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The Staff of the Magi (standard:fantasy, 2172 words) | |||
Author: Alexm | Added: May 11 2003 | Views/Reads: 3400/2270 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A prehistoric tale in which an elderley shaman tells his young protege of an encounter with a fire spirit and how the spirit becomes a reluctant ally | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story audience, the Druid again took up the thread of his narrative: “For several days I crossed the gentler slopes with trepidation, until it began to seem as if my troubles were truly behind me. The ominous, smoke-wreathed crowns were far distant and there, at the lower altitudes, vegetation was lush and food plentiful. Pine, cedar and birch cast long shadows amongst a carpet of fern and lily, orchid and flowering mimosa. Exotic birds there were, in a bewildering diversity of colour and kind. What is more, those climes were shunned by men and much did I appreciate the days spent without fear of hostile encounter, such as plagued my outward journey. Then, one morning, I was awakened by a low rumbling from deep within the bowels of the mountain. Rising swiftly, I was hurled back to the ground as it shook beneath my feet. As I struggled again to stand, there was a mighty roar and the top of the mountain burst asunder – spewing smoke and liquid fire. I envied the flocks of birds as they took flight from the trembling treetops. I began to run as a burning rain fell from the dark and reeking clouds that were rolling down from above. Time and again I fell, but terror hauled me up and pulled me on. With a sound that shook the very sky, great wounds gaped open in the earth and vast tracts of the mountainside slid down them into smoking ruin. Without pausing in my flight, I prayed to the Earth Lords for mercy – though it seemed impossible that they would hear me amongst the chaos and din. Everywhere was aflame and the fire spirits rejoiced amid the destruction. Down the slope they came, their crackling mirth fuelled by anything and everything in their path. Like fountains they poured through rents in the ground. Trees blazed like giant torches as they leaped from branch to branch. Glowing seeds, showered over the heath, yielded fields of flowering orange flame. I was tiring fast, for I was not a young man even then. Beneath me, the mountainside rippled and I was running as if through water. Bearing down on me, I could hear the harsh voices from the furnace and the choking heat of its breath filled my chest. Through the turmoil of my mind, the fire spirits called out to me: “We hunger, we hunger. You cannot escape us. Feed us. Feed us!” At that moment, through the stinging smoke, I spied up ahead a jutting shelf of rock. It was free from flame and appeared to be holding firm amidst the surrounding upheaval. With a final effort, I staggered toward it. Glancing round, I saw that I was close beset. One of the sprites, stronger and more vigorous than his brothers, was almost upon me. “You are mine, feeble one,” he taunted “feel the warmth of my embrace. Feel your blood begin to boil, your bones to crack, your flesh to waste.” His smoking fingers plucking at the hem of my robe, I stumbled out onto the shelf and felt its cool, solid reassurance beneath my blistering feet. I turned to face my pursuer. In his lust for sustenance, he had followed me onto the smooth rock. There was no vegetation here other than a few, dark mosses and already the foolish sprite was beginning to diminish. It was my turn to gloat: “What now, my impetuous friend? Does thy hunger grow even as thy strength wanes?” Though visibly weaker by the moment, his arrogance still smouldered: “I shall singe your beard yet, feeble one” he spat, dancing closer. I merely took a pace backward, easily avoiding his grasp. “I think not.” I replied “Your greed is your undoing this time, I fear.” From that haven in the midst of the burning, I watched as the Gorian dwindled and faded. Upon either side, rivers of molten rock spilled down the thundering mountain and the dying sprite stared in anguish at his brothers who leapt and pranced beyond his reach. Finally, little more than a flicker above the stone at my feet, he began to implore me: “Pity father, for I am doomed. Forgive my hot and hasty words. Permit me not so mean an end, pity father – grant your aid” And I pitied him. Of all the elemental spirits, the Gorians are probably those least endowed with endurance and cunning and, though destructive at times, they are not wilfully evil. They are merely slaves to their own natures - which, I suppose, is something that could be said of all of us. So I offered him my wooden staff and gratefully he clung to the furthest tip. Firmly I warned that if he should attempt to climb the shaft and menace me anew, I would let him fall, to burn out upon the cold stone. Thus we waited on that rocky spur, whilst the fires raged long into the night. By dawn the Earth Gods' fury was spent and a calm had settled over the mountain. As a grey light filtered through the clouds of smoke and ash, I stepped out onto the scorched and blighted earth. “Well, it is over.” I told the fire spirit, who smouldered still at the end of my staff. “Be off and join your brethren, in slumber once again beneath the hill.” Nimbly, my companion descended and hastened over to one of the many jagged fissures that now scarred that place. Before he slipped away however, he turned to me saying: “I shall not forget thy mercy father and, in times to come, I will answer your summons – wherever you may be. By that stick I will know thee!” With that pledge he was gone. I turned my face eastward once again and, picking my way down the shattered hillside, alighted once more upon Ith's unchanging plain.” Finishing his tale, the Druid cast a wistful glance over the moor. “Another thing I'll tell you lad,” he added “I have never been so glad to set foot in this dismal, Godforsaken place as I was that day – of that you may be certain!” Amudan, though much delighted with the story, wore a puzzled frown. “Why, “ he asked “ when it is such a simple matter for you to make fire, do you watch me fumble with flint and tinder until we're passing out from hunger?” “Forgive me!” The Druid arched his brows and spread one long-fingered hand on his narrow chest in mock dismay. “I was not aware that I have been keeping you from more important matters!” Amudan instantly regretted the question and opened his mouth to recant – but his guardian silenced him with a quick gesture. “Believe me when I tell you boy, there is little in this world of more value than the knowledge of fire. I will not always be around to mother you and, like an old fool, spoil you with idle trickery. Now begone and leave me in peace..” The Druid made dismissive motions with one scrawny arm but then, with a grin and a characteristic wink he added: “ ..but don't stray too far and mind your back ere nightfall. The moor is a perilous place after dark.” Stiff from sitting on the damp ground, Amudan stretched his legs with a bounding run, westward, away from the camp. In one hand he clutched a dead branch, gleaned especially from the firewood store. Without slowing, he stripped off the smaller twigs until he had a straight, slender wand – his own flame-stick. The afternoon wore on. Across the deepening skies, birds were flying home to their secluded roosts and upon the plain below, the boy's shadow lengthened in the grass as he leapt and feinted and struck. A wind arose in fitful gusts that bore the kiss of night, but Amudan paid it no mind. He was in another world. A world where the spirits of the wild clawed at him with taloned fingers and he fought valiantly to keep them at bay. Again they came at him and again he drove them back. The flame-stick danced in his hands; showering sparks, spilling rivers of glowing crimson, setting the fields of his imagination alight with lambent flame. Tweet
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