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Until That One (standard:other, 4876 words) | |||
Author: Jeremy Jones | Added: Feb 07 2004 | Views/Reads: 3247/2221 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
After 30 years of marriage and a wife in a coma, Jeff discovers a secret that will forever change his view of life. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story He had returned home after staying in the hospital for two weeks, but the nights were restless and the days nightmares. After the third night of attempted sleep a phone call rang that would stick in his mind, the results of his wife's condition didn't hold any joyful news. Although they were always aware of her being highly allergic to a herb, the results indicated that his wife had somehow managed to encounter it, causing her to lapse into a deadly coma. The words stirred Jeff into a frenzy, searching through the house for the contaminating substance. It was upon her desk, inside an innocent looking letter address to his wife that held the answer. The letter appeared to have been hand delivered as there was no return address or postal stamp. Inside the envelope is a letter that speaks of his wife's involvement with a company and of a enquiring to take place regarding an incident several years ago. Holding the letter between his fingers, Jeff noticed that its texture was different. He took the letter to his nose and breathed in its peculiar scent. It was a scent he was familiar with; he had to be for his wife's safety. Reading the letter only revealed more questions, the company was unfamiliar, and even the date was strange, as they had just moved days before that to the place they are now residing. Although Jeff never had anything against the authorities, he knew that this was something he had to uncover for himself; a company his wife had never worked for wanted to kill her for something they assumed she was involved in. Going to the local library, he started to search through volumes looking for the company and its location; the process didn't take long as the company went through a lot of bad press and financial difficulties. It was a robotics corporation, creating house hold robots ranging from carpet cleaners to cooks. His wife never liked robots, and out of respect for her they never owned one, not even own a computer. Coming to an even more interesting fact was that the corporation declared bankruptcy mere weeks after the incident spoke of in the letter. As his search through the volumes continued, he came across the most stunning of information, printed on the screen in front of his eyes was his wife's name. “Head of top project quits” Jeff continued to read through the article, but all it seemed to do was pose more questions. According to the article, his wife had quit after the cancellation of the companies latest project. Further investigation of the project's contents would prove of no use as the documents are still under classification. Jeff's head starting spinning, he quickly left and ventured home trying to sort through the puzzle that was hovering above his head. He had been with his wife since they were very young, how could something so big get past him. Although his memory doesn't serve him contently as it once did, something of this significance would be easily remembered. Jeff sorted through the maze of confusion in his mind, looking for the exit. He questioned the dates of his wife's employment found within the article, noticing that they coincided with his employment of a full time job. Could the possibility of his long hours provide enough space for his wife to lead a double life? A million thoughts were rushing through Jeff's mind. Though why would his wife hide a job from him, how could she work in a robotics centre with such a high disregard to robots? It slowly started to come together for him, missing pieces of his memory came through, with him being in hospital for almost a year due to an accident on the freeway. Something happened at that job that gave his wife a high disregard for robots, and that something was also enough for the company to want to kill her. Awaiting his arrival at the library when he returned for his 4th day was the first letter from the mysterious man. “Walk away, for that which you seek is sure to break you.” Interrogating the clerk was of no use, as the messenger spoke only Jeff's name and nothing more. The note and its message stayed in the back of Jeff's mind as he continued his work, looking for the incident that they spoke of. Searching through the volumes wasn't something that could easily bring attention to anybody, throughout the day Jeff kept both an eye on his screen and around the room looking for anyone that seemed out of place. The sun started to fade and with the day revealing nothing further, his path had disappeared into a dense fog of which nothing could penetrate. When closing down the volumes there came something to his attention, the author of the mysterious letter was standing there, revealing himself only slightly to Jeff's awareness. “You seem persistent, but unaware of the happenings you could reveal. Warnings are a smart way to block the path, they are meant for a reason...” his voice was even more cryptic than the notes he wrote. “My wife is in a coma, I found out she was working for a company that is now trying to kill her, I have no idea why they want to kill her or even why she never told me about this. If you think speaking or writing in mysterious terms would frighten me from seeking the truth you are surely mistaken.” The man edged him to follow going from the library to the dusk filled streets. “What you will find will never be forgotten, for there is peace in both knowing and not knowing, although you elude an attitude that shows no sign of giving up. Search further into this, but look not at a fault but at a reason.” With that the man left, but what stayed behind were his words, words that caused confusion and kept Jeff awake all night. The morning sunset rose above the horizon as a young boy peddled heavily, throwing papers towards each house. Coming up to number 9 the boy hesitates before throwing, during the two years of his paper route Jeff had never missed a day. He threw the paper towards the door, landing on a pile of newspapers, and peddled onwards. Inside, Jeff was still asleep, he couldn't see the point in getting up, as the library never opened until late morning. The door of the library unlocked, the first customer of the day was always the same person. Jeff walked inside and sat himself down, his search would continue. His long sleep provided the answer to the riddle, he searched the articles for the reason his wife quit. It wasn't long before the answer came, but it was unexpected, hitting Jeff harder than any truck could have. Reading over the screen, Jeff's mind funnelled down a kaleidoscope that was spinning in all different directions. Written across the screen was his wife's reason for leaving the company, “Husband's death causes wife to leave head of research”. Thinking back all that time, how could he be dead, he can't be, but then how could his wife have had another husband. Everything started to fade fast, his life started to flash before his eyes, an attempted murder, a fatal accident, another husband... The sound of car horns brought Jeff back to reality, looking up at the green lights he accelerated, pushing the pedal straight down to the floor. He was heading for the big city that was once the robotics capital of the world. It wasn't that long ago that he found out about the deceit his wife had put him through. When searching through the records for the name of the mysteriously dead husband, he came across it. John Gordon, his birth place was of a totally different origin from his own. Along with a cryptic note that relieved his fear of being dead he felt no less at ease from the fact that his wife was with another. “Find the lying place, the towers that reach heaven will ease the pain. You have cleared some fog and walked beyond the forbidden boundaries, turning back now will suffer you only more”. Being with someone for too long only gets you into a relaxed state, where changes are noticed few and far between, Evidence was covered up in the volumes and the only way to uncover it was to resume the search at the height of its tragedy. Driving along the highway, Jeff's mind starts to drift back to the first sight of his wife. He was only 15 when he laid eyes on her for the first time, neither were the most popular at school, but their attraction to each other was undeniable. It only took him an hour to build up enough courage to ask her out, they spent every afternoon together from that day. Her shyness was apparent from the start, but when Jeff would talk her smile was all the reassurance he needed. Their attraction for each other was seamless, and even after a year together Jeff was still unable to keep his eyes off her. They were 18 when they married, money saved from Jeff's part time job gave them a small white chapel. There were no family members, no flower girl, no walking down the aisle with her father. But the uneasy feelings of both parents never made them question their love for each other. They left the next day towards the big city, life was just starting for them. Being married for 30 years was a great achievement for Jeff, but how could she have been with another man, how could she have been unfaithful to someone who loved her with all his heart, how long did this affair last, and the cause of John's death, never revealed to public records? The first piece of the puzzle would be found in the big city, at the resting place of John, a dishonoured marriage, a deceitful job, kicking up the past is never easy, but even when all the bones are uncovered, there's still the job of sorting them out. Driving along the streets, he looked outside and towards the towers that soared beyond the clouds. Jeff always hated the big cities; you were always stuck in traffic, waiting endlessly for lights and pedestrians. Pulling into a dirt road, the cemetery gave him chills all the way down his back; its lush green fields hid the hundreds of bodies departed from this world. Walking through the endless rows of graves, it was nearly impossible to tell which one was that of the man he was searching for. Although there were many people paying their respects, there were two that stood out, leaning down to place flowers on the grave was a little girl with her mother. Jeff stood back as the girl turned around to look him in the face; a smile came over the girl's face. Grabbing the hand of her mother the two walked off into the distance, all the while the girl never looked away. Jeff walked up to the grave, only to be bestowed upon the very one he was looking for. “Here lies John Gordon”. Although nothing else of importance was written, he continued to stare at the grave stone as his mind wandered back to the days of old. “Will you always be there for me baby, even if I am sick and dying” a youthful Jeff was questioning his wife “I'll be there praying day and night by your side, if you shall pass before me I shall take your soul and lock it away with mine”. Taken back by emotion Jeff walked back to the car heading for the nearest motel, his search was over for today. His dreams of the night were of the little girl at the grave, staring at him with her piercing eyes. He awoke very early, searching through the phonebook until he came across the only Gordon listing. With the many questions still unanswered he took note of the address with intentions to survey from a distance. Driving passed the limits of the city, he started passing fields and lush homes that reminded him of his birth town, but the blissful memories were soon interrupted as he was quickly brought back to the present. A black Ute was hitting the back of his car, trying to run him off the road. Not being an experienced driver, Jeff was quickly subdued to the side of the road. Two men quickly jumped out of the Ute running up to pull Jeff out from his car. “Please allow our apology for the rash driving but this is of the utmost importance, we are seeking your wife in connection with stolen property. We recommend you come with us for questioning” While their deepened voices and dark actions felt threatening enough, Jeff was alerted more with the slight revealing of their weapons. Not being of the fighting nature, the possibility of taking on the two seemed very slim, but with all of the recent occurrences his ability to trust anyone was long gone. On agreeing to accompany them, he tried to persuade them to allow him to follow in his own car, although they looked like your typical goons, beefed up with no intelligence, they requested Jeff to get in the back of their vehicle. Stepping up to them with an agreeing nod, he quickly sped his hand to the handle of the gun that was holstered on the belt of the nearest goon, with two quick shots the two men were lying on the ground, newly departed from the world. Jumping into their Ute and speeding off, Jeff's head started rushing with confusion and disbelief, never had he held a gun, let alone kill a person. His foot forced the petal to the floor, the acceleration of the car pushed him back into the seat. He sped through the city heading back to ensure his wife's safety. The rush of a million thoughts ran through Jeff's head, but something brought his attention to the seat beside him. A white slim package laid there, its contents spilled onto the seat. Picking up the photos he saw the familiar faces of him and his wife, he scrambled through the contents and came upon documents labelling out involvements in a theft from a company, the main suspect was his wife. The details of the theft were cryptic, even in the documents, a highly secretive project classified only to the highest of clearance. Questions were asked of whether she was working for a government agency, asking where the latest known whereabouts of the item was. The documents only added to the confusion rushing through Jeff's head, only adding to the pieces of the puzzle. Driving along the road, Jeff searched through the pack for more information, documents that would help make sense of it all. The one file that caught his eye was that of his own, his name in bold letters on the top of the page, and as expected, reading through revealed nothing that Jeff didn't already know. Although 2 words tacked on the end were the ones that interested him the most, “Stole Item.” Although his memory is never what it used to be, he was certain that he had nothing to do with the stealing of any technology. The hole just kept getting deeper only now it was starting to cave in on itself. But where was the file on John? Jeff was sure that he was the missing link to this all, the final piece of the puzzle. So how could they not have a file on him, he was the reason she quit, the person she was having an affair with but it was never mentioned. The biggest piece of the puzzle was missing, and only one person could know where it was. After arriving back at his house, Jeff forgot all about his wife, instead he was stuck in the unravelling mystery of John and who he really was. Once daylight hit, Jeff headed straight for the library, staying there all day awaiting another meeting with the only man who seemed to have the answers. He never came and Jeff was soon asleep on the chair, his mind drifting back. Awaking from his sleep, an attendant informed him that the library was closing; he started to rise from his chair when an envelope fell from his lap onto the floor. He didn't need to open it to know who it was from, walking outside he entered his car, his hands trembled as he slowly opened the letter. Inside were two pieces of paper, one was a note that stated a chilling warning, “This is all the information I know, but think carefully before reading, the details within can never be forgotten”. His eyes were wide open, more than they had ever been, a bitter truth came to him in the form of a letter. He sat in the car reading through, again and again, as if to hope that the words would change, that they would reveal a truth less shattering... Returning to work she slipped in a letter declaring her departure from the corporation, walking down the halls she exited the building of the powerful robotics corporation that had just recently cut the funding of her sector... Going over to her car she opens the boot and smiles, closing it again and heading off to a small town to start anew. For days before that she had already spent a fair bit of her money paying off employees, from the peers of her research sector, to the garbage men who handled the waste. Upon arriving at her destination, she unpacked suitcases and a computer from the trunk of her car, spending day and night without any furniture and only takeaway foods to suppress the hunger. Spending all her time in front of a brightly lit screen typing away with her two hands... Jeff was standing outside the room of his wife; entering the room he breathed a sigh of relief. Still lying there was his beloved wife, it didn't matter that she was still in a coma, all that mattered was that she was safe. “I've been distance from you these past few days, but I have worked out everything, and I still love you, the reasons have become clear and I hope that you can forgive me for leaving you so soon. I just wish I could have changed it, I never took the time to respect you back then, not like I should have, not after all you have done.” Tears had already started to streak down his face, but before he could sit back down a loud buzz entered his ears, looking over at the monitors, the heartbeat sensor was flat lined. With doctors rushing in, the pain of it all took Jeff too far. Collapsing on the floor, he started to relive a memory, something that wasn't supposed to exist. “Will you be there for me baby; even when I am sick and dying” Jeff saw the eyes of his wife look down on him. “I'll be there praying day and night by your side, If you shall pass before me I shall take your soul and lock it away with mine” He saw himself there, lying on a stretch of road, with ambulance and police surrounding him, he was slowly crossing over to the other side.. A highway accident he was unlucky enough to be caught up in. Passing away with the last image of his wife looking over him, she kept her promise to him; she had encased his soul in her hands... Then the words of the letter stuck out at him, the beginning of his new life... Upon arriving at her destination, she unpacked suitcases and a computer from the trunk of her car, spending day and night without any furniture and only takeaway foods to suppress the hunger. Spending all her time in front of a brightly lit screen typing away with her two hands... Beside her, a robot was lying down with protruding cables extending to a computer in front of her. Vigorously typing away day and night, she was transferring a soul, one that was captured from her own hands. The clear blue sky unsuccessfully tries to hide the sorrow of the day, a small group of people dressed in black stand by a coffin as a preacher speaks the word of god. Tears are streaking down the faces; with the exception of a young girl who stands by the coffin, although her memories are of photos and home movies. She was only a baby when she last saw her auntie; it was during a brief stay when her husband had died. But the memories only exist in photos for her. As she looked up from the coffin her eyes locked on a familiar face, a man from family photos was hiding amongst the crowd, his hat tipped down over his face. Although from her height she was able to see his face, this was the third time she had seen this man, the first time was in a wedding photo. A smile graced across the man's face, he mimed the word “Jeff”, the little girl responded whispering “Susie” while the contagious smile wept across her face. She watched as the man slowly walked away, no one had noticed his presence. Jeff wished he was able to say something about his wife, but he knew that no good could come of him revealing himself. The little girl looked up at her mother, her eyes full of curiosity. Her mother leant down to pick up her child, the two locked eyes and the young girl spoke “Will Auntie and Jeff be together now mummy”. The smile continued its journey travelling from the young girl to the mother, “Yes they will sweetie, now how did you know Uncle John's nickname”. The little girl looked towards Jeff as he walked away, “He told me”. Jeff headed away from the newly formed grave, taking one last glance at the one right beside it, his own. As he walked away he began to whisper “We have only been separated by time, I was once a fool and thought even the strong power of love couldn't fix that, but you taught me something different. The past, present and future are all the same, and for that I shall always have you”. A week passes by. Outside of a home once filled with an immense love, a man stands by the front door, taking steps back to have a last glimpse of the house. Locking the front door, he heads towards a campervan parked on the driveway, only to be greeted by a female jogger. “Jeff, it's been too long since we last talked, I just wish I could have said sorry to her. If only she left knowing that I still cared for both of you, and now with you leaving it seems too late to clear the dust. But I want you to leave knowing that if you ever need a helping hand, I'll be there always.” The sympathetic words of the female had landed on deaf ears, Jeff was too busy taking his last look around before leaving his blissful hometown. Travelling away, Jeff's mind once again begins to wander, but now going down a more philosophical path. Life, what is its true meaning, where is the line between reality and fiction. Can only humans experience life and pain, does a robot every truly die? The thoughts slow down to a crawl as a voice beside him attracts his attention. “Have I been asleep all this time? Who was that person you were speaking to before?” Many philosophers theorized if a machine could ever truly love. To Jeff, the answer was always known; it was right beside him all his life. “Just an old friend wishing us good luck with our new life... baby”. Tweet
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