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She (standard:romance, 1483 words) | |||
Author: Derek Heath | Added: Apr 15 2004 | Views/Reads: 3666/2401 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A man's first love - but he loses her... | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story be with her all the time. Their first time out together, he drove them out to a pub in the country. It was another beautiful day, much like the day he'd first seen her. The sky was a cloudless, deep, azure blue and the golden sun was beating down through the open sunroof. As he hoped, the pub was pretty busy, and he saw plenty of people look at the two of them, as he drove slowly through the car park and nosed the car into a vacant space. He went into the bar, while she sat outside, basking in the warm sun. The barman had seen him leave her. 'You're a very lucky man,' he said as he was serving. 'My first was very much like that.' 'You wouldn't believe how many people have said that!' 'You know, I wish I'd never let her go really,' remarked the barman, wistfully. 'A lot of people have said that too!' With that, he paid and went back outside, to see that she was attracting approving glances from a couple of lads, who looked no more than fourteen or so, young enough to be his sons. They stayed for a couple of hours. He could tell that people were looking but trying not to look, and he was sure that some of the men there wished that she was theirs. For two wonderful years, it was like that. If he was down, she cheered him up. No matter what was on his mind or weighing on his shoulders, just ten minutes with her, the two of them alone, with some music on the radio, and all was right with the world. They went everywhere together. They still attended the events that she had appeared at before, and whenever they did, people admired them together, and he knew that men wanted her, some had even told him so, but she'd always come home with him. And to now. And it was all over. She had been taken from him. He had been at work, and he had left at his normal time to meet her. She was always there, had been every day for the time they had been together, and always in the same spot. On this particular Thursday, it was raining heavily and his day had started badly and got steadily worse, so he really couldn't wait to see her. They were going to go out tonight and he knew, that just by seeing her, he would instantly feel like the luckiest man on Earth. He turned the corner and she wasn't there. He was shocked. She had to be there. He did a double-take. He looked up and down the street, frantically searching, hoping to catch a glimpse of her, but he couldn't see any clue. Where was she? He was rooted to the spot now, for what seemed an age, but was probably only seconds. One of his colleagues came past. 'Are you OK?' 'She's not here. She's always here. Why isn't she here?' 'Where is she?' His colleague knew how much she meant to him. Sometimes, it seemed that she was his only topic of conversation, and it would destroy him if he'd lost her forever. 'I don't know. She should be here...' 'Come on, we'll hunt around. I'll get my car.' 'Yeah. Yeah, thanks,' he muttered, distractedly. His colleague ran up the road and a couple of minutes later, returned with his car. They drove around for two or three hours, searching everywhere they could think of. There was no sign of her. 'I think we should go to the police,' his colleague said. 'Maybe you're right. Maybe they've seen her, or someone else has and told them.' The policeman on the desk took a form out of a tray and picked up his biro. 'OK', he said. 'Let's take some details.' 'She's a 1966 Rover P6 2000TC, in Zircon blue, with a parchment leather interior, wire wheels and a full-length sunroof. I left her there just before 8.30 this morning and went in to work...' Tweet
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