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The Caretaker (standard:science fiction, 1131 words) | |||
Author: Brian Cross | Added: Feb 11 2005 | Views/Reads: 4430/2729 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A long time ago an amulet was left by a traveller. Now, two thousand years later he comes to retrieve it. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story nose and unsmiling mouth. A face disturbingly short of being human as I waited, expecting those eyes to blink. And then the heat became so intense I thought it might scald my hand. I became aware of a long shadow stretching along the path towards me and looked up into the face engrained on the amulet. I staggered back in alarm before from somewhere came an incomprehensible stab of recognition. The vision before me, I can only describe it as that, wore a spangled vest and trousers of dazzling white, and seemed of exceptional height. The coastal path had been oddly deserted and I suddenly felt encapsulated in a bubble that held me fast. The tight, straight mouth I stared into never opened but words flooded into me just the same, strange alien words that seemed to hang in the air and translate slowly inside me, hollow, floating on a whispering wind. ‘Do not be afraid, I mean you no harm, but you hold something in your hand that I lost a long time ago.' I was frozen with fear, too frightened to speak and yet, seemed to be speaking just the same. ‘From the worried depths of your mind you ask me how long – two thousand years my friend is the answer you seek. Be calm, your fear is leaving you. What you now hold has called me from long and far, many light years have passed during my journey to collect it.' The figure's spangled vest rustled and the wind whispered music through my body as I felt myself relieved of my burden; within it the voice spoke again, ‘When the time is right I will return once more and you will reap full reward for what you have done. That time approaches, it is almost at hand. Look to your body if you need faith, for you my friend are the caretaker.' The coastal path was vibrant with joggers and hikers, the stranger had gone. The whole thing might never have happened – I'd never seen the men with the metal detectors before, I never did again. But engrained in the palm of my hand if you were to examine it really closely is the face of the stranger. It is true. I am the caretaker. Tweet
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