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It Was Christmas Eve (standard:romance, 1065 words) | |||
Author: Patricia | Added: Dec 28 2003 | Views/Reads: 3254/2134 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Christmas Eve and a man is thinking. Set in the late 1800's. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story As it turned out, she had remained virtuous after all, rumour to the contrary, using her sultry looks and innuendo only as a goad to perk my flagging desire out from the doldrums. It seemed that I had been spending far too much time with the concerns of business, not my sweet wifes' needs. That, of course, will change. A knock at the door interrupted my reverie and I rose from my seat at the table to answer it. It was my daughters' pauper, looking decidedly dapper in a morning coat and hat. I invited him in, as a matter of courtesy and because it was Christmas. "I can only stay for a moment, Mr. Templeton," he said, removing his hat. "My carriage is outside and I cannot tarry." This was an odd development, as this man had shown neither drive, ambition nor capital in the entire time I had known him. For him to be dressed in this finery, with a carriage (no less!) was unheard of. "I received a cable from my father last night, inviting me back into the fold, so to speak," he explained. "I have come to collect your daughter so that we can visit with my parents on their estate." My eyebrow rose of it's own accord. Estate? All evidence to the contrary, this man standing before me did not have two shillings to rub together. "He's been bedridden for a number of months and wishes to make peace before he goes to his maker," he said, misinterpreting my expression, "which should be soon, if I'm to judge by the urgency of the message." An inheritance? Could I have mistaken this young man as well? He looked at me with guileless blue eyes. "I intend to marry your daughter, Mr. Templeton," he intoned gravely. "She is a wonderful woman and I will care for her in the style you would wish upon her." "You are well off then," I said, taken aback by his proposal. "Well enough," he said over my shoulder, his gaze distracted by my daughter's appearance on the staircase. I do admit that, all of my prejudice aside, she did look rapturously happy when this man was in the room. I wished them well and whispered that she should make careful note of this estate. Perhaps there could be some business there. I watched as my wife, also looking radiant, clasped my daughter to her bosom in congratulation. Or perhaps the business could wait. It was Christmas. Tweet
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