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What's in a Dream? (standard:fantasy, 1579 words) | |||
Author: Wacko | Added: Jan 17 2001 | Views/Reads: 3594/2136 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This is a short unfinished story I've been working on. It's a group of reoccurring dreams I've had, but the blank spots are filled in. This is my first, so if anyone reads it, pleast vote.Feedback is mandatory. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story dried leaves were piled knee deep on the forest floor. I began to walk toward the only light source I could see. Off in the night somewhere, was a single window, with a single point of light shining from it. The leaves around my legs roared like a raging river at every step. All around me, creatures of the night gave away their location by moving through the leaves. “Craaaaack.” I whirled around to see what had snapped the branch. An enormous bear was towering over me, just inches away. I took off as fast as I could for the dot of light. Up one hill I raced, then another. I thought I would never make it. Then I realized it was my house I was running to. My back porch had never looked so inviting. Dashing up the stairs, I turned the corner and opened the back door. Safe at last. The house was as it usually was; a little clutter here and there, and the antique bottles sitting in their places on the beams. The house was strangely absent of any dogs, but they must have been somewhere with my mom. As I headed in to my room, I happened to glance out the front window. A very strong feeling of deja vu washed over me as I noticed the freshly graded limestone road in front of the house. “Wasn’t I just out there a minute ago?” I thought to myself, but quickly dismissed the idea. I turned down the hall to my room, and opened the door. Sunlight was streaming through the open screened windows. The fresh smell of spring drifted in on a gentle breeze. I looked to find everything as I had left it, whenever I had left it. The posters were all in the right place. My bed was in the correct spot. Even my clothes were hung neatly in the closet. Something just wasn’t right though. I looked to the east wall and saw what was different: a hole had been cut next to the window. At first I was mad, then after I thought about it, it was OK. It was just another window, but with a better view of the creek. I lay down at the head of my bed to look outside. It was very blurry so I turned to lie by the window. As I got to the end of my bed, I came face to face with the bear. “Ahhhhhhhhh!! Help,” I yelled, but no one could hear me. I fell to the floor, and curled up in a ball, trembling. Knowing the pain would come; I winced as I felt a tap on my shoulder. “Umm, excuse me man. You umm, like, dropped these,” the bear announced, sounding just like the dude, from The Big Labowski. Opening one eye, I could see the bear holding my black and gray ADIDAS. “Please don’t eat me,” I whimpered. “Monkeys don’t, umm, eat people man,” the bear answered very mater-of-factly. “You’re not a monkey though. If you hadn’t noticed, you’re a bear, and a very big one at that.” “Umm, man, I am to a monkey,” he whined. “I’m umm, just a little over weight.” “Ok, I’ll prove it to you. What do monkeys eat?” I asked. “Umm, bananas, I suppose,” he answered hesitantly. “And do you like bananas?” “Yes, umm, very much so,” he answered without hesitation this time. “Then that must mean...Wait a minute, you like bananas?” I blinked startled at the bears answer. “Umm, yes?” I blinked again to find the bear had sprouted a tail, and was suddenly the size of a real monkey. My eyes blurred and suddenly there was a real live monkey sitting on my bed. Eee eee, ooo ooo. “I knew monkeys couldn’t talk,” I thought to myself. Then it darted for the hole in my wall. Where’s it going? I don’t know, but I’ve got to get it. I lunged for the monkey’s long tail, but it was through the opening before I could reach him. “Darn it,” I exclaimed. “Here little monkey. C’mon, I won’t hurt you,” I said as I crawled though the hole. I got out on the ledge and looked down. Panic took over. My room was no longer on the ground floor. It had to be miles above everything. What’s going on?! I was now holding on for dear life. What do I do?! Then the monkey appeared above me. But as I reached for it’s tail, my foot slipped and I began to fall. A blinding white light bathed my body. What’s going to happen to me? I was no longer scared as I plummeted toward an earth that strangely wasn’t getting any closer. As my fall continued, I noticed other things falling as well. Some things that I would normally think were strange. But since I was falling nowhere, not much seemed strange to me. I fell past a rubber duck, toy cars, and even a shoe. Other things, much larger things, (they must have been larger, because they were whizzing toward the earth even faster than I was) like silverware, soup, and elephants. I think I even noticed a delicious homemade apple pie out of the corner of my eye. I love pie. All-of-a-sudden a strange feeling came over me. I turned over to look for the ground. It was only feet away. “Nooooooooo,” I snapped up in my seat. What a dream. That was so weird. “Another caucasian Gary.” “Sure thing dude.” The Big Labowski was blaring on the T.V. “What a great movie,” I thought to myself. As I got up to get a drink, I glanced out our north facing picture window. The moon was as bright as ever. “What was that?” I asked myself. “I could have sworn the moon just blinked at me. That was just a dream, wasn’t it?” Tweet
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