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GONE AGAIN (standard:drama, 1454 words) | |||
Author: DAVID TUMUSIIME | Added: Feb 26 2003 | Views/Reads: 3597/2390 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
story i have just began and really need comment on whether to continue it. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story nine, then thirteen, then seventeen, and in her memory always she's entering this room. Always when she's entering this room she's different. This room is different. She's happy. Then she's sad. She's confused. Then she's heart broken. This room is always changing. At the beginning, her mother is on the green couch, knitting, laughing with Mama Salif. She's entering the room, Salif behind her. Their mothers turn, laughing, to look at them. “Salif, what have you done to Arac?” Mama Salif asks in her deep, gong bell voice and their mothers then laugh heartily, at what she can not tell. I t makes them laugh long and hard. Salif himself smiles embarrassed. She cannot understand why they are all laughing but she is also suddenly overcome by an inexplicable happiness. Every time she enters the room her mother is there and the room is changing. The room is becoming stocked with more and more expensive furniture and it is cooler and cooler after the great heat of the afternoon outside. She's happier and happier and she wants to find her mother and tell her how happy she is but her mother is harder and harder to find in the room. The room is fuller. There are many people in it always. Every time she enters this room she knows she'll find someone in it. Yet every time she enters this room it feels emptier and emptier. One day she enters this room and although there is a party she might be alone in it. This is how she remembers this room. She lived in this house for nine years. Saw this room for 3,285 days. But never did she see until today the French glass doors that led to the patio, that through them you could see the architecturally planned flower beds around the Olympic sized swimming pool constructed in the gomesi- dress shape of Uganda. She had never noticed the circular stone paving in the middle of the gleaming brown varnished floor that clicked as they walked over it. This is where he used to stand when they had a party and he wanted to address their guests. A gold bar railing would be run around it then and a many bulbed chandelier would be fixed overhead in the frescoed marble ceiling. The guests seated around the long King Arthur dinning table would turn respectfully from their food and their conversation to listen. She could not remember these large strange paintings on the walls that showed scenes of bloody combat in dark, green jungles and red and gold skies where silver and black helicopters exploded and circled each other. She could not remember that gigantic full-length portrait of him that glared down from the ceiling at whoever entered this room. Where had all these weird black and brown shrieking masks with slashes of red and yellow paint that hung from the walls come from? The spears and spiked ball chains? She could not remember this. Only the room, and happy afternoons when she was entering it and early mornings when they were all around the long King Arthur dinning table about to take breakfast waiting for him to come and wondering where he would come from. The bedroom upstairs? Or sneakily through the kitchen with surprises for them all? Or with soldiers and cars with scary screaming sirens? “He was not a man,”the tour guide croaks,”all the people who knew him agree. He was a beast!” Arac recoils. “He was a beast?” one of the women asks wide-eyed, as if expecting the tour guide to confirm if he is a beast even in his physical form. “Yes,” the tour guide replies grinning sinisterly, “he was a beast in every way!” A shudder passes through them. He was a beast? She asks herself. He was? Anger carouses through her body. They can say what they want now. He is not here to defend himself. But what about herself? Is she not him because she has some of him in her? Should she tell them he is her father? That she is the forgotten favourite daughter of ex-President-for –life Field Marshal General Idi Amin Dada? That she is still alive? Does she want to tell them? Should she tell them? For twenty-five years she has hidden her identity. It has not been very hard to do. She does not resemble him. She looks like more like her mother. She has her pug nose, her small wide-set eyes, her chubby baby cheeks and face, her long neck graceful like a flamingo's. She has his surprising tall height but her mother had also been very tall. She has his physical strength but her mother had had to be strong to try to leave him. There is one thing she is sure she has that he gave her. She has his heart. She does not forget. She does not forgive. Tweet
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