked like a tiny wild fire in the dark, people were giving him weird looks, while other people in black were yelling stuff at him in a language he didn't understand, nor wished to understand, he reached 5th avenue in less than 10 minutes, he was now just looking for the pub that Zeus spoke about, Brooklyn didn't know the city, he liked his own company, he didn't like other peoples company, or loud streets, the noisy people or the irritating critics or fans, he just wanted everyone to disappear. He spotted a pub called ‘Drink up', he eyed the lights that were emitted from the pubs sign, it was bright, and it hurt his eyes, different colors, pink, blue and red, flashing, and a lot of noise coming from the pub, he wanted to turn around, walk away, run away, but he needed to do what Zeus said. “Is this the right place?” He asked and Zeus answered yes, now do what I told you. Brooklyn smiled and entered the pub, but he immediately wanted to run out, smoke was filling the room, drunks were everywhere, and he was disgusted with these people's actions. “Mortals...” He muttered but then heard Zeus's voice again Remember you're also mortal...Now do what I told you. Brooklyn growled. “I might be mortal, but I wish I wasn't, you promised me you'd change me, remember Zeus?” Brooklyn asked and Zeus replied. Yes, I remember, I remember I promised you I'll take you away from this place, strip you of your mortality, and I will, if you do what I say, and then you will get your reward. Brooklyn smiled. “No problem.” Brooklyn said as he looked around for the female he was seeking, he had no idea how she looked, Zeus only told him to look for black, maybe the female was black. He looked around, he saw blondes that were dancing on tables with brunettes, he turned away from them, he was sure it wasn't one of them, he searched further, until his eyes locked on one, who fitted the black description, she was wearing only black, she looked mildly depressed, drinking red wine, and playing with the glass, probably out of boredom. “Is this the right girl?” He asked as he walked closer to her. Yes, do what I said. Brooklyn nodded to Zeus and walked closer to her, if she was drunk then it would be much easier to find out where she lived, or get her alone. “Hi Miss.” He said and she didn't turn to him. “Go away.” She said and Brooklyn growled, but kept his cool. “How are you doing?” He asked and she growled now. “Fine, go away.” She said and Brooklyn growled again and then called the bartender. “Get her another glass of wine.” He said and the bartender nodded and she then hissed at him. “I didn't need you to buy me another glass, so leave me alone and take your wine with you!” She yelled and then turned to him, first with anger and then surprise. “Brooklyn Kingston?” She asked and he nodded. “Yes, nice to meet you too.” He said and she looked down. “Sorry for being rude, but you have no right to order for me.” She said, her anger returning. “Yes, sorry, let's forget about the wine then, there are some new rules in the tournament, I just wanted to know whether you knew them?” He asked and she shook her head. “No, I don't, what are they?” She asked and Brooklyn smiled, this would be easier than he thought. “Come with me, I really don't want to discuss it in such an open place, will you come?” He asked and she nodded, not really noticing or caring what she was getting herself into... /*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\*/*\ Hey the only way I'm writing further is if I get a review. 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