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Freak Eden (standard:fantasy, 1313 words) | |||
Author: Violet | Added: Jun 14 2002 | Views/Reads: 3305/2125 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
a girl, a faerie, a secret. joy. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story thought. Today Eden is wearing his French shirt appliquéd with a daisy, and more daisy chains in his hair. He is writing. “What's that?” “Nothing.” He covers the lined paper with his small jacket decorated by Indian glass cherries. When we get home, my mother is rustling through cardboard boxes that smell like perfume and old people. She plucks a rose out of the box and Eden comes and kneels beside her. “It's pretty.” Two petals fly from the flower on to the floor. “It's so old.” The box is loaded with photos and papers. In the middle there is a bag of my mother's strawberry blonde locks. On the bag is written: ‘Clare's first trim'. A piece of paper is in her hand. Eden is reading the delicate hand writing on the yellowed page. “Clare in April. Five elements. Earth, for the fertile ground that grows the tulips up the path. Water, for the April rain that keeps them alive, for the puddles on the porch. Fire, for the strawberry sun in a spring sky. Wind, for the protection, driving demons back into the hole from which they came. And the fifth is Clare, blending all together in dance.” When he finishes the poem, she is crying. My father wrote that. My father, who I barely remember. She puts a delicate hand around Eden's back, shaking with tears. Snap. The sound of brittle card board cracking echoes through the room as Eden cries out in pain. “I have to leave, Delilah,” He says. Then, eyes tearing, he walks out of the house through the heavy old French doors. “I'm sorry.” My mother says. The ink drips down the page, wet with salty tears. “I didn't mean to.” “That's okay,” I reply. “He knows.” I once had a dream that Eden was glowing. Glowing with the florescence of a thousand fireflies, winged like tinkerbell. A faerie that made things better with flowers and light. But that night I had another dream. Eden holding the rose. No longer shimmering on the strawberry sun. Dying, with no one there clapping ‘believe' to make him come back to life. About a week later at 1 AM, someone knocked on my window. All I had to see was the fuchsia hair to know it was him. Eden waiting in my mother's 1945 cherry red ford convertible. Motioning ‘come with me'. So I came. We went to the desert. It was hot as hell there, even at night. The wind blew through our hair, blazing the dusk. The night of a thousand fireflies. The he stopped the car and, with out saying anything, took off his shirt. Wings. Magnificent butterfly wings full scale. One falling off like a broken cobweb inside my mother's cardboard box. And suddenly I understood. He was the faerie, I was the evil queen. But he made me better with flowers, light and cupcakes. “I have to leave, Delilah. I'm sorry.” He walks off into the distance, wings trailing behind like nets full of dead butterflies. “Wait! Eden, stop! Don't...” Suddenly his small faerie feet lift off the ground into the desert air. Like butterflies awoken after a long winter, the wings spread, engulfing the sun-rise, beating to the windmills, mesmerizing the hills full of hot sand and Joshua trees. “Don't leave me.” I mutter as the great expanse of wings that once protected me was gone in a split second. I stumble back to the car, get in and drive. I blast my music loud, drowning out the windmills, drowning the silence that has engulfed me so long. Flipping open the glove compartment in the car, I find my mom's last pack of Marlboro lights. For emergencies, she had said. I don't care. I have to fill the car with smoke. Drown out that ever-present scent of rose and lavender. It suddenly bugs me. I grab the lighter, pluck a cigarette out of the box and stick it in my mouth. I find one of those pesky daisy chains on the wheel and light it with the small flame. It licks up the chain, burning the last souvenir of him to ashes, gone with the wind, just like he was. When I get home, mom is still sleeping. To her, Eden had never come by, never drove me out to the desert, never left me with pain at a glimpse of magick. Why did he leave? I want to be her so much right now. Ignorant. Never get attached, Delilah, for only bad can come of it, I counsel my self as I turn on the music top volume and hop around wildly on the bed, trying to make myself forget, but the scent still lingers. Lavender and rose blending together. Eden. When I wake up, the music is still blaring. An envelope smelling of new paper sits at the foot of the bed, the sun glazing through the clear glass windows and reflecting onto the white. ‘Delilah' written on the cover in Eden's small, delicate hand writing. I open it. The envelope is over-flowing with daisy chains, but amidst them is a dirty piece of lined paper. I open to paper to find one of the glass treasures that used to adorn his little woolen jacket. On the paper, a poem: The girl who was a garden Tinkerbell. She was a dark little tinkerbell with pink hair and a blazing car. A mother like cracking rose petals, A father gone with the wind like that last daisy chain. Though I was the faerie, she was the queen. Better now. She was a garden. The garden of Delilah. Tweet
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