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Living Next Door To Alice (standard:mystery, 2178 words) | |||
Author: Hulsey | Added: Jul 03 2002 | Views/Reads: 4719/2638 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Is the mysterious woman next door really a witch? | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story giving it an eerie atmosphere. My eyes were attracted to four large pans that were sitting on the hob of the age-old oven, or were they cauldrons? Alice was standing besides the oven, her green, cat-like eyes fixed on me, as she smirked. “Hubble-bubble,” she laughed, and she reached for a wooden spoon. I backed off and she guffawed loudly, before telling me to relax. I took a deep breath, expecting the worst, when she opened the oven door. I licked my lips when she removed the hot cross buns and a large bowl of rice pudding. Alice winked at me and I followed her to the table. I then realised that there was only one chair, which she prompted me to use. My mouth watered, as she spooned the delicious looking pudding into a bowl. I polished off two bowls and still made room for a hot cross bun and a jam tart. Alice watched me contently, as I held my stomach and offered her a toothless smile. “Well, what do you think?” “It was the best rice pudding I've ever tasted.” “I thought you'd like it, Timmy.” “How do you know my name?” “I know everyone's name.” “No you don't. That's impossible.” “Is it?” “Okay, what's the name of my dog?” “Goldie of course.” “Yikes! You are magic. Are you a witch?” She laughed loudly, throwing her head back, her long white hair distorting her features. “The children like to think that. What do you think?” “I don't think you are, because you haven't got a cat, and all witches have cats.” She looked past me and smiled. I heard the patter of tiny feet before hearing the sound I was dreading. “Meow.” I was now on my feet, determined to make my getaway. “Sit down, Timmy. You have nothing to fear from me.” “The other kids call you Alice the witch, but I don't, honest.” “Sticks and stones,” she cackled. “Why are you always on your own?” “Because Timmy, it is God's wish. I've been punished and am still serving my penance.” “Whatever do you mean?” “Someday I'll tell you. You won't understand if I told you now.” “Please tell me, Alice,” I pleaded. “I won't tell anyone, honest.” She smiled, flashing her perfect teeth. “Maybe you're more grown up than I give you credit for, Timmy. You're a smart ten-year-old, aren't you?” “How do you know my age?” “How old do you think I am, Timmy?” “Dunno. About one hundred.” Again, she threw her head back and laughed loudly. “Timmy, I'm a wee bit older than that... Before I continue, you must promise me that you'll tell nobody of what you're about to hear?” “Cross my heart and hope to die.” “Very well, I trust you,” she said, pouring out a glass of refreshing lemonade for me. Timmy, I lived in a village in Northumbria many years ago. When you're older, you'll understand more what I'm about to divulge to you... I was a young girl; pretty, and in love with a young man called Edwin. In those days, the Romans ruled Britain, and even though we hated the Romans, they offered us security, as we were vulnerable to attacks before they arrived. All was well until 408 AD. Yes, Timmy, 408 AD. Our rulers were recalled back to Rome and of course the inevitable happened.” “The Romans; we're learning about them at school.” Alice continued. “We were attacked by the Picts, and were defenceless without leadership and guidance. Edwin and I fled to the forest and were captured by those terrible people. A large bearded man with his face painted blue, was about to smite Edwin with his sword, and I begged him not to. What he wanted to know was the whereabouts of our village, in exchange for our lives. Edwin begged me not to tell, and reminded me that our families lived in the village, but I was a smitten young girl. I did tell them, and they cut off Edwin's head in front of me, before... Well, I'll tell you of my ordeal when you're older.” “You're telling fibs, nobody can be that old,” I insisted. “I'm not finished, Timmy. I returned to my smouldering village, and found the ravaged bodies of my family, including my two-year-old sister. I wandered around aimlessly for what must have been days, before I came across a strange, green glow in the forest. I had to shield my eyes from the brilliance of the phenomenon, and a loud booming voice talked to me. The voice said that I had betrayed those that were closest to me, and that as a punishment, I would be left to walk the earth forever.” “Wow, was it God?” “I don't know, Timmy but here I am. I've seen many things in my time on earth, and I'm so tired. I long to find peace and to be allowed into the kingdom of heaven, but I know in my heart that it will never happen.” “That's a brilliant story, Alice.” “Remember your promise, Timmy.” “I promise.” My parents scolded me for seeing Alice, but every opportunity that presented itself, I visited her, as she enthralled me with her countless stories of her life. I eventually went to University, but looked forward to visiting Alice whenever I returned home. The many self-portraits depicted her in her various eras, and I learnt so much about this poor woman who was destined to never die. I had my doubts of course, but it made sense when I thought about it. Alice never looked any older, and she went into so much detail about her life. I have to admit that I checked out the dates and facts, before feeling a little guilty when they substantiated her story. Our relationship is growing, as each day, I get a little nearer to her age. I am mesmerised by her accounts of her meeting Henry VIII and being present at the coronation of Queen Victoria. She was once even accused of being a witch in the dark ages, but one of her accusers fell for her alluring charm and all charges were dropped. It amazes me to think that when I am no more, Alice will still be around, marvelling at another new era. There is a great sadness in this tormented woman, and recently, I found out the extremes she is willing to go to in her quest for the ultimate peace. It was a fine spring day and against the will of my parents, I decided to accompany her to the Supermarket. I was now nineteen years of age and free to do as I please, and our unhealthy relationship, according to my father, would I hope flourish. I felt myself growing closer to Alice, and could see the vulnerability in her emerald eyes, as she recited her eternal to me. A sexual chemistry was developing between us, not physical as yet, but mental. I think Alice could sense my lustful thoughts, and encouraged me to find a girlfriend my own age. Lecherous stares were directed at us, when we walked along the High Street towards the Supermarket. We waited at the traffic lights and I took my eyes off her for one moment, but that is all she needed. I heard the screech of brakes and then the loud dull thud as the car hit Alice, catapulting her into the air, as if in a dream sequence. She was thrown to onto the road, and I screamed when she disappeared under the wheels of a bus. Several more screams accompanied mine, and I dashed into the road blindly. I crouched below the bus and held out my hand, feeling her cold palm enveloping mine. The tears streamed down my eyes as she stared into nothingness. A priest appeared from somewhere and asked her if she would like the last rites read. My tears turned to laughter when Alice smiled and said; “That would be lovely, Father.” What happened next was amazing and miraculous. The crowd stepped back, open-mouthed, when Alice rose to her feet and brushed herself down. “Life goes on,” she muttered, and walked away, mingling with the crowd. My troubled mind was in turmoil. I did not know if I was happy that she had survived, or if I was sad at her failed suicide attempt. Now I am an old man and as my life ebbs away, Alice tends to me. As I lay in her bed, she relates to me stories of a small boy many years ago who craved for rice pudding. My hope is that after death, I can be reunited with Alice, in this life or the next. Tweet
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