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Nights of Hell (standard:horror, 4683 words) | |||
Author: A.M. Snead | Added: Sep 25 2002 | Views/Reads: 3698/2511 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
When a writer gets trapped within the hellish caverns of his own imagination, he discovers that Hell is not just a place he writes about...but a place that truly exists, whether you believe in it or not. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story "Apparently not." He said. "Now if you will excuse me, I have places to go." "Hell is real, Mr. Vaughn." The nasal tones lowered to a level that sent chills up Richard's spine. He shook it off quickly, refusing to admit that this little man was actually beginning to get to him. "Thanks for the info." "This is not a joke." The formerly unthreatening image the small man radiated like a rancid stench vanished, replaced as quickly by a forceful determination one could not possibly suspect at first sight. "Hell is real and it is waiting for you." "Go to-" Something solid and heavy was suddenly slammed into his chest. The little man's pudgy hand clutched a leather bound book and was pressing it fiercely against him. "It's all in here, Mr. Vaughn. And no one- no one- is immune. Only those covered in the blood will escape the clutches of Hell." "Excuse me?" Richard looked down and realized for the first time that the man had slammed a bible in his chest. This man before him, so determined and undeterred was a tambourine whacker. Richard threw back his head and roared with laughter. Good grief, he'd actually let a bible thumper make him squirm. How many times had he come up against the religious community? Thousands? Somehow this little man had managed to conceal his origins until the last moment. Now, suddenly, nothing he said seemed ominous. The small man drew back in the face of Richard's laughter. He tucked the bible away inside his jacket. What threatening quality he'd managed to summon before had dissipated and now the only threatening thing about the short man was his pasty skin and cheesy suit. "You people never cease to amaze me." Richard sneered. This man had caused him to suffer uncharacteristic emotions, and now all Richard wanted to do was humiliate him to greatest degree. Nobody put Richard Vaughn on the spot, made him squirm, and then just walked away unscathed. No siree. "You and your holier than thou attitudes. You think you got it all figured out, don't you? And you're out to save the rest of us from our wicked ways. Well, I got news for you, you repulsive little parasite. You're the ones in need of saving. You are the true victims. You and your book of fairytales. You're all a joke, don't you realize that? The world does not want your saving grace." He was leaning down, his finger jabbed in the offensive little man's face. The pudgy man backed away as Richard advanced, his vengeance kindled to an immeasurable degree. "There is nothing to be saved from. This Hell you speak of is not a place created by some all powerful god for the bad people. The only hell that truly exists is the one people create for themselves. People like you. You don't like what you see in the world and, instead of trying to make it better, you create Heaven and Hell and convince yourselves that some loving god is going to whisk you away from all this and take you to Heaven where you will reside in eternal bliss." Richard straightened up and sucked in a deep breath, forcing himself to calm. Losing one's poise was as bad for an image as being made to squirm. He met the little man's stare head on, expecting anything but what he saw in his adversary's beady eyes. There was no humiliation, no shame, no fear. No nothing but sympathy. Sympathy. "I truly pity you, Mr. Vaughn." The small man said so softly that the nasal tone had all but vanished. "Though you may not believe the stuff you write...you honestly do believe what you just said. And I find that sad. Not for myself, but for you. My fate is sealed no matter how ferociously you rant at me and try to convince me otherwise. I am here right now, not for my own satisfaction, but for your sake. If you died this moment, you would discover that the Hell I speak of does, in fact, exist. But then it would be too late for you. So all I can do is give you a glimpse of Hell so compelling that you could not forget it in a thousand lifetimes." Something about the repulsive little man changed. Not visibly so much as...what? Richard could not put his finger on it, but he was suddenly assaulted by the desperate need to get away from this man. The vulnerability suddenly shifted from the small man to himself, and vulnerability was his greatest fear, above all else. "You belong in an asylum." Richard's whispered voice shook against his will. He stepped unsteadily around the strange man. Like a viper, the man's hand shot out and clutched Richard's jacket, spinning him back around with a strength that in no way coincided with the appearance of this unfit little man. Richard stumbled, dropping his briefcase and then stepping on it, which only served to throw him more off balance. He swore as he fumbled for support and finally latched onto a metal pole that held up a No Parking sign. "What the hell are you-" The pudgy man held up a single finger that insanely resembled a sausage link, silencing Richard mid-sentence. No one but no one had ever dared such a warning gesture to Richard Vaughn and it enraged him, but he stood motionless, clutching the sign pole and staring at the little man who suddenly seemed more dangerous than one of the creature's in Richard's twisted stories. I am not afraid of this...this man, Richard insisted. This was just the type of freak Richard and his friends had terrorized in high school, and he'd be damned if such a man was going to get the best of him. But Richard could not retaliate. He opened his mouth to cuss him out, but no words came. His arms refused to rise up so he could pummel the little fat shrimp. In fact, he could not move at all. What have you done to me? His mind screamed as panic darkened the edges. The strange little man grinned as if he'd heard the question aloud and thrust his hand against Richard's chest. No, not against his chest but into his chest. Richard gasped as he literally felt that pudgy hand sink through his chest cavity like hot oozing goo and clutch his heart. He could feel the sausage link fingers squeezing the pulsing organ as it struggled to pump effectively beneath the fierce grip. This isn't happening...can't be happening... Richard fought for air, but he couldn't move, couldn't even breathe. The short eerie man moved in closer until his repulsive body was touching Richard's. Get away from me! Don't touch me! A plump arm suddenly encircled Richard's waist and squeezed. Richard gasped- or rather attempted to gasp- as the little man's strength swelled beyond the boundaries of human capability. God help me Richard's mind whispered desperately. He didn't take the time to realize he had just ridiculed the strange little man for even believing in God. Such rational speculations were beyond his ability at the moment. Richard's heart shuddered as the plump, oozy fingers flexed around it. The strength of the little man's squeezing arm was summoning a darkness that began to envelope Richard's mind. I'm going to die, Richard reasoned suddenly. But even as the thought rippled through him, the intense pressure eased slightly. Richard sucked in one deep breath but exhaled as quickly when the pudgy man's entire body softened to the same oozing consistency as his hand, and seeped into Richard's body. Richard's eyes rolled back in his head. It felt as if someone were pouring hot tar through him. He wanted to gag, vomit, something...but his body was again paralyzed as the strange little man became a part of him. He was still standing on the sidewalk, clutching the sign pole when there was no longer any physical evidence of the odd man. Richard stared straight ahead, unable to move, as people passed him by, seemingly oblivious. Had no one just seen what happened? How could they not? Or perhaps it was all just some phenomenal episode in which no fat little man had ever existed. But if so, why couldn't he move? Richard could feel movement, though. But he wasn't moving, he was standing motionless. But no, he wasn't moving. Something inside him was moving. Horror gripped him as he literally felt the creepy little man shifting inside his body, encompassing organs. Oh God! Oh God! HELP ME!! But then there was only blackness and Richard Vaughn, as the world knew him, was never seen again. 2- Richard opened his eyes as the huge hoof of a mammoth horse descended towards his head with crushing force. A strangled cry ripped from him and he threw himself sideways as the gargantuan hoof, smothered in long black course hair, smashed the muddy earth, sinking two inches. Richard looked up with bulging eyes at the rider, clad in black and barely visible against the backdrop of the black and gray swirling sky. The rider's face was concealed beneath a heavy hood, but Richard could feel his eyes on him. Pressing his hands into the thick mud, Richard tried to scoot away. Movement from him threw the giant mammoth of a horse into a rage and it reared up suddenly, the strangest gutteral sound erupting from deep in its chest. Richard gasped as terror gripped him. The sound that emerged from the giant beast was anything but a natural horse sound. As fear paralyzed his body, Richard slowly raised his eyes to the animal's face as it dropped back to the earth. The beast lowered its head until it's flaring nostrils were mere inches from Richard's face. The stench that emitted from the animal's nostrils smelled oddly of brimstone. But it wasn't the smell that horrified Richard. The creature's face resembled that of a horse, but jutting out of its lower jaw were two thick, six inch long tusks. The unnatural beast might have been a twisted conjuration of the painter Boris Vallejo. Afraid to move, afraid to enrage the beast yet again, Richard lay frozen in the cold mud. "Who...who are you?" His whispered voice quaked violently. The rider of the unearthly beast sat motionless, but Richard heard a quiet laugh seep from him. It was as hideous and spine tingling as the sound that had come from the beast, only somehow worse. Suddenly, the rider's arm shot out and Richard saw knarled fingers with jagged claws a moment before the hideous hand sank into his hair and jerked him off the ground against the side of the frightening animal. Darkness swept passed them at a shocking pace as the monster of a horse barreled forward, smashing through the darkness that swelled and pulsed on all sides. Oh God! Oh God- Where AM I!! Hideous, soul-wrenching screams lashed out at Richard Vaughn as his body slammed against the heaving side of the mammoth animal with each forward thrust of its powerful legs. He heard the screams again and realized they were his own. Blood seeped out of his hair and down his face as the thing on the horse creature's back dug its claws into Richard's scalp. Richard clutched at the knarled hand then dropped his bleary stare to the ground beneath. But there was no ground, only darkness, as if the unearthly horse were galloping through a vast sea of blackness. This can't be happening. That little man, he...he hypnotized me, that's what he did, he hypnotized- Richard Vaughn was falling and falling fast. Somewhere in the back of his traumatized mind he realized the strong, clawed hand was no longer clutching him, it had let go. All around him, and even from inside, he heard the frightening creature laughing as he dropped away into blackness. 3- Though he could see nothing but darkness, darkness so thick it seemed to be alive, Richard sensed he was falling through the tunnel of a deep pit. Pit. Why did that word scare him so bad? But he knew, didn't he? He had used that word often in his stories. The pits of Hell. The fiery pits of Satan's lair. The Nights Of Hell series had been chucked full of that little word. How many times had he dropped a poor unfortunate soul into one of those eternal pits? Hundreds? Thousands? And now someone had just dropped him into one. Though this wasn't one of his stories, he still had a pretty good idea what awaited him at the bottom. Horror seized him like an epileptic fit and he clawed at the thick darkness, trying to scream but getting his lungs filled with a smoke so black and thick that it felt like tar each time he opened his mouth. Richard gagged and clenched his teeth to prevent the swelling screams from forcing his mouth open. He could feel heat now. Too much heat. But it wasn't normal heat, like a warm fire on a cold winter's night. No, this heat had fingers, talons, and it reached through the darkness and clawed at his skin, boiling flesh with each rake of a nail. A wrenching scream tore from Richard's bowels, vomiting out of his mouth with a force that fought the invading black smoke. The bottom came suddenly and hard, nearly knocking Richard unconscious as he smashed against its unyielding surface. His face against the hot ground, he sucked for air that didn't seem available. He pressed his shaking hands into the thick, scalding dirt and tried to push himself up, but his body ached and throbbed as if he'd been beaten severely. He sensed movement on all sides, but didn't have the strength to raise his head. "Where...where am I?" He gasped then suffered a fit of coughs that threatened to turn him inside out. A shuffling to his left, then a whispered voice that might have once been human, but now sounded gutteral, animal-like. "Don't you know, Richard Vaughn?" "How...how do you know...my name?" A chuckle that pricked the hair on Richard's arm and at the nape of his neck echoed heavily in the darkness. "You were our guide, Richard." It hissed. "We followed you here." Shaking his head, Richard pushed up on all fours and squinted through the darkness. "I...I don't...understand..." He rasped. "What are you...talking about? What...what is this...place?" "DON'T YOU KNOW!" The sudden force behind the creepy voice knocked Richard over onto his back, and the darkness began to ebb away as the flickering of firelight slowly illuminated his surroundings. Richard whimpered and scooted back, his throat constricting violently. A mangled face stared back at him from the confines of a cage manufactured out of jagged spears of metal. As Richard's eyes focused, he saw that the cage dangled in mid-air over a lake of pulsating fire. The thing inside the cage, once human but not anymore, huddled in a ball in the center of the cage in torment as ugly blisters swelled all over its body, popped, oozing milky puss, only to swell again. The prisoner's face and body was mangled and disfigured from clawing at itself out of unimaginable pain and agony. Nearly all of its lower lip was gone as it, even now, attempted to knaw at what had been chewed away an eternity ago. Drawing his knees to his chest, Richard buried his face in his arms. "Oh God. Oh God. No..." "God can't hear you here." The thing's words tumbled out over its chewed lip and down its chin. "His time for listening to us is over. Look around you...don't you know where you are?" Richard was helpless to raise his face. A sudden gust of flames and heat revealed to him a stark reality that his mind wasn't prepared for. On all sides of him, cages hung in eternal suspension. Thousands, millions, of cages. And in each one, a tortured figure huddled. Richard watched in paralyzing horror as worms seeped out of the cage walls and swirled around the jagged steel. Hideous worms as Richard had never seen before. And on top of each cage perched a scaled, winged creature that grinned back at him in malicious victory. Crawling to his feet with more effort than it had ever taken him to stand, Richard stumbled sideways as his legs threatened to give way beneath him. It was then that he saw just what he had landed on. The piece of ground he stood on was no bigger than five feet in diameter and on all sides, licking flames snaked upward hungrily. He looked desperately upward, but there was only smoldering blackness. We followed you here. You were our guide. Dizziness overwhelming him, Richard dropped to his knees. Though it filled him with revulsion and horror to look at the thing in the first cage, he forced his eyes to meet its stare. "What...what did you mean you followed me here?" The creature raised a blistered, mangled hand to reveal a book clutched in its grip. Richard's eyes bulged. Though the book was nearly beyond recognition, he knew it was his own, written by his own hands. Nights Of Hell. "You opened the door for us." It rasped. "Then led us through." It dropped the book and lunged suddenly at the side of the cage, slamming against the jagged, cutting bars. Richard cried out and slid backwards as a hideous arm managed to thrust through one of the squares, raking off burnt flesh. Its bony, twisted hand clutched for him, but there was no way it could reach him. "Why didn't you tell us there was no going back? WHY?!" Richard was shaking his head, his throat tight. "I don't...I don't know what you mean." He whimpered. "They were stories. That's all. Just stories!" "You tricked us." It hissed. "You tricked us into following you, then you stepped out and slammed the door on us. You trapped us here." "No..." Richard thrust a shaking finger at the thing. "I-I didn't trick anyone. I just wrote books. I didn't even believe the stuff I wrote about. I didn't even believe in Hell!" The surface beneath Richard shuddered. He clutched at the hot ground. "Wh-what's happening?" He wailed. He jerked his hand back a moment before a barred cage wall thrust up out of the dirt, nearly taking his hand off. "Oh Jesus." He whispered, cold dread filling his mind. A second wall smashed up out of the ground, then a third and a fourth. He screamed and clutched frantically at the sharp walls as the dirt pillar dropped away beneath him into the licking jaws of the fire below. The jagged pieces of steel cut through the flesh of his hands and arms as he struggled to pull himself up and away from the reaching tongues of fire that licked at his feet, burning away his shoes and blistering his skin. "Oh Jesus...help me." He gasped. Richard squeezed his eyes shut and tried again to pull himself up enough to hook his feet through the squares, but his arms possessed no strength. He knew it would only be moments before his hands released and dropped him into a flaming lake that tortured but never consumed. And there he would reside for eternity. "Jesus can't help you now." The caged creature taunted. Gradually, like a slowly building crescendo, the other caged victims began to chant and taunt along with the first. "Jesus can't help you now." Tears sizzled on Richard's cheeks as the heat below began to blister his face. A mind-shattering ache crept from his shoulders to his hands and in a moment of numbing terror felt his grip weaken. His chin dropped to his chest and he stared down at the engulfing fire. He could feel his eyes beginning to turn to jelly from the intense heat and squeezed them shut again. A hissing noise snapped them open a second later. Richard looked down and felt his mind crack. Screaming insanely, he yanked his legs up, hooking his feet on the side of the cage, as a hideous red scaled beast thrust up out of the flames and snapped at his dangling body. Richard pressed his face into his arm and clenched his jaw as insanity squeezed his mind. This isn't happening. This isn't happening. The ache in arms and shoulders turned to burning. He would fall, this he knew. And when he did, the scaled creature would catch him in its jaws. But he wouldn't die. No, it wouldn't be over that soon. It would never be over. The beast would torment him for eternity. Richard felt his feet slipping. "Do you believe now?" The creature in the first cage whispered, its jellied eyes boring into his soul. "Do you believe in Hell now?" His feet slipped free and dropped the weight of his body on his arms hard, wrenching a scream from him. He gasped for air, but received only sulfuric heat to fill his lungs. "Do you believe now?" God, help me...please...help me... Richard felt his grip loosen. "Do you believe?" Father, God, don't leave me here...please... "Do you believe now, Richard Vaughn?" His fingers pried open against their will until he hung by his fingertips. "DO YOU BELIEVE?!" Richard felt his fingertips slide away from the jagged bars. "Oh Jesus- I Believe!" Richard screamed as his body dropped. His eyes squeezed shut, Richard's hand flew to his face as he felt a gust of hot air encompass him. A sudden, painful cry wrenched from him as his knees cracked down hard against a solid, unyielding surface, halting him with a suddenness that shot-put his stomach to his throat. 4- Richard fell forward, gasping. To his surprise, his lungs swelled with cool sweet air. His eyes opened cautiously and stared down at his hands, splayed out over a hard gray surface. A sudden rush of noise engulfed him as he looked around in confusion. People rushed past just feet from him. Cars honked and drivers swore. Raising his head slowly, Richard Vaughn looked up into a pair of puzzled eyes staring down at him out of a round, pudgy face. "Mr. Vaughn...are you all right?" The nasal voiced man asked doubtfully. "What the hell...?" Grasping a nearby pole, Richard pulled himself up on shaky legs. He stared at the little man that had so repulsed him earlier and squinted against the late afternoon sun. "How..." He wavered and clutched the pole tighter. "How did you...?" "How did I what, sir?" 5- The pudgy little man watched Richard Vaughn as he struggled for words that would never come. A glimpse, that was all he'd intended to give the man. But some people required a more intimate experience. People like Richard Vaughn. The bewildered writer glanced uncertainly around the busy street. "I need..." "Need...what, Mr. Vaughn?" "I need..." Vaughn's voice rasped inside his throat as he searched for what everyone searched for after wakening from a glimpse of their eternal future. Stiffening suddenly, Vaughn released the pole and stumbled out into the street, ignoring the screeching of tires and honking, vile swearing coming from the drivers. The little fat man watched him stagger across the street, up a set of concrete steps and into a building. Only after the writer disappeared through the doors did the plump little angel raise his eyes to the large wooden cross jutting out of the building across the street. He gave a thumbs up and grinned. "Another one for the home team, boss." Watching the doors of the church, knowing Richard Vaughn would not reappear for a very long time, he shook his head and chuckled. "Works every time." THE END Tweet
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