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The Missing Candle that was very special (standard:other, 1032 words)
Author: VannaDAdded: Aug 21 2004Views/Reads: 3147/2027Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
A children's party goes dramatically and horribly wrong
 



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The smoke filled air got into everyone¡¦s eyes and throat.  No one, who
was there, would smell toast burning without remembering that terrible 
night.  When Andrew came out to the kitchen to fill the drinks up 
again. He looked out of the window and he saw a structure of fire, he 
said to himself, as he went out to help put the fire out,  ¡§I¡¦m sure 
that was the old pub, well it isn¡¦t any more.¡¨  As soon as he opened 
the door his eyes started running and he was coughing. 

When Vicki saw Andrew running to the fire, she went to get Lauren, and
Matt, to tell everyone that there was a fire, in the old pub. 

When Lauren and Matt told everyone that there was a fire in the old pub,
everyone panicked, and looked out the window. Lauren went after her Dad 
to help him put the fire out. 

The flames of the burning building reflected in Lauren eyes lighting
them in multi-colours of red and yellow. They both grabbed buckets of 
water and threw it on. When the fire truck came, everyone was told to 
stop and leave it to the firemen. 

The next morning, Lauren was upset because her party was ruined because
of the fire. The firemen were looking for anything that caused the fire 
or if anyone was hurt. They saw the gold candle, with know burns on it 
and it wasn¡¦t melted. It looks like it was bran knew. 

Andrew went to the fire to ask them what caused the fire. 

The firemen said, ¡§We don¡¦t know what caused the fire, but we did find
this candle with no burns on it, and it wasn¡¦t melted, it was just 
like brand knew¡¨ 

¡§That¡¦s odd,¡¨ said Andrew. ¡§I¡¦m sure my wife said her Dad had the
same candle as this.¡¨ 

¡§Here, you keep it and show it to you¡¦re wife.¡¨ The fireman said. 

¡§Thank you.¡¨ said Andrew. 

So then Andrew took the candle back to his wife, and Vicki said ¡§That
was my Dads candle, it was very special because, it was magical. It was 
called, THE CANDLE THAT WAS VERY SPECIAL.¡¨ 


   


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