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The Whisper (standard:humor, 997 words) | |||
Author: BritGirl | Added: Mar 10 2005 | Views/Reads: 3591/2236 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A bit of fluff about a talking statue! | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story Danny's sleeve. “Danny,” he whispered, “I have something really important to tell you.” Danny wasn't listening. He had spotted Sophie, perusing the crime section. This was his chance. There was no doubt in his mind that the statue had intended immediate action on his part. He turned to Tim. “Do you believe in magic?” he asked, solemnly. Tim blinked. “Er...well I suppose so.” “So do I,” said Danny, his eyes shining. He strode purposefully over to Sophie, ignoring Tim's desperate whispers after him. Sophie looked up as he approached. She smiled shyly again. Danny's heart swelled. “Sophie,” he began grandly and then dropped his voice to a whisper as a chorus of ‘sshhhh' sounded all around him. “Sophie,” he whispered, “I love you. You are my moon and stars. All my planets circle around you and my flower can only blossom in your sunshine. Will you be my girlfriend?” He smiled with satisfaction as he finished. He was rather proud of that little speech. Sophie was gazing at him in amazement. “Um...,” she stammered, looking rather desperate, “that's very nice but...well...you see...I already have a boyfriend.” Danny felt himself shrink by at least a foot. “What?” Sophie was looking over his shoulder. Danny turned and saw Tim standing there shuffling his feet. He looked back at Sophie. Surely not? “Him?” he squawked, in disbelief. “That's what I was trying to tell you,” muttered Tim. * Danny stood outside and glowered at the statue. He had been lied to. The statue had played a cruel and humiliating trick upon him. His face burned. He had poured out his heart only to have it crushed between Tim's ginger hands. The statue of the girl whispering to her friend remained as if nothing had happened. “The least you could do is apologise!” he cried, indignantly. He ignored the curious looks passer-bys were giving him. The statue of the girl shrugged. Danny wasn't even surprised. He glared balefully at her and stalked off. Girls! They were nothing but trouble! He was never going to look at another one ever again. Tweet
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