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Future Shock (standard:science fiction, 1050 words) | |||
Author: pjlawton | Added: Nov 24 2003 | Views/Reads: 3554/2330 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A young woman gets a frightening glance into the future. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story After an excruciatingly slow departure process and three more travel hours later she reached the small Baja fishing village that Jason had talked so much about. This had been his favorite vacation fishing spot. He had often talked about bringing her along but somehow it had never happened. For a few Pesos a day she rented a small bungalow right on the beach. God, it was wonderful. Fresh air and very few people. She had forgotten that places like this still existed. *** The next day's English language paper at the newsstand had bold headlines. ‘Giant Quakes in SoCal. Thousands Dead.' Scooping it up she quickly read the story. Yes, the Mission District had been severely hit with massive casualties and damage. Figures said the dead would be at least 100,000. At first she felt a little sad. All those people were dead. Then realization set in. She was alive! Yes, thousands were dead but she was alive. Joy and happiness were hard to suppress. Quickly she gathered her purchases and light in heart and step headed back to her simple beach sanctuary. How long could she remain here? Forever if need be. She had cleaned out her bank accounts before leaving and with her considerable savings she could live an uncomplicated life here for as long as she wanted. It was great to be alive. Life was especially good for she had cheated Mister Death. *** Two weeks later she was taking her evening stroll along the beach when she saw the daily paper lying in the sand. Disappointed that someone would trash such a lovely spot she stooped to pick it up. Her eyes come across a bold headline. ‘Local Tourist Found Murdered. Stabbed and Left to Die on the Beach.' Oh my, she thought. How terrible, life was to good here to end up that way. Turning the paper over she saw the date. It was dated the next day. A photo of the murdered tourist was printed at the bottom of the page. Unable to take a breath her eyes bulged as a large grimy hand came from behind and covered her nose and mouth. She uttered a silent scream as her legs buckled. It was over in barely a second. She hardly felt any pain as the lethal razor sharp stiletto easily slid between her ribs and firmly and fatally pierced her heart. The last thing she saw as her dying eyes started clouding over was her picture in the crumpled up newspaper. As the pages slipped from her weakened fingers a gentle breeze carried them across the hot burning sand into the bright blue water where they slowly washed out to sea. End Pjlawton1@yahoo.com Tweet
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