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NC2 - Hobbit Ribbon (standard:other, 933 words) | |||
Author: Freya Griffin | Added: Jun 24 2005 | Views/Reads: 3298/2222 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
The latest member of the Ribbon Family adopted by Jack | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story “It eats vegetables, and we have plenty in the backyard. Dad can help me build the cage, I already have the design.” “Steven says if the rabbit gets sick, we could go to the vet and have it checked. Snow was a bit sick last week, but he's ok now.” And finally, “I can get one from Steven's cousin, because she has five rabbits now and she's giving three away. So can I please, please, please, have a pet rabbit?” After a horrendous repetition every single day for almost a month, Jack succeeded in showing his determination and will power, and finally had his first bunny rabbit. After a serious effort of thought, the rabbit was named Hobbit and is considered to be part of the family, hence Hobbit Ribbon. It was not as cute as Snow. The rabbit was brownish grey and had the wild urges to kick and scratch whenever Jack tried to hold and cuddle it. The boy was obviously disappointed. The Ribbons were sure Jack would give up after a week of the bunny's rejection of Jack's TLC. Three weeks later, the Ribbons first discovered Jack's ability to tame small mammals. The rabbit now recognized Jack's voice, knew its name, responded when called and hopping to approach. Jack even planned on giving Hobbit some kind of a leash and bring it for a walk in the neighborhood. One morning the cage was found empty and no rabbit was visible in the vicinity. There's a hole in the cage, and another hole dug out of the Ribbons backyard fence. Father suspected some wild animals had come to claim a yummy dinner as it was only natural. Jack was very brokenhearted; he swore he would never want another pet rabbit for the rest of his life. Upon returning from their grandparents that summer, Jack thought it would be neat to have a parakeet or a canary, just like Nana did. Tweet
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