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Night Ride (standard:horror, 1487 words) | |||
Author: pjlawton | Added: Sep 15 2003 | Views/Reads: 3656/2397 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A young man walking along a deserted highway accepts a ride from a mysterious stanger. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story we were parked at a roadside store. Looking down the highway I could read a sign that said Memphis 110 miles. I glanced at the old Cadillac's dashboard clock, 2:17 A.M. I couldn't believe that I had slept so long. But, more importantly how had we come so far so fast. A few minutes later we were back on the road. The driver gave me an intense studying look then asked, “Son, are you planning on the music business as a career.” “Mister, I've been playing since I was five years old. I really don't know anything else. In my backpack are about 40 songs that I have written. After Memphis my plan is to go Nashville. With a little luck I will be a star someday.” Abruptly his tone chilled. I felt a thousand goose bumps form as he spoke. “Well, I can see you have yet to learn that the music business is a long hard road, a really hard road. I know. I started out pretty much like you. In fact you remind me of my young self. Sometimes though, you just have to make your own luck.” “You are in the music business? Would I know any of your music? You do look sort of familiar.” His tone was now a little sadder. “Well, let's just say that I was doing pretty well until I made a few bad decisions. Anyway, that was a long time ago. Son, the music business can be like a giant leech. If you are not careful it will suck the lifeblood right out of you. You look like a bright young man. I will give you two little pieces of advice. Well, not exactly advise, more like warnings. Believe me, it comes from first hand experience.” He stopped talking and a sudden stillness came over him like he was reaching for far dark memories. A few seconds later a shiver ran over his body and he continued. “First of all, choose your friends wisely. Many will pretend to be friendly but will take everything they can. Just bleed you till there is nothing left. The second is probably the most important warning I can give. Stay away from booze and drugs.” “Mister, I don't use drugs or booze. I haven't had a drink in over a year.” “That is fine for now. As you get more established in the business, more famous as you say, the pressures will increase daily. Two to three hundred days each year on the road will do that to you. Sometimes it gets so bad that you can't even remember what city you're performing. You can't let that happen. Using the booze and drugs won't help. You just have to do whatever it takes to get by, shorter concert tours, frequent trips home, whatever.” Bitterly, as though talking to himself he continued, “Once the booze and drugs take over, you're finished.” He stopped talking again then after a few seconds his mood lightened and he started humming. I knew that song, I couldn't remember the name but it was right on the tip of my tongue. I started to ask him the name but was too embarrassed. Ninety minutes later we were approaching the lights of a big city. The driver pulled over where the road forked. One fork was to the brightly lit city, the other into the darkness of the country night. He slowly turned to me and in a quiet sad voice said. “Son, this is far as I go. Those lights up ahead, that's Memphis. Oh, one thing to remember, the music business can be a wonderful career. Just be sure that you can control it, if not, it will surely control you. Goodbye son, remember my warnings and good luck to you.” I retrieved my gear, stood by the roadside and said. “Thank you so much mister, I surely do appreciate the ride, and the advice. By the way, will you tell me your name?” “No son, I believe you already know.” With a wave of his hand the driver turned and slowly drove off down the dark country road. In less than a second he and the big dark car vanished. I stared for a few minutes trying to make sense of what had just happened and what I had experienced this night. Finally I turned and began a slow walk toward the bright city lights. Thoughts of the driver's words kept moving through my mind. After a short distance I turned for one last look down the darkened road. Floating through the air on a soft summer breeze I could hear singing in a voice I instantly recognized. It was the song the driver had been humming all night. “Since my baby left me, I've found a new place to dwell. Its down at the end of lonely street, its . . .” End Tweet
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