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Jimmy (standard:mystery, 1386 words) [1/3] show all parts | |||
Author: lowelldam | Updated: Jan 14 2005 | Views/Reads: 3787/2493 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A story about a serial killer with a slight twist to it | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story leaving the dead kitten behind him, leaving its memory behind him too. Jimmy walked into his small apartment and his mother immediatly started to scream at him. He was late and she was worried. Then she noticed his hand. It hadn't stopped bleeding and it was leaving a puddle on the floor. She started screaming more mumbling about how he was going to bleed to death. Jimmy stood there listening but not really hearing, he was starting to black out. The room was spinning, his mother was spinning and screaming. "I am going to bleed to death." he said as he drifted off and fell to the floor. He is in a pool now but it is not filled with water but with blood. "My blood." he thought. Then he sees a man standing above him. The man is holding something long and sharp. He tries to swim away but he isn't fast enough. He screams as the sharp object enters his arm. He sees HIS BLOOD spurting out. He sinks down into the pool trying to escape from the man. The blood starts to fill his mouth. He tries to spit it out. He doesn't want to drink his own blood. He doesn't want to drown in it either. "Bleed to death" keeps running through his head. "I will not bleed to death today." he screams as he sinks to the bottom of the pool. There at the bottom is the kitten, it looks at him and turns away. "It's not my blood." he screams. He is suddenly quite thirsty and opens his mouth to start drinking. The pool is empty except for the kitten by the drain. He walks over to the kitten and lifts his leg one more time, bringing it down on the kitten again. The pool fills up with blood one more time. There is a smile on Jimmy's face. Jimmy wakes up to see his mother talking to a doctor. He looks down at his arm which is burning in pain. It is bandaged up so he can't see how bad it is. He sees a needle in his arm hooked up to an IV that is running into it. The fluid is red. BLOOD. He looked up at the top of the bag. More BLOOD. He smiled and tries to sit up. The doctor turns as he is doing this. "Whoa there big fella, just lay back down there and rest. You had a rough couple of hours there. You had your mother worried sick." the doctor told him. "But you'll be alright just as long as you get some rest." Tweet
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