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Journeys (standard:drama, 1795 words) | |||
Author: Velvetyse | Added: May 25 2002 | Views/Reads: 3336/2270 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A journey of the body...or of the mind? | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story course, animals were afraid of humans. She continued to drink, quenching her thirst. Of a sudden she felt extremely dizzy. What? Her stomach cramped in increasing spasms and she bent over them, not knowing what was happening. Oh God, she hurt! Then she knew why there were no animals around the hole. It was too stagnant and had become poisonous. Her gorge rose and she vomited violently and then collapsed into sudden unconsciousness. ...She drank the whole bottle, sir. I haven't a clue as to how she got a hold of it...Let's get her back into bed. She's not coming along like she should... When she awoke, night had fallen and the cool air washed over her still aching body. She was alive, that much she could tell, but it had probably been a close thing. Getting rid of the water in her stomach as quickly as she had had most likely helped. She was still sick, but she could get away from the water hole and into some type of shelter to recover. Or she could continue onto the hills. Yes, moving was the best thing instead of laying down and suffering. Next time she wanted water she would watch the hole first to see if animals drank there. If they did, it was safe. She didn't want another lesson. Two in a row was not fun. Though she may be a woman, she still had a brain and knew how to use it. A sudden thought caught her off guard. Who had been speaking? There was no one else around and if there had been, why hadn't they helped her? And there wasn't a “bottle” or a “bed” anywhere near here. She dismissed the incident and rose slowly to her feet, swaying a bit as she started off toward the hills again. She would have to be careful. The animals that hunted at night were dangerous and she could easily be the prey. In her weakened state, she would most definitely be a target. So proceeding wearily, she walked on. “You must have been very beautiful once, but now you're all blackened from the sun. I'm sorry.” She bent over the remains of the snake and touched it gently. Once just the thought of the creepy creatures would have sent her running from the room, but now the poor thing in front of her seemed to be in the same boat as she. “You seem to be very hot. We must cool you down.” She screamed as she clearly heard the snake speak. But it couldn't speak, it was dead and dead animals didn't speak. What? “Please. Don't scream, ma'am. Calm down.” How could she calm down when there was a dead snake speaking to her? And what was this about having a fever? She was hot, but it was from the noonday sun. She must be losing her mind, it was being fried by the desert heat. Yes, that was it. She was frying into insanity. She backed away from the snake slowly, staring at it as if it would suddenly come into life. Turning toward the ever-nearer hills, she took off running. She watched apprehensively as the dark clouds rolled over the plain. She had read that these storms were powerful and that they could be deadly. She needed to find shelter as soon as possible. Picking up her pace, she scanned the terrain for some sort of shelter. She was closer to the hills, but she would not reach them for awhile and the trees that had suddenly come into view the day before were not acceptable. There! Was that some sort of outcropping of rocks? Yes, it was! Oh, lucky, lucky! She ran toward the darkened hole and taking a cautious peek inside, saw that it was unoccupied. Oh, good! She scrambled down into it just as the storm washed over the area and let loose its power. Torrential rains came down and thunder and lightening roared overhead. She screamed as the ground shook with the force of each boom and covered her head. She continued to scream as the storm continued, becoming hoarse as the hours passed. Finally she stopped in exhaustion, now unaware of the storm and fell into sleep. She wouldn't stop, sir. I had tried everything I could without using that and then I had to use it. She quiet now, but the storm was truly frightening her. Where should she go?...We'll take her there... She woke again and after gaining her bearings, crawled out of the shelter. The voices had spoken again. Her brain was truly, truly fried by the desert sun. Getting to the hills would be good. There, she might find enough water and small game to sustain her until someone thought to look for her. If anyone thought to. Oh, well. She shook her skirt out and walked on again. Her journey would continue until she was either dead or she had been rescued. Oh, well, such was life and just because she was a woman in the Eighteenth Century, did not mean that she couldn't survive the wilderness of the Kenyan Plains. She would, she would prove it. And she wouldn't lose her mind doing so. He looked down at the woman sadly. She lay with her head turned toward the window, staring out at the bright day. He sighed. “There is nothing more we can do for this woman. She is beyond our help.” His assistant looked at him with eyebrows raised. “What are we to do with her, then?” “The disease has progressed too far. Draw up the papers, as we must send her to one of the Insane Asylums, immediately.” “Yes, sir.” The Doctor continued to look at the woman, wondering where she was locked in her own mind and why she wore a small triumphant smile on her lips. Tweet
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