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The Missing Candle that was very special (standard:other, 1032 words) | |||
Author: VannaD | Added: Aug 21 2004 | Views/Reads: 3147/2027 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A children's party goes dramatically and horribly wrong | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story The smoke filled air got into everyone¡¦s eyes and throat. No one, who was there, would smell toast burning without remembering that terrible night. When Andrew came out to the kitchen to fill the drinks up again. He looked out of the window and he saw a structure of fire, he said to himself, as he went out to help put the fire out, ¡§I¡¦m sure that was the old pub, well it isn¡¦t any more.¡¨ As soon as he opened the door his eyes started running and he was coughing. When Vicki saw Andrew running to the fire, she went to get Lauren, and Matt, to tell everyone that there was a fire, in the old pub. When Lauren and Matt told everyone that there was a fire in the old pub, everyone panicked, and looked out the window. Lauren went after her Dad to help him put the fire out. The flames of the burning building reflected in Lauren eyes lighting them in multi-colours of red and yellow. They both grabbed buckets of water and threw it on. When the fire truck came, everyone was told to stop and leave it to the firemen. The next morning, Lauren was upset because her party was ruined because of the fire. The firemen were looking for anything that caused the fire or if anyone was hurt. They saw the gold candle, with know burns on it and it wasn¡¦t melted. It looks like it was bran knew. Andrew went to the fire to ask them what caused the fire. The firemen said, ¡§We don¡¦t know what caused the fire, but we did find this candle with no burns on it, and it wasn¡¦t melted, it was just like brand knew¡¨ ¡§That¡¦s odd,¡¨ said Andrew. ¡§I¡¦m sure my wife said her Dad had the same candle as this.¡¨ ¡§Here, you keep it and show it to you¡¦re wife.¡¨ The fireman said. ¡§Thank you.¡¨ said Andrew. So then Andrew took the candle back to his wife, and Vicki said ¡§That was my Dads candle, it was very special because, it was magical. It was called, THE CANDLE THAT WAS VERY SPECIAL.¡¨ Tweet
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