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The Beckoning (standard:fantasy, 2105 words) | |||
Author: A.C Bunker | Added: Jul 09 2003 | Views/Reads: 3540/2437 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Alessondro and his companion Filipo two elite guards for a shrewd elf king get warped into a unknown world and search for a way home but soon lose vision of returning home in attempt of helping a mysterious girl and her town on the brink of war.. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story thing I stuck my hand out as a sign of peace and asked her name she replied gently "Amy what's your name?" "Alessondro and I don't have a name for the tiger,"she relplied sweetly but firmly "I think its name should be Ryan." I hadn't planned on naming the tiger but I guess Ryan was as good as any name. I found it odd that she didn't seem the slight bit scared of me or the tiger. We talked or she talked I just enjoyed listening to the sweet sound of her voice. She told me all about her village and the surrounding jungle.She informed me on the brooding war between her village and another not so far away. I promised to help defend the people even if they wouldn't accept me. And with that she left me to my thoughts. I awoke the next morning to the smell of fire in the distance; I grabbed what little equipment I had and ran outside the small hut. The fire was off to the east where the villages where now, I started to make my way over in that direction, running through the jungle and jumping over dead trees, swatting at pestering leaves when I suddenly broke into a small clearing. I came face to face with a full grown bear; I took a step back knowing my slim chances fighting a bear in closed quarters and drew my daggers, I began to circle the beast looking for a chance to attack. Before I knew it the animal charged at me and swatted at my head, I rolled to the right right stabbing her leg as I rolled past. I quickly arose to my feet and launched myself onto the bear's backside stabbing my scimitar into the bear's chest, I thought the battle was won but my knowledge on bears was obviously not enough because the bear turned into me causing me to fly backwards into a group of small bushes. As the beast closed in to finish the kill Ryan burst out of the jungle and tackled the bear to the ground tearing his head in two. I climbed to my feet slowly and unsure if I had broken anything, but luck was definitely with me this time, all I had to show of my fight with the bear was two bloody scimitars and a bruise the size of my head on my shoulder. Once again we were on are way to the still burning village, as we arrived I spotted four men with torches standing in front of a burning hut, I ran over with swords drawn and stabbed both of them in the back and ripped up through there heads. I then quickly spun around and at the same time my tiger jumped on top of both the guards knocking them down and put a claw in the back of there heads. I ran through the town putting all the bodies that weren't totally burnt to ashes into a pile. The sky was filled with black smoke and my eyes were burning from either the smoke or the smell of the scorched bodies, probably both. After I was done searching the town and I was pretty sure Amy wasn't among any of the bodies there I continued following the path of destruction that lay before me. I searched town after town always a step behind the chaos, I came finally to a town where battle was still going . The town was at a base of a small cliff and had what looked to be a royal house sitting on top of the cliff. I drew my scimitars and ran to what appeared to be the invading army. I ran to my first victim and cut the hand that was holding the spear and the other sword went between his eyes. I took my scimitar from his face and ran to the next man, he swung at an arch at my head and I blocked the attack with both my daggers and continued the motion with an arch of my own cutting the head clear off his shoulders. This continued until I was positive "Amy's Army" would turn out victorious. I ran up to the palace on top of the cliff and ran through the double doors, as I entered the room I saw traces of blood and body parts splattered across the ceiling and floor. And standing in the middle of the room was a man dressed in a red cloak thrown over one shoulder revealing a shining plate of armor; he wielded a large ax stained crimson from the the blood of the innocent. In a fury I drew my scimitars and ran to slay the slayer. He easily evaded my attack and swung down at my head in an arch, I rolled to the right to avoid the blow and stabbed forward with my scimitar, he swung his ax down and broke my blade in half. I stumbled backwards in shock as he swung down Ryan jumped in over me and bit his calf, the ax fell and sliced Ryan's hind foot clear off. I stammered to my feet and kicked him square in the chest briefly knocking the wind from him causing him to double over giving me a split second to attack but that was time enough for what I had to do. I planted my foot firm on his bent knee and launched myself up over his head sticking the point of my scimitar in his eye and ripped as I spun around his head putting a deep cut from the top of his eye to the back of his neck. I landed on my feet a little behind him and I struck the final blow by grabbing his head and cutting out his adams apple. I collapsed to the ground sicken with grief and exhaustion. From the top of the stairs a little voice erupted "I would like to thank you for all you have done for my people," I looked up and saw Amy's body spiraling towards the ceiling " And I want you two to take care of each other, your meeting was not a coincidence." And with that she was gone from me forever and before I had time to think about what had just taken place I found myself in the middle of a desert with Ryan at my side and a group of men in toga's coming after us........ Tweet
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