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Neverending story (standard:Suspense, 1163 words) | |||
Author: veraelaine | Added: May 09 2004 | Views/Reads: 3822/2326 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Someone is trying to save his sister from a life of prostitution. There is only one way to do this-kill the pimp. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story positions. Just as Moses uttered the command of 'ready', from the somewhere on the roof, he heard, "Moses, baby." Reflex made him look up in time for the hollow-point that hit Alma first, knocking her back into Moses, causing the surprised women to scatter and causing Moses to draw his gun, while screaming. Too late-rapid fire tore into his back, through his chest making him look like ground hamburger. As the ladies crowded around, someone shouted, "Ladies, you can continue to follow a dead Moses or the Living God." More shots rang out and everyone scattered, leaving the dead child (Moses was 17 and his oldest guard, Alma, was 21) dead. (Rest in peace.) Tina and Louise were cowering in the alley, down the street from the shooting scene. As they spoke about Alma's death, Tina handed Louise some of the cash she snatched from Moses' body. In barely audible whispers, she told Louise that once they were sure Moses was dead the 'guards' tried to pick him clean of cash, jewelry, and anything else they could grab. As they parted company, Louise (16) wondered how her family would react to her home-coming. The only one happy to see her was her brother, Al (25). While having coffee one morning she told him of her back-to-school plans and he asked her to leave her time with Moses as just a bad memory. She was still trying to discover how he knew Moses' name as her brother boarded his bus back to college, promising to write. Two months later, Louise read a letter from Al who was visiting friends in Virginia, when she heard a news flash about a pimp found in the streets, dead with one bullet to the forehead, the neck, the chest, the stomach, and to the one area most men don't want hurt. NEVER ENDING STORY? THE END Tweet
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