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Family Brawl (standard:drama, 3739 words) | |||
Author: goofykat | Added: Dec 27 2004 | Views/Reads: 3448/2369 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This is a short story about a disfunctional family that can't get together to enjoy a special event without fighting. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story early July. Because of past experience with her and money, I understood where her, Mom's hostility was coming from. Her favorite son was finally seeing how she uses people to pay her way and how she took them for granted and treated them like crap. That is one thing you cannot do to Mom if you want to stay on good terms with her. With Patrick telling Mom that he wasn't going to pay half her bills anymore, she became like a spoiled girl who was use to getting whatever she wanted and if she threw a big enough tantrum she would get her way. Patrick is the type of person that if he decides on something, it takes just short of an act of God for him to change his mind no matter if he was wrong or not. He is one person that can hold a grudge against someone for years. Patrick and Kim's wedding was a small, intimate wedding. They were married in a Baptist church in town. There were no more than 40 guests in attendance. After the ceremony, we paraded around town to the VFW hall where the reception was to take place. The hall had wood paneling with two large areas and a kitchen off to the side. The hall was decorated with blue streamers and white tablecloths covering the tables. The entrance area was set up with tables piled high with wedding gifts. On the left side of the room was several tables pushed together to form one large table along the wall where the wedding party was seated. The far room was a large area with approximately six tables on each side of the room. In the back corner was a dance floor and to the right of the dance floor was an area for the DJ to play. To the right of the first room was a small kitchen area where the food was prepared in a buffet style arrangement. The reception was going well despite the fact that Mom was visibly upset about something. She didn't smile and it didn't look as if she was enjoying herself. I kept my distance because I didn't want to give her a chance to disrupt the party and thought she might if I attempted to find out what was going on. The reception was uneventful until Mom and Kenny, the middle son, told me that my sister was on the phone and wanted to talk to me. Reluctantly I picked up the phone to find out what she wanted. She asked how the wedding and the reception went/is going. I told it that the wedding went well and the reception was going well. She wanted to come to the wedding but Patrick didn't want her there and she didn't understand why. I didn't know what she wanted me to do about it. Then she asked if she could bring the afghan that she crocheted for there wedding. I told her that I didn't think that was a good idea seeing how Patrick didn't want her there and asked that she take them to Mom's house later. After a few more minutes of dealing with her self-pity for not being invited I returned to the party. Not even an hour later, Mom told me that Patricia was at the door wanting to come in and that I needed to go talk to her to find out what she wanted. When I got to the door, she was in tears and told me how unfair it was that she and Darren wasn't invited. She told me that she was there to give them the afghan and she was going to leave. I told her that I would take them and that she needed to leave so Patrick wouldn't be upset. "It is his wedding day and it doesn't need to be disrupted with you coming in no matter what your intentions are," I told her and she left. I went back to the party and gave the gifts to Kim and told her they were from Patricia. Shortly after Patricia's visit, I saw Patrick and Mom arguing and asked Kim what was going on. Kim told me that Mom, Libby, accused Patrick of starting trouble because he told Kenny that his son was hitting my son and wouldn't stop. Kenny then disciplined his son and Libby didn't think that Patrick had any right to tell Kenny. I walked up to see if there was anything I could do but by then Patrick told Libby to get out, you are no longer wanted here. Mom grabbed her grandchildren, which she saw were only Kenny's children and left. The DJ started playing music and again and Patrick worked on getting back into the festivities by dancing. The remainder of the reception went reasonably well and everyone had a good time. When the VFW hall closed and kicked us out, we moved the party to the motel's courtyard and continued until about two the next morning. Rooms were available for those who couldn't or didn't want to drive home. Majority of the guests lived in Cahokia, Illinois, which was a good two to two and a half hours away. The following morning when I went up to the house, I could tell that Mom was still upset about what happened at the reception. I again question staying there and was given a reprieve when Patrick and Kim invited us to their house in Cahokia. It was there that Kim and I were talking and the reason behind Mom's attitude came to light. Kim told me that Patrick told Libby that come next month, August, he wasn't going to be paying some of the bills such as the satellite, electricity, and the gas. She would have to pay those. "I wish I had known about this before we came up. I've been trying to figure out what her problem was and now I know. There is one thing that I had learned from Mom and that was not to take any money from her regardless on the source or what it was far. Patrick has been paying for two households and then some because she lives above her means. There is no reason for her to depend on Patrick to pay for everything when she is the only one living in the house and she is working. That is what happened to me. I stopped giving her money and that is why she takes everything out on me. She has no use for me. I don't exist to her and never will unless I start giving her money," I said to Kim. "She has been telling Patrick that I'm making him stop giving her money and it isn't the case. Patrick finally sees that all she wants and cares for is money and how she could get someone to pay her way." Randy and I stayed at Patrick's visiting, going to the zoo, and barbecuing until the day of Mom's graduation. We got back to Clarksville just in time to clean up, dress and drive to Troy, Missouri which was a half an hour to an hour drive. Troy was a big town of about 1300 people. Big compared to the other some farming communities in the area. Troy had two grocery store franchises, a Wal-Mart, a couple motels and several restaurants. It was like the town to be in. The graduation was held at the Presbyterian Church in the center of town. The building was a large structure. It was built of brick. You walk into a large foyer area where there were a double wooded door leading to the congregation gathered. To the right of the foyer were stairs leading to the balcony and to the left was a hall that took you to other rooms and a staircase leading to the basement. Red carpet covered the floor in the foyer and the congregation area. In the auditorium, there was a slight decline leading to the stage. There were three columns of fifteen pews. There were two steps to the stage and another two steps leading to three rows of seat behind the podium where the minister gave his sermon. The graduates of about fifteen ladies filed in from the foyer, up the steps to the choir seats. The speaker started talking about the accomplishments and sacrifices they made in receiving their diplomas. Then the speaker started calling out their names and they stepped down the steps to the floor, walked in front of the stage where their caps were pinned on their heads, came around to the right side of the stage to retrieve their diplomas and up the steps to their seats. When the last person was seated, the speaker concluded the ceremony and thanked all of the support that the family and friends gave them throughout their studies. The speaker announced that refreshments were available in the other room. The graduates were the first to file out of the auditorium followed by their family and friends. Randy, Kim, and I walked into the foyer and saw Patrick and Darren arguing about an engine that Patrick wanted Darren to get out of a vehicle that was parked at the house. Darren was angrily responding to Patrick's request when he brought up not being invited to the wedding. Patrick, staying remarkably calm at this point, told him that he had until the end of the week to get the engine. Darren proceeded to tell Patrick how upset and hurt he was and that Patrick needed to leave him alone before he made him. Darren started daring Patrick to hit him and threatening to kick his ass. We attempted to keep them separated and to diffuse the matter. "Calm down, Patrick is just asking you a question," Randy said to Darren. "Come on, let's go. I'll take all of you on. It doesn't matter to me," Darren piped out. "I don't care if this is a church. Come on hit me. You chicken." "Go you sissy. I'll take you on any day," Darren said. An off duty officer asked if she could help when Darren called her a pig and that he wasn't scared of any of us. So she called for assistance. Darren was unrelenting in wanting to start a fight with Patrick. When the other officer showed up, he escorted the two brothers out of the building and in separate areas so he could take their statements. A few minutes later, I saw Patricia talking to the police saying how it was Patrick antagonizing Darren into a fight. When she was done and walked away, I called her over to where Randy and I was and asked what she was doing. "Why are you getting involved? It has nothing to do with you." "Someone has to put Patrick in his place," was her response and walked off. The next thing I knew, Patrick and Kim left the scene and Mom walked up to Randy and I asking what was going on. We tried telling her what we saw and heard and that Patrick was only asking Darren a question when he, Darren, blew it out of proportion. "I guess you are on his side," she finished. "No, we aren't on anyone side," I responded. "We'll see," she said and walked over to Darren. "That's it. We can't stay with her anymore. We need to find somewhere else to go. I can't stay with her another night or we will get into it and it won't be pretty," I told Randy. "They better not leave us here. I hope they know I don't know my way back to the highway. I could get us back from there." Just then I saw everyone getting in his or her cars, "Let's go," I said to Randy. We managed to find our way back to Clarksville before everyone else. The house was dark so we went to the motel in town to see if Patrick and Kim were there. They hadn't gotten back so we went next door to the gas station to get something to eat when they pulled up. "Just to let you know," Randy started, "We aren't on anyone's side. We are staying out of it. This is a fight between you and Darren." "Thank you for staying out of it. What happened after we left?" Patrick asked. Randy told him what occurred and finished with Mom's statement about seeing which side we were on. "We told her we wasn't getting involved. She didn't want to hear any of it." After a few minutes of talking, we saw Mom drive by heading toward the house. "I wonder who is in the car with her," I asked. I guess we need to see what is going on," Randy said. "All I know is that we are not staying there tonight," Kat responded. "You could come stay with us if you need to," Patrick stated nonchalantly. "Like that would help our cause," Randy jokingly replied. "No, I think that if we leave we will head back home." Just then the sheriff pulled up next to Patrick. "I guess it is time for us to go. You ready?" "As ready as I'll ever be," I said with a smirk. When we got up to the house, we walked into the dining room. There was so much hostility in the house that all I wanted to do was pack our belongings and get out of there. As you walk in the door, you walk into the dining room and Darren was in the kitchen to the right and Mom was in the living room to the left. Across the room on the left was a bedroom where we stayed. Randy went outside to gather his tools in case we left and I went to the bedroom with every intention of not wanting to talk to anyone and stay to myself. No sooner than I got into the room, Mom walked in to ask whose side I was on. "We are not on anyone's side. We were talking to Patrick because no one was here and we couldn't get in," I told her. "Well you need to pick a side. If you're not with me, you are against me." At that she walked out. Not wanting to be disturbed, I tried to close the door but Darren wouldn't let me claiming that he wanted to make sure I didn't steal anything. I walked away and went back to the packing. At that time, Randy came in and told me we were leaving. "I know. That is what I'm doing. I'm getting our things together." He told me to finish up quickly that he was going out to put his tools in the trunk. A few minutes later, I saw Patrick and the sheriff walk toward the living room. I continued to get our things together when the next thing I knew Mom came into the room upset about something and said, "I hope you're happy. Your brother just kicked me out. I don't know where I'm going to go." "I'm sorry to here that. You will find a place to stay," I replied. "I don't know how you will get a hold of me." "You have my phone number. Give me a call once you've settled in," I said as calmly and understanding as I could possibly mustered. "Not anymore I don't." "Wait a minute, what are you saying." "Because you are on his side, I no longer have anything to say to you." "Hold it. Be careful what you say if you don't mean it. Because I'm only giving you this one chance to not go down this path," I warned. "I don't care." "That's it. You will never see me or hear from me ever again." "Fine. I don't care." "Don't let me hear from anyone that you are asking about me." Before I was able to turn and walk away, she slapped me. Without thinking, I swung back and knocked off her glasses. The next thing I knew was someone pulling her off of me while someone held me back. After a few more "I hate you", "I never want to see you again", Randy came in and told me to go directly to the car. "Go directly to the car. Don't talk to anyone. Don't even look at them. I'll finish up her and bring them out." On my way out, I saw a cake that said Happy Birthday Kathy and Congratulations Libby on the edge of the dining table. On impulse I picked the cake up and hurled it toward Mom saying, "Here's your cake. Enjoy!" When Randy climbed in the driver's seat he asked if I was okay as tears streamed down my cheeks. "I will be. I knew something was going to happen but didn't know what or when. I've already mourned the loss of my mother. Now is the time to grieve her death. She is dead to me. I no longer have a mother." Before leaving town, we went to the motel to repack our luggage and tell Patrick what happened. Once the car was repacked, without looking back, we headed back to North Carolina. Tweet
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