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MESSAGE (standard:mystery, 3617 words) | |||
Author: Arunoday | Added: Oct 21 2004 | Views/Reads: 3865/2684 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A story of mysterious 'SMS'es | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story Frank was gone!!Arun was speechless and could hardly believe what he just read on the computer.It seemed so unbelievable,he had met Frank in the morning and now within a few hours he was reading this. Days went by,but Arun could not get over this incident. As for Caroll,it was like getting punished for a crime which she had not committed.She was depressed beyond anyone's imagination.Life seemed to have have stopped for her. Today after almost one month of Frank's death,Arun was out for a ride on his bike and he noticed somebody!!!! .Sumantai Joshi. “Arey Kaku how are you ? It's almost after a year that we are meeting.How is Chivda?” “Arey you don't know or what ? He is the U.S. for the past one year”---Sumantai Joshi. That night Arun could not sleep,his mind was going through all that happened a month ago.He was replaying that incident again and again in his mind.And suddenly his face went pale!!!!!!!If Chivda was in the U.S. how could he message me from a local number? What happened to Frank could have happened to me also. It was my luck that I did not board the train,but I did get a message preventing me from boarding the train. If it was not Chivda then WHO WAS IT????????? Arun thought over again and again,but was totally clueless.That phone number was unknown to him,nor did he try to find out whose number it could have been.More-ever cellular phone technology was not that advanced,that one could message another using a landline phone. It took him days,but he forgot that incidence,thinking it to be a coincidence. Life had normalized a bit after Freddy's death.Arun was almost over it by now.Today was an important day,for everybody at Arun's office.Today was the marriage of Hetal Desai,the only daughter of Mr.Maganlal Desai, Arun's boss. Mr.Desai loved his daughter very much, so much so that he did not oppose ( ? ) her marrying somebody who was younger than her by 3 years. This guy who was still completing his graduation fell in love with Hetal at a management class where they both were students. He did not have a job.His father had retired and he had a younger sister who was still a college student. Even if it made no difference to him Arun wondered,what Hetal must have seen in that guy,who according to Arun was a total loser in life. He might hit big time in future, but then at the moment Arun felt he was not the right person for Hetal. There were doctors and engineers lined up for Hetal,who was a tall girl with a dusky complexion ( not much of a gujarati though ),but carried herself with elegance, pure elegance. She could have had anybody for her, but what women want is a big mystery and it will always be. The marriage was grand. It had to be. The rumour doing the round was that it was almost a KHOKHA ( a crore rupees ) which Mr. Desai had spent. “ Peanuts!! is what he pays us”, thought Arun. The food was traditional Gujarati and Maharashtrian ( the groom was Maharashtrian. ).It was delicious. After the main course, came the sweets. All sorts of sweets. Rasagullas, Jilebis , Halwas, so on and so forth. You name the sweet and you have it, but the hit that day was the basundi!!. Basundi was something Arun was fond of. He could have second and third helpings of basundi , even on a full tummy. He simply could not resist it. But that day it seems luck had it otherwise. By the time he reached the counter of Basundi, the last bowl was left. He thought he was lucky enough to get that atleast. Arun lifted the bowl. He was going to have the first sip, then.......BEEP! BEEP!! BEEP! BEEP!!,a message!! . Juggling the Basundi bowl in the left hand, Arun carefully removed his phone. “ DON'T HAVE THE BASUNDI ”, read the message. Arun scrolled for the number. 263819012!!! . Arun was furious with the person who had sent it. He chose to ignore that. No power in the world was going to stop Arun from eating his favourite dish. Just as he was bringing the spoon near to his lips, he was almost rendered of balance by the fat Mrs. Chadhdha . She was desperately searching her son ( read “ devil” according to Arun ) Balwinder, fondly called as Bobo. She found him finally, hiding below the table where Basundi was kept, but in that attempt she had done something which she was not supposed to!!. The heavy push by Mrs. Chadhdha had toppled Arun's bowl of Basundi and had almost instantaneously upset his mood too. “ I wish this devil falls sick” was what Arun said when Bobo was caught below the table eating Basundi. Arun's dream of eating a big vessel full of Basundi was broken by a phone call of Joanne. The “BABE” in his office, for most,but not for him. Arun answered the call with anger evident in his voice. “ Arun, how are you this morning? ,Are you fine ? Do you have any idea what happened last night ?”. Joanne had fired questions at Arun. Her voice was clearly worried. “ I am fine. Whats gonna happen to me? Came home late last night and slept. Why what happened ? Why are you sounding so scared?”. What Arun heard thereafter was shocking, simply shocking. There was a mishap at the party last night. People who had sweets had reported sick, immediately after they got home. Most of them were admitted at private nursing homes with complaints of vomiting within hours of having the food. It was a clear case of food poisoning. A few people were reported to be critical, and were in the Intensive Care Unit of a local hospital, run by Dr. Raval. And to Arun's horror, it was Bobo who was fighting for his life in the I.C.U. Arun felt guilty for thinking ,for what he thought the night before.He now prayed desperately, for Bobo's life. Investigation was ordered in the food poisoning incident. All this while Arun kept wondering of one thing. It was him who also had consumed the same food. Then why was he so lucky ? The investigation report was out. It turned out that the food was fine and so were the sweets, but the Basundi. Yes!! Basundi it was!! Arun replayed all the happenings in his mind which took place that fateful night. Basundi becoming a hit with the crowd, Arun getting the last bowl, the accidental push and toppling off of Arun's bowl, Bobo getting caught.................. Things seemed to be falling in place and the jigsaw puzzle was almost solved, but for one piece.......................THE MESSAGE!!!!!!!!! Arun remembered vividly about the message. His ignoring it and going on with eating the Basundi. Had it not been the small push from Mrs. Chadhdha, he could have met with the same fate as that of the others. It can't be coincidence again, thought Arun. There was somebody who was trying to help him, save him rather, from a possible DEATH!!!! But who was it ? Arun was a new age guy. He was not particularly god fearing, nor totally against praying as well ( take for instance Bobo's incidence ). But this was something different. He did not believe in miracles and the supernatural. Somebody helping him,saving his life and in the manner in which it was done, was purely fictional. Arun was becoming restless day by day. He had to figure it out, that who was being so grateful to him. He somehow did not know how and where to start. He went through the message ‘n' number of times and then the idea struck him. The phone number could be traced to the owner. How stupid of him that he could not think of this earlier. Arun was a total computer geek. He frequented the cyber café for his mails most of the time and for watching the ‘other' stuff even more frequently ( come on we all are humans!!!) .But today was different. He was at the café for a reason. He opened the telephone company's site and entered the number 263819012, in the blank space which offered addresses for the numbers entered. Major Bhaskarrao Khandoba Bhosale ( retd.) , “SANDHYA—CHHAYA” Dahanukar Wadi, Kandivali, Mumbai. It was Sunday and Arun was standing outside “SANDHYA—CHHAYA” the bungalow of Major Bhosale. It was a rare sight to see bungalows in a crowded place like Mumbai. That too Kandivali was a fast growing suburb so every piece of land was highly priced. The main gate was locked. A board lay hanging there, “ DANGEROUS BUILDING. TO BE EVACUATED IMMEDIATELY. By order.” “Who are you looking for Mr.?” , an old voice broke Arun's trance.It was Dinkar Anna,the care taker of the bungalow. About 5 feet 2 inches tall,65 yr “Anna” as he was fondly and rather respectfully called had a story of his own.Wife Sunanda had died of tuberculosis 2 years ago and his only son was a drunkyard with no job.To add fuel in the fire,his daughter-in- law Alka wanted the old man to DIE .The reason? Well in a 100 sqft shanty how many people can you expect to live happily? That too in a place like Mumbai ,there is nothing like love or relations.The only thing which rules is a FIGHT. A fight for supremacy,a fight for EXISTENCE. “Major Bhosale ikadech rahtaat naa?” (Arun asked Anna in Marathi,which was his mother tongue,that ‘Does Major Bhosale live there?') “Naahi” (No) was the reply from Anna. “Then who stays here?”---Arun. “Nobody”----Anna. How can that be possible? Thought Arun.If nobody lives here then how come I got a message from a number registered on this address. “Are you sure nobody stays here?”----Arun. “ Hoy Saaheb, I am serving the Bhosale's for 20 years now. This bungalow is closed for the last one year ,nobody lives here anymore.”---Anna.” “Very fine then,where have they shifted?”----Arun. On this question,suddenly Anna's old,tired eyes welled up,his wrinkled face became sad all of a sudden. Arun realized that he should not have asked that question. “Last year Major Bhosale and his only daughter Shamita,had been to the United States. Shamita had got admission in M.Tech at the Harvards.They were so happy then. But nature had something else in her mind. Their return flight to India met with an accident.” Suddenly Arun remembered the news he had read last year, about the crash of an Air-India plane in the Arabian Sea. All the passengers and crew had died.Most bodies were recovered ,but some went missing in the sea. “That is bad,but then what about the bodies?”---Arun. “Major Saheb was found by the coast guards but baby was not found”---Anna. “I know one thing that God can not be so harsh to that young motherless child ( Shamita's mother had died soon after giving her birth and Major Bhosale had not remarried). She is still alive some-where and one day she will come home”----Anna could now barely see Arun as he was weeping by now. “One more thing I will tell you, she was a college champion in swimming,when she was in Bandodkar. How on earth can she drown? Tell me?” Arun was speechless. He had come here to find who was the unknown messager and here another story had unfolded. “So who lives here now?, any relatives of the Bhosales?”--- Arun . “No, nobody lives here anymore. This was as it is a government bungalow. I have heard that this land and bungalow has been sold to Maganlal Chajjed,famous builder for development.It is time before it will be razed.”--- Anna said this and went.He did not even bother to ask Arun why he had come there. That night,on bed Arun was going through all which the old man had told him earlier in the day. He was going through all details again and again and trying to figure out how he could be connected to this. That's when something struck him like a lightening. “Swimmimg Champion” in Bandodkar College. Shamita.................. Yes it had to be her!! What a coincidence!!! Arun remembered vividly about Roll no 7----- Bhosale Shamita Bhaskarrao. The champ of the college and Arun's headache!!!!!!! The year was 1997. Arun was in college then. He was never a ‘hunk' kind of a guy. 5 feet 6 tall, paunchy Arun was still a darling of the class all because of his intelligence. But girls used to die for that one cute smile of his. It all started on the day of “Makar Sankraant” when Shamita approached Arun. “I have made “Tiil Gool” for you ( Tiil Gool is a sweet which Maharashtrians make on the day of Makar Sankraant)” . Arun stood there as a stupid person, knowing not what to say. “Have it”--- Shamita. Arun knew for sure that if he had not taken that Tiil Gool from her that day,she would have bursted into tears. He took it and for the remaining years in college,he wondered why on earth did he TAKE IT ?,for after that day,Shamita would come to talk to Arun for apparently trivial reasons.It was evident from her behaviour that she was in love with him.Though words were never spoken, that silence of Shamita spoke a million words,which Arun had very well understood,but he always showed as if he was totally unaware of this. That year was the most important year of his college life and getting involved would have meant,an injustice done to his career. More-ever Arun felt that he was too young for all those things then. Years in college went by as if some minutes had gone by. The farewell day arrived. All were wishing each other good luck and a prosperous future. Many were crying, many were on the verge of. Even Shamita was crying when she spoke with Arun. Arun knew looking at her that those tears of her were not because they were separating but because she could never tell him how much she loved him and more so that Arun never realized that. Atleast she felt so, but the truth was otherwise. Arun was thinking about Shamita all that night. We all go to college ,make new friends ( a few enemies as well ) play together, laugh and cry.Fight and patch up and do what not,but then once we leave those confines of our class,do we really meet those friends or for that matter those enemies, thought Arun. For many days thereafter Arun tried to establish some link between those messages on his cell phone and the number from where they were coming. Nothing seem to make sense. First and foremost,the messages were coming from a landline. The technology was not so advanced that SMSes could be send from government landline phones to private cell phones,atleast not in that part of the world where Arun lived.Secondly the place where the phone was registered was, un-inhabited for quite a period now. Finally the most puzzling thing was that the only person Arun knew in that house was missing ( Arun disliked the word ‘dead' because Shamita's body was never found ). All these questions had no answers atleast not that Arun could have found. But one thing was for sure, that not once, twice or thrice but on numerous occasions the messages kept on coming and in a way saved Arun time and again from possible dangerous life threatening situations or shall we say POSSIBLE DEATH. Arun was also very much aware of this fact,but his new age ‘scientific brain' was not ready to accept this. However somewhere deep down inside,when-ever he was alone a thought would cross his mind, “ Could it be Shamita ?” “Could it be her un-expressed love?” “But how on earth was this possible,Shamita was ..............?” thought Arun. Today was yet another day, like the day before. Arun was the usual mess. Hurrying for his routine local, his regular one ‘9.05 Mumbai fast'. Barely had an hour past after Arun left ,the door-bell rang. Mr. Patil the landlord opened the door. The police were standing at the door. “ Arun Pophale ikadech rahatat kaa ?” ( Does Mr. Arun Pophale stay here?) police inspector Sawant asked. “Ho, kaa kaay jhala ?” ( Yes, why what happened) replied Mr. Patil. What followed thereafter was nothing short of a catastrophe for Mr. Patil, for whom Arun was no less than his own son. The local in which Arun was traveling had, had a head-on collision with another local. It was a signal failure, so said the railway officials. 35 died on spot,many were injured. 5 were critical and Arun was one amongst those 5!!!!!! Arun had suffered multiple fractures, a head trauma had rendered him stupurous. He was in the Intensive Care Unit ( I.C.U.) when Mr. Patil saw him. A fresh pint of A+ve blood was started for Arun. The intensivists were trying their level best to save Arun's life. His blood pressure was falling inspite of 3 pints of blood. He had lost a lot of blood. Mr. Patil could not stand that sight.The next 24 hours were critical for Arun. “Kaka, kaka” ( Uncle,uncle)...Arun. Mr. Patil rushed near his bed .” Kaay jhaala Arun?” ( What happened Arun ?)....Mr. Patil. “Maajha phone baghaa,konaacha message aalay kaa to baghaa?” ( See my phone, see whether any message has come ) These were the last words of Arun before he slipped into coma. Mr. Patil did not follow why Arun had asked him to see for any message. He got the phone from Inspector Sawant,who had Arun's other belongings as well. Mr.Patil went to the INBOX folder and found NO NEW MESSAGES there. Major Bhosale's bungalow was demolished that same day at 9.35 am!!!!!!!!!!! Tweet
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