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Necro (standard:fantasy, 2673 words) | |||
Author: Marty | Added: Jul 02 2005 | Views/Reads: 3366/2251 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This is the unfinished prolouge from my novel. Please rate it. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story they were warned about when they were younger, the noise heard when the dead crept through the night to a town of there choosing to steal children, women and men for supper and a no option invitation to join there cause for an entirety of serving a necromancer's will. These particular dead where wading through the river in a mass of unorganised dead flesh. But there was something, which stood out from there tumbling and swaying. They were being lead. Lead by a sole being, one that did not sway or tumble in a awkward way, this dead being or could it be a human or even a dreaded necromancer was walking normally and it could hold a straight lined walk, which was impossible for the dead to do as there brains were rotted away in to nothing and there sense of direction went with it. No one could tell what evil thing it was because it was hard enough to see the group through the pelting rain. They watched as the dark group of disgust disappeared through the curtain of grey rain. “We the faithful knights and solders of Pern, we strafe forward to eliminate any dead or evil doers that curse this land. It is our born task to free this whole island of evil...No my brothers, it is not just a task it is our sworn duty to rid us of this evil and to purify the ground on which a hollow being stands.” Said the man as he turned to face his men once more, his army. “I see it in your face that you are all are tried....” he paused to look at his silent army. Every part of the army had one or two injured soldiers being supported by other comrades. “But I can see in your eyes a thirst which death could not ever be quenched, a thirst for revenge, a thirst to rage on. I feel it my brothers and know you do. So I ask you, let us unleash our rage and combine it into one dream...one sword to slice the head of this evil once and for all....” He paused once more to the sound of cheers and roars. The sentence seemed to spring new life and energy into everyone you heard it. The new found life surged through the army and stayed in their hearts to give them a new found reason and passion to slay all evil who opposed them. As this was going on a knight on horseback moved through the army. His sliver breastplate made a sound of bullets as the rained hammered on him. The armour had the same golden crest incrested on it. He wielded a bronze tower shield in his left hand, but he wore no helm; instead he wore a wet bush of curly red hair that had been flattened by the never-ending torrent of rain. The curls lay on his pale forehead like wet seaweed on a rock. Droplets of water rushed down his face and through his red bread, in response to his sudden movements. His mare trotted out of the group of soldiers and to the right-hand side of the speaker. “Sire, may I speak to you in private?” the knight said in low tone, as if he didn't want anyone else to hear. “Of course Captain,” replied the golden armoured king. The two men turned their steads and galloped a few metres from the army. The two men came to a stop and faced away from the army's vision. The king lifted his mask and now the other man was starring at a familiar face. The captain felt a bit of comfort from his face, the feeling disconnected him from his surroundings for a few seconds only to come crashing back to reality when a droplet of chilled rain hit his nose. He shivered lightly and was focused once more on his king. A king who single handily brought Pern kingdom out from the dark ages to where it is today. It was an impossible feat but this man did it. Pride was the only way for the captain and any other to describe him. A black and grey beard, which was neatly cut, covered the king's face and his black curls hung over his forehead from under his gold helm. “What is it you wish to ask Lucifer?” asked the king in a more casual voice. “Sire, I don't think it is wise to pursue this group of enemy's across the river Frail...” The captain hesitated. “If that is the task you wish undertake?” This question was followed by an awkward silence that the captain was intimated by. “Forgive me if those weren't your intensions my lord?” the captain quickly added. A smile appeared on the king's face that made his facial lines deeper. “No need to apologise my old friend, no need at all. Yes, that is the course I am willing to take Lucifer, you must have thoughts on the matter Lucifer? Tell me please but if you can keep it short I would be grateful. And please call me by my name, you are my dearest friend after all.” Replied the king. “Yes I do s...Tullerise. I think that we should not be too hasty in rushing in to this, Sire, this situation, because it could be an ambush or a trap even, we should at least consider it. After-all it is enemy territory.” The smile didn't disappear off Tullerise's face, either did the lines. “A wise statement my friend but it falls to short of the stick at this moment in time. My friend I do not doubt you but take a look at our army, the pride, I am sure we can abolish anything that gets in our way with that alone, and trust me they will not dare do that. We are seven hundred or so, men strong. And we must have decapitated nearly over six hundred hollow ones. And I feel...alive again because for the first time we got those disgusting being on the run. On the run, us. My friend the tides have turned in our favour and I will not let this event slip out of my reach. We want to kill as many dead as we can so I ask you Lucifer, will you follow a pride struck king into battle of ten maybe twelve hollow ones?” The king said with his smile still intact on his face. “I stick with my king no matter what, sire I will.” Replied the captain. “Excellent, we will talk more when we arrive at the castle victorious, over a feast celebrating this army and good will.” The king's smile disappeared as his golden mask fell over his face once more. He turned his stead around to face his followers. Galloping a couple of paces towards them, he then came to a halt. His horse started to jump up on his hind legs and she started neighing. The king trust his sword up once more. “The wait has weathered away, let us go and fight for our victory!” roared the king followed by the cheers and blood lusting roars of his army. The king straightened his stallion up and began to gallop towards the other side of the river followed by the thundering noise of feet and hoofs that but the sound of the rain to shame. Across the river a dark figure stood on top of a small hill, watching the bogs below and other things. He wore jet-black armour from collar to toe. He also bore a black scabbard in which rested a brown handled sword. Suddenly he broke the stare and glanced on to a small group of people or something else coming towards him. They were being lead by a sole being. The followers were moving left and right in an unorganised group. A stench of death and rotting flesh filled the mysterious man's nose. The man took a long deliberate sniff of the stench. His eyes widened and an evil smile appeared on his weather beaten face. He made a noise of satisfaction under his breath. As the group of dead reached the foot of the hill, the leader turned and said something, which could not heard over the clattering of the rain. The dead started to move about awkwardly and then they moved to form a line In front of the hill, facing in the direction of the river Frail. The leader looked up at the mysterious man on the hill and he started to walk to him, his short rusted sword dangled from his left hand. As he got closer the mysterious man could make out the leaders face. It was a horrible site for a mere moral to set eyes on but it did not affect this man. The leader's face was wet and was falling apart. An empty eye socket was to be seen on the left side of his face and its face looked badly bruised and swollen. It made an inhuman sound, a sound of pain. As it got to the top and beside the mysterious man it pulled an awkward half smile that extend up his left cheek, or what looked like his cheek. “I am here master.” It groaned. “Good, are they following?' asked the man without looking at his servant. There was an intentioned short silence between the master and servant. The silence was filled with a stampeding noise in the background. “Yessss.” Replied the leader. Which was followed by a cold snigger from the man. “Good, it's amazing what your kind can do with your brain intact.” Said the man in a deep tone. The leader pulled a puzzled face that opened a fresh scare on his forehead. “Ah, a great day for a battle, I can feel it in my bones. Everything is going to plan,” Said the man with a deep laugh. “Is the others in pos..pos-,” the leader tried to say. “Yes they are in position and ready to be awakened, but it is not for you to worry on those complex situations. And what did I tell you about big words you fool. Your brain will rot quicker at the pace you're going with those big words.” Said the man angrily. The leaders face was expressionless. “Go and join your group you waste of space, GO!” shouted the man. The decaying leader turned and descended down the hill to the other dead. Tweet
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