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THE END OF ALL THINGS GOOD (standard:drama, 2705 words) | |||
Author: Anonymous | Added: Jan 04 2003 | Views/Reads: 3779/2367 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This 3500 word story is about the destruction of the Quincy Quarries outside of Boston for the Big Dig highway project interwined with a challenge to teewnage immortality set in the 1960s. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story as patriots in the struggle to preserve a way of life, for jumping from the Rooftop's cliff into the spring-fed water had been a time-honored rite on the South Shore. Our parents had forbidden us, our teachers had warned us, and the police chased us. Being twelve and a little wild, their collective disapproval was all the encouragement my friends and I needed and on the first warm day of 1964 we climbed Rooftop for our passage from boyhood. While watching the divers of Acapulco on Wide World of Sports, we had boasted, “We can do that." yet now the sheer drop of seventy feet paralyzed us and the older teenagers on the ledge clucked out calls of chicken, until my best friend, Chuckie Manzi, said, "There's five of us, right?" We each nodded meekly and he said, "I'll go first, you're second, then you, you, and you. We yell out Geronimo on the way down. Are you with me?" None of us had come up here to not jump, so we shouted, "Yes." Without warning Chuckie threw himself off the cliff. His cry of Geronimo died with a splash into the water. When he whooped out my name, I ran, until there was nothing under my feet. I plummeted off-balance and smacked into the water, yet I was ready to do it again and the gleam on Chuckie's face told me he with me 100%. With a shriek our friends appeared high overhead seemingly suspended in mid-air before falling like stones. One landed on his side, another on his back, and the third cannonballed into the water. When they broke surface, we howled for joy. We had done it and we did it again and again. As recently as 1999 I had leapt off Rooftop for my nieces and nephews, yet this Fourth of July no one was jumping, for the quarry was clogged telephone poles and Josephine's, where girls swam nude, was buried by a mound of dirt. Gone were the 'lungiefish', the echoing shouts of naked boys, shooting guns at the cliff faces, and drinking beer underage. All of it gone. I wandered to the bridge spanning Brewster's Quarry. Once a terrible emptiness yawed beneath this structure. A deadly drop no one could possibly survive, yet a summer day in 1967 had proved that impossible is just a word used by people unwilling to defy death. In San Francisco hippies were dropping acid, while longhairs in New York demonstrated against the war being fought by boys from the South Shore. Cities were burning all over the US and Asia. None of us at the quarries were old enough to understand the change in the air, for that year the South Shore had a new legend about three boys who acted as one. Donnie, Lee, and Eddie. Their names were on everyone's lips. How they had stopped a fight at the River Club in Mattapan. How they were the best dancers at the Surf Nantasket. That nobody dressed sharper and no one kissed better, but I hadn't seen them, so when I heard they were at Wollaston Beach, I drove my Vespa down to the Clam Shack, where I asked a girl in a bikini, if she had seen Donnie, Lee, and Eddie. Before she could answer, something smacked me in the head and I wheeled around to face six older teenagers in leather jackets and pointy-toed boots. They were 'rats' and hated anyone who dressed like a 'mod'. It was a stupid reason to not like someone, but the biggest one shoved me hard. "Who invited you to this beach? I'll tell you who! No one! Your type ain't wanted here! But now that you're here, we're gonna have some fun." Having been beaten up every day in sixth grade, I had learned that if someone talked about fighting, then he wasn't joking, and I clocked the greaser with my helmet. He collapsed like his bones had been jellied, however his friends immediately ratpacked me in revenge. I ducked, bobbed, and weaved through a medley of punches and kicks, until one blow rocked me in the temple. When I stumbled to the ground, a boot to the ribs knocked the wind out of my lungs. Things were going bad fast, then suddenly the beating stopped and someone helped me to my feet, asking, “Are you all right, kid?" "I think so." My nose was bleeding, but unbroken. Two of my attackers were lifting their fallen friend from the pavement, while the others backed away. The girl in the bikini stood under the arm of a tall, tanned, muscular Italian teen whom I thanked. "Hey, it's nothing." He shrugged with utter cool. "You looked like you could use the help. My name is Donny Lianetti." "D-d-Donny Lianetti?" I was stunned by the miracle of three people becoming one. "Yeah, do I know you?" He squinted like we might have a problem. "No, no, but I've heard a lot about you." "Yeah." "I thought you were three people. You know, Donnie, Lee, and Eddie." I lifted a finger with each name. He laughed and clapped me on the shoulder. “I never heard that before. Donny, Lee, and Eddie. You take care of yourself. Maybe we'll see you around." And we did, though all he ever did was wave from a distance. From someone else this might have been considered an insult, but like everyone else on the South Shore I was happy with any attention Donny Lianetti showed in my direction, especially as Donnie's fame rocketed with a series of swan dives from the quarry cliffs. Each successful plunge reinforced his aura of divinity and everyone figured he would stop at Rooftop, however for the Fourth of July Donny announced a dive from Brewster's rail bridge. For our brave men in uniform. At noon. The Fourth was a warm day and at Eleven O'clock Chuckie and I began the long walk through the woods to the quarries. On the way we greeted kids from other neighborhoods. Everyone had a different tale to tell about Donny. Some of the stories might have been lies, but I proudly retained some bruises to prove my tale was true. By the time we approached the quarries our number neared a hundred and we mounted the rocks to Brewster's rim. The crowd was mostly boys and young men, yet no one could recall seeing so many girls at the quarry before, but then again we had all come here to see Donnie Lianetti demonstrate that teenagers don't die. Peering over the edge, I wasn't so sure, for an uneven wall slanted to the bottom. The water seemed a mile away and I gulped from fear. No one could survive such a dive, yet if anyone could pull this off, it would be Donnie Lianetti, who appeared on the bridge, only wearing cutoff shorts. We clapped wildly and the girls' collective sigh confirmed he was as much their dream date as he was our hero. Raising his arms to quiet us, Donnie spoke with a clear voice echoing off the steep stone, "Thank you all for coming to honor our boys overseas. Now if you don't mind, I'll need a little quiet. You guys ready?" We all looked at each other, but his last sentence had been directed far below to the floating figures acting as his safety crew. It was at this moment that we heard sirens of the police coming to stop Donnie, but they were too late. "He isn't gonna dive, is he?" Chuckie asked. "No way," the greaser beside me said through an exhale of cigarette smoke. “No one's that crazy." He was wrong, for Donnie pushed off from the steel beam, his arms spread like featherless wings. Everyone held their breaths, as his body picked up speed to become an incoming ICBM. Halfway down he must have realized how suicidal it was to dive and tried to correct for a feet-first entry, but he ran out of space. A huge plume exploded from the water and the crowd groaned, for many of us had bellyflopped before, though never from a hundred and fifty feet. "See, I told you he wouldn't dive," the greaser said with a smirk and added, "He chickened out." Normally his comment probably would have started a fight, except everyone's eyes were riveted on the surface, for Donnie had yet to re-appear. His friends frantically clawed to the point of impact and dove under the water. Several seconds later they bobbed up with Donnie. The crowd cheered and our hero raised his hand in triumph. Unfortunately our celebration was cut short by the arrival of the police. Everyone scattered into the woods and seconds later the quarry was as deserted as it would be some thirty-three years later. While Donnie Lianetti and his friends escaped, his name faded from fame, as we turned our worship to Hendrix or Morrison. In 1970 I grew my hair and moved into a collegiate commune in Allston. One morning I was hitchhiking up Commonwealth Avenue and a Cadillac stopped. Even from the backseat I could tell the girl driving was beautiful, though her passenger slouched like he might have OD'ed. Crossing Brighton Avenue he turned around and said, "I know you. You're the guy who thought I was three people." "Donnie?" The god had fallen to earth hard. "What happened?" "What happened?" He laughed. "You must have been there. The day of my great dive. This is the reward I've been living with ever since. Don't get me wrong. I'm not angry or nothing. My father sued Quincy and with the settlement I'm good for life. I can walk sort of and Sheila loves me. We have two kids. So don't say, "Sorry." because I heard enough of them to last a lifetime." After speaking briefly of the old days, Donnie Lianetti settled into his seat with a pained sigh. "Hey, do me a favor and tell Sheila here how good-looking I was." "There was no one better looking." "Thanks, we'll be seeing you around." After I got out of the car, Donnie Lianetti vanished for good. Standing above the empty quarry, I thought about how offended he would have been by the sacrilege to nature being committed by the city of Boston, so that people could drive through a city five minutes faster. Filled with the loss I walked back to Rooftop and stared down at the empty pit, slowly realizing the quarry was not gone. It was still below me. The only thing missing was water. All someone had to do was firebomb the pumps. The water would return and time would flow backwards, so the past became the present, which would always be the future. It sounded crazy, but someone had to do it. If not me, then someone. Until they do, protect those places you love from those who have no respect for anything in this world or else those places will vanish forever and you wouldn't like that. Trust me. I know. And somewhere on the South Shore, so does Donnie Lianetti. Tweet
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