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HOLMLAND SECURITY (standard:Satire, 1052 words) | |||
Author: Gavin J. Carr | Added: Feb 23 2005 | Views/Reads: 3891/2421 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
It all started with Agnes Richmond. She was a nice old gal. One of the more sprightly residents, always ready to lend a hand. But one September morning, just before craft time, she was found in her apartment, beaten half to death, her room turned upsid | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story She shook her finger at us, as though we were a bunch of naughty children. “The Administrators want what's best for you, they've only got your interests in mind. And I'll tell you something else. There's going to be more changes around here. It would be best if you all co-operated instead of argued. Think of the community, instead of yourselves for a change!” She stormed off leaving us hanging our heads, half in anger, half in shame. MacClusky was right. There were more changes. First it was bars on the windows. Then, holes drilled in each of our doors. It got so you couldn't walk in the complex without feeling that a dozen, washed-out, rheumy eyes were watching you from their peepholes. But that was all right. It was all in the name of safety. Of security. It came to a head a few weeks later. I was walking the corridor – the only exercise I got now that I couldn't go outside – when I heard crying coming from the day room. I went in and there was Hazel, sitting at the games table, her head on her arms as she sobbed. “What's going on?” I asked. The other residents' worried faces peered back at me. There was a growing tension in the room as though a storm were brewing. Hazel lifted her head. A Scrabble piece – the letter ‘W' – was stuck to her cheek. “Oh, Mike. They've changed the rules again,” she said. “They say that I can't get visitors anymore. They won't allow my Tom or Linda to come and see me!” She brushed the Scrabble piece away and gave her nose a blow with a crumpled hanky. “Visitors are only allowed twice a year now. And by appointment only!” I stood there and trembled with indignation. “They've gone too far,” I said. “We've got to do something about this! Who's with me?” I looked around the room and saw that the others were nodding in agreement. We took hold of one of the chairs that littered the day room. It was heavy and awkward, but there were plenty of people willing to lend a hand. “Come on,” I shouted. We half ran, half stumbled to the picture window, using the chair as a battering ram. There was a crash as the glass caved in. Outside I could see a woman walking her dog. She looked up at us, her jaw slack with surprise as a dozen pensioners leaned through the bars and shouted at her. The monkeys were running the zoo. Too much Holmland security would do that to you. THE END. Tweet
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