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Three Mile Drove, Chapter One (standard:horror, 1380 words) [1/29] show all parts | |||
Author: Brian Cross | Updated: Jun 11 2008 | Views/Reads: 4332/2538 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
following on from the prologue, this is a story about a washed-up rock musician who inherits a smallholding in the English fens and soon finds himself regretting taking up the place. Chapter one of a completed work. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story off key. But try telling her that. It had begun to rain as he turned the Cherokee into his street, tiny droplets at first but in the short time it took him to pull up outside his house they had increased in size and intensity. As he hopped out Goldwater believed they might be forerunners of an unwelcome storm. He had a reasonably sized four bedroomed house and a reasonably sized driveway leading into it, which he never used, preferring to leave the Jeep out on the narrow tree-lined street where it often caused obstruction, much to the chagrin of his neighbours. The phone was ringing when he entered the house, tripping over the hallway mat and disregarding a formal looking white envelope which lay upon it. Unbalanced by his encounter with the mat he stumbled across the rectangular hall, before snatching the receiver from its housing by the door of the main reception room. ‘Darren it's Jeff, I'm calling to tell you that Craig and me have had enough of the antics, the band's sinking like the titanic and we're not going down with it. We're pulling out here and now.' Goldwater felt Jeff Foreman's words lodge sharply in the pit of his stomach. So that was it, just like that. A ten year association split, and by way of a bloody phone call. Well he didn't really mind, he'd known it was coming in any case. What really riled him was that they hadn't had the guts to tell him face to face. He felt his anger rising like acid from his gut, ‘So why tell me now Jeff, why didn't you tell me up front, after the show. Guess you didn't have the nerve eh ?' ‘You were too quickly off the mark Darren,' Jeff Foreman said with quiet sarcasm, ‘running away from Goldie I suppose.' ‘Go to hell !' Goldwater slammed the receiver into its cradle with a force that rocked the wall socket. Was that what they really thought - that he was scared of her, was that what they had been thinking all these years ? Well it was total crap, he just needed space, that was all. He needed eternal space from her ranting and raving. Goldwater stormed into the lounge and yanked a bottle from the mahogany drinks cabinet. They could all go to hell if they thought the split was going to bother him. The writing had been on the wall longer than the graffiti in Gladstone Street subway. He would be glad to be free of the lot of them. He could find a job as a lead guitarist with any band he chose, they would be glad to have him, he'd been holding this motley little crew together for too long. He'd earn more than enough money to keep himself and his place ticking over. Except that he couldn't. He knew it with all the bitterness he tried to hide. Bitterness that threatened to erupt from the core of his head like discharge from a crater. His fingers were too shaky, too slow on the fingerboard these days no matter how much he tried to hide it, sometimes he felt himself struggling to hold a G-chord. Why, even at this moment he was struggling to remove the top from the whisky bottle. The top eventually fell to the floor, he didn't bother retrieving it. His mind felt like a network of lines, none of which met. Face facts old friend, one and only self-effacing friend, you're finished, fucking washed up, a has-been at thirty nine, a potential vagrant in a smart, four bedroomed house. Goldwater took a big swig from the bottle, clasped his hand around it's neck and crossed to the guilt edged mirror which dominated the room. He examined his black curly hair, matted with sweat from the performance, saw his blood rimmed blue eyes and ran his fingers around the hollows beneath his eyes. He could swear that the normally thin lines had doubled into folds since the last time he'd looked. He turned away in disgust, switched the stereo on full blast, then headed through the hall towards the downstairs toilet. Then he remembered the envelope lying on the mat. Tweet
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