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The Hidden Land (standard:fantasy, 689 words) | |||
Author: P.D. Brown | Added: May 13 2005 | Views/Reads: 3391/2245 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This is a journey not to be forgotton! But what happens next. Feedback most welcome! | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story "Your name is now...King." Sadida spoke walking and gazing at his new companion. King strolled over to Sadida's side and remained walking with him until their journey was complete. Gondolian was not happy about King being with them, he feared that King was going to eat them up for dinner that night. "O.k. O.k.! Everyone halt! I want to know what it is we are meant to be doing and I want answers now." He shouted with all his vocal cord in one breath. Princess Frannia stepped forward a few steps leaving Bammbushka's side. "What is it you want to know?" She asked. "We have been sent on a quest but what sort we are seeking none of us know." Gondolian mentioned. "That piece of information I cannot delve into." Princess Frannia quipped back rather sharply. "Anything else you want to know kind sir." "Yes there is!" Bammbushka stammered. "How can I help you." Frannia responded back. "Who are you?" Bammbushka asked out bluntly. "All will be revealed. Now let's get on before it gets too dark." Princess frannia remained walking as the boys look on in amazement. Tweet
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