Of Love and Revenge .. (standard:romance, 1475 words)
Author: Cryptic Writings	Added: Nov 03 2004	Views/Reads: 5873/2595	Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Rejected by the girl he loves, he commits suicide .. then comes back in the form of a devil for revenge.. you're gonna like this one ..

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but the hole totally disappeared .. 

Here it is .. the place I used to work at .. I entered from the front
door .. went up stairs .. and headed to her office .. here she is 
sitting at her desk and busy with her work .. I stood at the door and 
looked at her .. she raised her head and suddenly saw me .. she 
screamed and lost her conscience .. the two girls in her room rushed to 
her as well as the other employees and woke her up using some perfume 
.. they asked her what was wrong and she said : 

- “I saw him .. I saw him .. he was looking at me and I could feel a
strange rancor in his look..” 

-“Oh don't be silly .. he's dead.. you seem to be exhausted.. you better
take the rest of the day off..” 

Next day I came back .. 

I stood by her door and starred at her .. when she saw me she got
terrified and screamed .. I approached to her and said : 

- “What's the matter ?? are you afraid from me ??” 

- “Go away .. Leave me alone .. Go away .. oh God !” 

And when she said “God” I felt pain in my body and unwillingly ran away
and never felt better until I was very far away from there .. 

I kept on showing up to her for a whole week .. in her dreams, in her
home , in her office , everywhere she went I was there watching her .. 
one day I showed up at her office .. she was so pale and she had some 
grey color in her hair  .. the revenge moment is so soon .. I shall 
soon complete my mission and rest in peace .. I kept on showing up to 
her every once in a while till finally I went to her office but I 
didn't find her .. I found an old and ugly lady instead of her .. 
“Could she be her ?” I wondered .. did I finally achieved my revenge ?? 
would she die now when I get closer to her and touch her ??” I showed 
her myself but suddenly I felt an unbearable pain started in my head 
and spread all over my body .. then I found her entering the room with 
sadness expressions appearing on her face  .. and tears flowing out of 
her eyes .. 

-“Finally you're out of my life forever .. I went to a wizard that told
me that the only way to get rid of you is letting any other one to see 
you .. so I played this trick on you and made you think that I'm 
getting older with that white powder on my hair and that pale on my 
face and finally that old woman I brought to sit in my office.. why did 
you do that ? why did you commit suicide why ??? you was such a great 
person with great love that I appreciate and respect a lot .. you 
ruined your life and was going to ruin my life too ..” 

- “STOP! PLEASE ..... SSSSS ... TOPPPPP” I said with that pain ..
“You're torturing me with that .. I Love you .. I Love you .. I Love 
you .. ” but I was melting and a hole opened in the floor and I fell 
deep inside it .. . . . 

I woke up .. 

Oh god .. that was the worst nightmare I ever had in my life .. 

I smiled .. 


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