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Sleepe After Toyle (standard:drama, 872 words) | |||
Author: James C. Bernthal | Added: Mar 17 2004 | Views/Reads: 4046/2254 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Told from the perspective of a murdered man. It's a bit strange, really. I am experimenting genres - Please leave feedback! | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story although I had never felt that before. The work has been strenuous. There is one last thing to do. With only one shot left in the revolver, there is no chance to miss. Wait! I have to tell my husband. I'll write him a note. Of course, I killed him, didn't I? Still, one should tell some one. I'll write a note anyway. Why did I bury myself under the floorboards? There seems no point now that it's nearly all over. I hold the revolver to my head. My hands are still shaking. I have never done this before. Of course I haven't. I never will again. Unless... I pull the trigger. But it is not so reassuring now. My head is exploding. Exploding like a volcano erupting. I know that is so, but I can't feel it. I fall once again to the floor. ********************************************** I am back in that curious room. But I am not alone. Emma is here. She looks more beautiful now than ever. She is looking at me, and her smile is tyrannical. It is inviting, radiant as the Sun... To coin a phrase. I love Emma. And I know she loves me. When you will kill and let yourself be killed, all down to one person, no matter who they are, you know you love them. We are advancing towards each other, but we both stop. Something, an invisible hand, is pulling us back. No! I have to see Emma! But that voice is starting again. The soundless voice I have come to fear yet trust. Do you want to go back...? No! I could never leave Emma. Our life was turmoil, but we can have the perfect death. Together. We are alone in our room. This place is nothing to fear. It is paradise. And the mysterious being has gone. THE END Tweet
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