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Tara and the Great Mountain (standard:fantasy, 6471 words) | |||
Author: mykemyk | Added: Jul 10 2005 | Views/Reads: 3285/2162 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Tara becomes the keeper of her father's kingdom... | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story She could have lifted her tankard high in the air...her father would have. But, she was not her father. As the sun struggled to push the moon out of the way, she was still riding. In the distance, the great mountain loomed before her. As a girl, it had stood as a symbol of hope. She had listened to her father talk of how, one day, they would leave the valley. They would leave the violence, pilfering, and plundering behind. They would live atop the great mountain. They would be free. At the age of nine, her father had left them. She had been awakened, in the night, by the sound of a single horse's hoofs as they moved along the trail away from their home in the valley. At first, she thought she'd been dreaming. When morning came, she'd found her mother, Ayla, standing alone in the small "main room" of their shack. "Your father has gone away", she had said flatly. "I do not know when he will return...I just know that, one day, he will!" Three years later, he had returned. He had, as he had put it, "roamed the mountain". Tara could still vividly recall the look on her father's face when he spoke of what he had discovered. "The mountain is almost as big around as it is tall", he'd said. "There is no way up for a man on a horse", he'd continued. "But", he said smiling, "There is a place where a man can be as free as a bird on the top of that mountain!" The very next day, they had left for the mountain. Mother had never known any other kind of life but that of the valley. Tara could tell that she was fearful of leaving the life she had always known behind her. Yet, there was something in the eyes of my father that had convinced her that she would not be disappointed in following him. Tara could still recall the feelings she had experienced as they drew close to the great mountain. It was exactly as her father had described it to her and her mother. The walls of the mountain looked smooth and shiny in the sunlight. There seemed to be no way they could possibly climb the great rock that seemed to reach into the heavens. As they came to the very base of the mountain, Tara's father walked over to a clump of brush that seemed to have been blown by the wind...settling into a spot near the base of the mountain. Working carefully, her father had uncovered a large ladder. It had been made of branches that had been tied between two long limbs of a tree. As Tara and her mother watched, her father had placed the ladder at the base of the great mountain and had positioned it so that the end rested on a small ledge that had been carved out of the rock. As Tara stood there, at the base of the huge mountain, she began to pick out other small ledges that had been carved out of the mountain. Looking carefully, she began to trace a trail of ledges that led very close to the very peak of the mountain. Her father had spent three years making a trail that would take them to a place where, as he'd put it, a man would be as free as a bird. It took the three of them nearly two full days to reach their new home. Her father would put the ladder in place; they would climb to the next ledge, and pull the ladder up after them. At the end of the first day, they had spent the night on a large ledge...nearly half way up the mountain. The ledge had been made by the winds and the rains...as if her father's gods had prepared a place for him to rest. At the end of the second day, just as the sun was giving way to the moon, they had reached another ledge. Beyond the ledge...and behind a large boulder that stuck out from the mountain, was the entrance to a cave. Pulling the ladder up, Tara's father had drug it inside the cave and had laid it gently on the cavern floor. Taking their hands, Tara's father led Tara and her mother over to the side of the cave. "Put your hands against this wall", he had said. "Just follow the wall of this cave." For several hours, Tara, her father, and mother walked deeper into the cave. In the darkness, it was hard to keep a sense of direction. But the aching of her knees told Tara that the cave seemed to be winding upward. After several more hours of walking, Tara had noticed the cave had begun to get lighter. She could now see her hand in front of her face. At first, she imagined that her eyes were just getting used to their new surroundings...somehow, getting used to the darkness. She did not say anything about it until her mother exclaimed, "Dalkon, it is getting lighter in here...we must be heading toward an opening in this cave." Suddenly, as if the god's had decided to smile upon Ayla, as they rounded a bend in the cave, light broke through the darkness. Tara remembered having to rub her eyes as they readjusted to what seemed like the brightest light she had ever seen. As they moved slowly forward, they left the darkness completely. Before them lay a vast stretch of land, green and glorious. As they walked farther into the sunlight, Tara's father turned to her and her mother, smiled, and said, "We are standing on the very top of the great mountain. Welcome to your new home!" ******* In the months that followed, Tara had explored her new homeland. The fields of grass were green...far greener than any she had seen in the valley. Her father told her that the gods brought rain to the top of the great mountain, first, and then allowed it to travel down to the valley. He had told her that only the richest of rains ever fell upon the mountain...that what the valleys received were simply "the droppings" that the great mountain refused to drink. The soil was black as midnight and moist to the touch. Her father had told her that the gods had placed the rich soil here...knowing that, one day, someone, with vision, would harvest its wealth. Although her father had spoken of the rich veins of gold and ore he had discovered within the walls of the cave, he'd said that no discovery had been more precious than that of the dinks. Amused at the looks from his wife and daughter, Dalkon had tried to describe them. "Call to memory the grandest stallion you can imagine. Dress him in the finest coat of armor, and you have a dink!" Tara's father had named the creature himself. He had been roaming the vast landscape of the mountain and had come upon an entire herd. Cautiously, he had crept along until he'd come within bowshot. Quickly plucking an arrow from pouch on his back, he had drawn his bow and released its fury. As the arrow reached its target, it simply bounced as though it had struck a rock. "Dink", said the arrow as it fell harmlessly to the ground. From then on, he'd referred to these creatures as "dinks". For weeks, Dalkon had studied these horses that the gods had coated in armor. Their skin looked much like the shell of a tortoise. There was no chink in their armor...only the belly of the creature was left exposed. On their feet, they were absolutely impossible to bring down. After weeks of study, Dalkon had decided to make an attempt to blind the creature. He had picked the biggest dink of the herd...a large male that seemed to be the leader. He'd shot an arrow into the creatures eye. At first, the huge animal had reared, snorted, and pranced about. Quickly, Dalkon had sent an arrow speeding rapidly toward the creature's other eye. Totally blinded, Dalkon watched the animal stumble about until it finally stumbled to the ground. With the animal struggling to get up, Dalkon shot several arrows into its soft underbelly. Before Dalkon could reach the animal, its soul had already risen to ride the wind. Dalkon had skinned the creature. Starting at the dinks underbelly, he had managed to separate the thickened hide from the body of the horse like creature. He'd been amazed to discover that the hide, though strong as any armor he had ever encountered, was light in weight. He had taken the hide back to his camp, dug a pit, filled it with water, and had dumped in lots of herbs and minerals he had found in exploring the great mountain. He found that, after a day of soaking in the minerals, the hide became soft and easy to cut. He had quickly pieced together a set of armor from the hide. Finished, he'd laid his creation out in the sun to dry. After a few hours in the sun, he could see that the hide was changing back into its former state. Though still light, it was able to withstand any attempt to pierce it. It was the finest set of armor that Dalkon had ever seen. Excited, Dalkon had killed another dink, skinned it, and had thrown the hide into the pit of minerals. This time, he'd left it lying in the pit for nearly a week. This time, he had sewn himself a fine jacket. After several days in the sun, the jacket was still as soft as when he'd first taken it from the pit. Soon, he had an entire set of outer clothes he had made from the dink hides. Though soft, they did not allow a drop of water to touch his skin which hid beneath them. It seemed to hold the heat and drive away the cold. To Dalkon, the dink and its hide was a treasure whose worth was beyond anything he had ever seen or imagined. He was convinced that the gods had placed the creature in this place knowing, that one day; someone would come to find them. If there was anything more precious than dink hide, it was the meat that lay beneath the creature's armor. Moist, sweet, and tender...the meat, when properly cooked, was a feast that no king had ever enjoyed. For Dalkon, the dink was a possession whose worth simply could not be measured. When the gods took the warmth from the winds, Tara and her parents moved deep into the cave. Dalkon built a great fire that would last until the gods allowed the wind to warm again. Exposed to the light from the fire, Tara studied the beauty of the cave. Her father told her that the cave was a gift from the gods. It was a far greater castle than any king had ever thought of building. It was fortified in such a simple way, yet, it stood invincible. A handful of men could protect its borders. It was, for Tara's father, the kind of kingdom he had never dared ask the gods for. To Dalkon, the gods had laid paradise at his feet and had asked him to be its guardian. With the warmth of the wind having gone and come again, Dalkon sat his family down to talk with them. He had wrestled with the gift the gods had given him. He thought it terribly unfair that they should enjoy such a paradise when others in the valley...just as worthy, still lived amongst that which Dalkon had so desperately sought deliverance from. Tara and Ayla sat quietly as Dalkon told them of how he wanted to return to the valley and bring others to this new kingdom. He told them he would bring the families one at a time. When they had constructed a dwelling that was suitable for the warm wind, he would return to the valley for another family. When the gods took the warm wind away, they could all dwell together in the cave. For the next couple of years, Dalkon had gone down to the valley and had returned with families. Tara had found herself thinking that either Dalkon was most persuasive or the gods had gone before him and placed a hunger in the hearts of the families he went to see. Each time he took his ladder and descended the mountain, he returned with a family. Soon there were fifty people living on the great mountain. The warm winds had left and returned seventeen times in Tara's life. The great mountain had enabled her to live just as her father had promised. There was nothing to fear in this paradise. The stories of robbers, pilfering, and plundering had been all but forgotten. The gods had truly honored her father. He had been led to a place that many, given the chance, would have traded all they own to experience. She did not understand why her father had begun to frown and stare at the sky as much as he'd done lately. She knew that many he had brought to the new land had begun to talk of the money that could be made from trading the clothes and armor made from the dink hides. She had heard the men speak of how they could take what they had made to the outer edge of the valley. They could meet with traders as they left the valley and sell the hides there. There would be no need to go back to the place where they had left. They would only go close enough to meet with the traders. Tara could not help but wonder why her father was so upset with such ideas. Surely there would be nothing wrong with trading what they had made with others. What harm could there be if they did not go back into the valley they had left? The warm winds were still blowing softly when Tara's father told her and her mother that he was going down the great mountain. Tara watched her father closely as he told her and her mother that the men had insisted they take some of the hides down into the valley and barter with the traders that come through before the warm winds were chased away by the gods. As he spoke with them, Tara saw sadness come over her father she had not seen since she was a child. "Greed is a poison...once inside a man, it does terrible things." Dalkon told them. "Is it not enough that we have found this wonderful life? Why would we allow the gods to think we are so ungrateful for what they have provided? Greedily asking for more can do nothing but anger the gods that have chosen to smile upon us." The following morning, Dalkon and four other men had started their descent down the great mountain. Tara could still remember the look on his father's face as he turned to wave at them. She had not seen the expression on her father's face in so many years...not since she had been very young. It seemed to be a mixture of both sadness and fear. Ayla had told Tara that her father knew exactly what he was doing. Although he did not agree with the other men, he knew that he was responsible for bringing them to the great mountain. The gods had entrusted him with the keeping of its secrets. He had to go with them. There was no other choice for him but to go. Tara knew that it would be days before her father returned. She did not think she could wait for the sun and the moon to make the long trips necessary to allow her father's return. To pass the time, Tara set out to make a surprise for her father. One of the men that had come to the great mountain was a miner. He had come to mine the ore that her father had told him was encased in the mountain. He had found much ore in the time he had spent in this paradise. A miner and blacksmith by trade, Tara had decided to ask him for a great favor. "Boda", she began, "I want to make a sword for my father. I want it to be the kind of sword that would be found in the hands of a great king." The kind old man looked lovingly at the girl who stood before him and said, "You and I both know that your father is, indeed, king of this great mountain. If it is a fine sword you want, then a fine sword is what Boda will make." With that, he had turned to begin the making of a sword that, Tara knew, would be fit for a king. Next, she went to visit Fila. He and his wife had been the first family her father had brought to the mountain. Dalkon had shown him all the special ways to handle the dink hides. He and Fila had spent hour's together, killing, skinning, and harvesting the rich hides from the powerful creatures my father had discovered on the mountain. "Very well", Fila had answered, when Tara had asked for a special suit of armor to be constructed. "Your father is not a big man", Fila had stated flatly. "In fact, the way you have grown, I can measure you and be safe in knowing that it will fit your father." Having put her father's oldest friends to work, Tara decided that she would make four daggers for her father. She would make a belt for him out of the dink hides that would hold all four of them. As she began her work, she thought of how pleased her father would be with her gifts. Everything would be made from that which the gods had made him caretaker of. She was sure that he would be proud of what she had done. The sun had come and gone 8 times when Hagan, one of the men who had gone down the mountain with Tara's father, came stumbling from out of the cave. He was covered in blood. He had been stripped of all his clothes and had cuts and bruises all over his body. When he saw Tara's mother, Ayla, he dropped to his knees and began to sob uncontrollably. As if the gods had already spoken to Tara's mother, Ayla turned to walk back toward the dwelling she, Dalkon, and Tara had shared together. There was no need for her to listen to the story Hagan had to tell. She already knew. Dalkon was dead! ********** Tara, like her mother, did not need to hear the story that Hagan was ready to tell. She knew her father was dead. She didn't know how she knew...she just knew. Determined to carve his death, forever, into her memory, she stood bravely and listened to Hagan as he relayed to the rest of the people what had befallen them in the valley. "Dalkon was right", Hagan began tearfully. "The gods were not happy with the greed that possessed us. We met the traders as they came up out of the valley. They looked at what we had and wanted to know where we had gotten it. When Dalkon told them that we were there to trade and would not tell from whence these treasures came, they became angry and threatened to kill us. Dalkon stepped in front of the rest of us and told them that he was the only one who knew the whereabouts of the treasures we had in our possession. One of the men told Dalkon to call upon the gods for help...as Dalkon closed his eyes, the man pulled his sword and...And..." Hagan stopped to look at the people he was talking to. It was as if he were measuring them, unable to decide if they would be able to understand what he was about to say. Still looking unsure, he gasped and shouted, "Dalkon's tongue was still moving when it left his body to rest in the dirt!" Hagan put his head in his hands and wept bitterly. "The others", he said, “they killed slowly. When they turned to face me, I fell to my knees and begged for my life. The man who had killed Dalkon laughed and said that I, a sniveling coward, was not worthy to die as the others had. Instead, they stripped me of my outer garments and told me to run away. I ran until I came to the base of the mountain. I did not want to come back here...to tell such a horrible story. But, the gods have decided that it is to be my punishment. I have shamed the gods and all who have ever loved me. I don't know what we are going to do now. I am so afraid!" With that, Hagan ran toward his dwelling near the entrance of the cave. The next few months had been terrible for Tara. With her father now dead, the place she had grown to love had now lost the glow it had once possessed. On several occasions, she had gone to her room to look at the things she'd had made for her father. The sword was magnificent. Its blade was broad and heavy. Her father would have been so proud of it. It was on a sunny day, several months after her father's death, when Tara first felt the gentle nudging coming from deep within her. It was as if the sword she'd had made for her father was calling out to her. She found herself going to her room to gaze at it. As she picked it up, she thought of Hagan...of the horrible story he'd told about her father's death. He had died bravely. He held no sword in his hand, yet, he had stood to face those who had challenged him. He had died while calling upon the gods to strengthen him. Tara had no quarrel with the gods. Her father had told her they would be angry. Her anger was fixed on those who had killed her father. Leaving her room, Tara had gone to see Fila, the one who had made her father's armor. She had not been to see him since Hagan had returned with the horrible news about her father's death. She knew that Fila had finished the armor. He was to have brought it to Dalkon when he returned from the valley. He was sitting outside his dwelling and saw her approaching. Instead of waiting for her, he had gone inside...leaving the door open...inviting her in. As Tara entered Fila's dwelling, she found him standing there, holding the armor he'd made for her father. Without either of them saying a word, Fila began to help Tara put on the armor. When finished, Fila stepped back and said, "Tara, it is a perfect fit...I knew you would be coming for it...I didn't know when, I just knew you would be coming." Without giving her a chance to respond, he had gone into another room. When he returned, he stood before her holding a sheath...made of dink hide. As Tara examined it, Fila spoke softly. "It is made for a female warrior...it is worn on the back...you pull the sword out and over your shoulder." "It is perfect", Tara had responded. A few days later, Tara had awakened to the sound of her mother in the main room of their dwelling. The sun had not yet been able to push the moon from its perch. The birds were not yet singing their song of the morning. Slipping into her outer garments, Tara stepped through the doorway leading from her room into the main room of their dwelling. As she entered, Ayla spoke without looking up from the meal she was preparing. "I know you are leaving...I have known for some time. I don't want you to go. But, I know you, Tara. I know how much you loved your father. I know you will not rest until you kill...or are killed by those who took his life. I wanted to cook for you...one last time...I wanted to sit and look at the woman my daughter has become." Tara had said nothing in answer to her mother's words. There really wasn't anything to say. Her mother had been right. She was leaving. She was going down the mountain to kill or be killed. It seemed better to simply sit and talk about the life they had shared together...to talk of the love they had for each other. She could not stop her mother from worrying. She could not stop herself from leaving. She chose to simply talk of what they had shared. What Tara was about to do, she could share with no one. It was something she would do alone. She had left the valley as a child...hoping she would never have to return. She knew that after she had killed those who had taken her father's head, she would go into the valley again...she wanted the people there to know that her father, though silenced, would never be dead...that he would live, through her, and through those who called the great mountain their home. ****** The long climb down from the top of the great mountain gave Tara a lot of time to think. She would not hurry to kill those who had murdered her father. No amount of time would ever cause her anger to lessen. She would harness her fury, and refine it. She would carefully plot her moves...positioning herself so as to cause maximum damage with little or no movement. Time was not an enemy...it was now her most trusted ally. With a pouch full of arrows, four daggers, and a broad sword, she could kill twenty men. Since the traders usually moved in groups of five to ten, she would be able to kill two groups of traders easily. She would pilfer and plunder them. Her arrows and daggers would feast on their bodies and the blade of her sword would taste blood...again and again. On the ground, Tara had walked the narrow trail leading up from the valley. There were several places where an ambush could take place. At the furthest point from the valley, a grove of trees stood growing together. As she walked along the grove, she noticed how the branches and limbs came together...as if the trees had locked arms, refusing to be separated. From these limbs, Tara could leap from one to the other, unleashing a volley of arrows that would drop five or six men before they could figure out where she was. By that time, she would be ready to drop to the ground, throwing her daggers and unleashing the fury of the broad sword that lay quietly against her back. Tara felt no fear as she walked the trail, mentally planning her attack. She knew the gods had taken the time to prepare her. On the great mountain, she had learned to take the sight of a running dink with just two arrows. Her father had told her that the gods had touched her hands and eyes...making them one with the bow and arrow. She had chopped wood for the entire village...her arms had become as strong as the legs of a dink. Her father, while watching her chop wood, had told her that the swing of her axe was swift as the lightning that the gods sometimes hurled from the heavens to announce the coming rains. Over and over, Tara walked the narrow limbs above the trail below her. She soon came to the place where she could run the gauntlet of trees as fast as the little furry creatures that lived amongst them. Satisfied, she settled peacefully in the grove to await the traders. She knew of the traders that visited the valley. They traded trinkets brought from far away lands for the hunters and trappers pelts and hides. Often slave mongers traveled with them. These men dealt in blood. They bought the women, young girls, and boys taken from their homes in the valley and sold them into lives of slavery and bondage. Stories were told of how they sometimes ripped the clothes from the women and young girls...raping them publicly to see how they would perform. Tara did not know how many men she would kill...she would kill until the gods told her to stop...until her father's death had been avenged. What she would do next was still hidden from her. She did not seem to have the energy to think beyond killing...the rage within her was still too strong. After her fury had been unleashed and emptied...after her sword had drank its fill of blood, she would consider her future. The sun had forced the moon from view 6 times when Tara finally saw the dust rising from the trail that led into the valley...the traders were coming. Quickly she climbed up into what had become her watchtower. There was a wagon and five horsemen approaching. With the two in the long flat wagon, there were 7 men she would soon kill. She waited, motionless, as if the cold winds had come and turned her body to stone. She allowed the entire band to pass under her...letting the last horseman enter the gauntlet the gods had prepared before pulling her first arrow from her pouch. By the time the first rider had fallen from his horse, three other men had arrows resting deep within their hearts. Tara was halfway through the trail of limbs when she dropped into the wagon that was following the lead horseman. The two men in the wagon had turned to look behind them...their heads following the sound of death, carried to their ears in the screams of those who had been riding behind them. Before they could allow their eyes to land upon the misery that had befallen their allies, their heads had fallen from their bodies...like ripened melons, they hit the ground with a dull thud. Kicking their bodies from the wagon, Tara turned her gaze to the lone rider ahead of her. He had pulled his horse up and had turned to face her. She had watched him as he looked at the others lying in the dusty trail. She waited for his eyes to travel their path, looking for signs of life...life that for six other men, no longer existed. His eyes showed no sign of fear, or of anger. Without speaking, he lightly nudged his horse and began to close the distance between them. Tara looked at his armor...it was made of dink hide. "I can see by your armor that you are a warrior", he said roughly. "I can see by yours, that you are a thief!" she replied. Again, he nudged his horse, allowing him to move closer to Tara. Satisfied that he was within striking distance, he pulled his horse up and said, "Since you recognize this armor, you know that your arrows, daggers, and sword are worthless to you." Tara slowly returned her sword to the sheath Fila had made for her. She took her bow from her shoulder, and pulled an arrow from her pouch, and said, "I am afraid you are mistaken", she hissed. "There is a weakness I have found...discovered will killing the creature that used to wear this armor." With that said she swiftly sent an arrow, straight and true, into the one of the horseman's widening eyes. Before he could fall from his horse, a second arrow had found its mark. She watched in silence as he heavily fell to the ground. Tara sat down in the wagon. As she looked at his lifeless form, she took notice how the shafts of her arrows refused to allow his eyes to close in death. Tara did not know how long she had sat in the wagon. The streaks of lightning, hurled from the heavens by the gods, told her it was time to move on. She had done what she had come down from the great mountain to do. She had avenged her father's death. ****** Tara slowed her horse to a walk as she entered the grove. It, like the great mountain, had become a place where she felt could speak openly to her father. It was as if his presence lingered here, and in the rich soil upon the great mountain. No one had followed her from the inn. The lone coward who had taken refuge in the night had probably decided he would rather live alone than die with more of his friends. It usually happened that way. Since avenging her father's death, Tara had left the great mountain several times. Whenever the gods came to her, to speak to her, in the stillness of her sleep, she would obey them. Sometimes it was to bring another family to the mountain. Often, it was to kill a band of slave mongers. Each time, she would always go into the valley...to move amongst those who dwelled there. To speak the words of Dalkon, king of the great mountain. As Tara carefully uncovered the ladder she had hidden at the base of the great mountain, she thought, again of her father. She was living his dream. Her life had become what he'd intended his to be. As she began the long climb up the mountain, she thought to herself, "I am not living for myself; the life I am living is in honor of my father." Tara had become known as the Warrior Princess, daughter of Dalkon. She did nothing to quiet the talk amongst the people who lived in the valley. Instead, she lived as her father had instructed her...as he had sought to live...as free as a bird. Tweet
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