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Harris Avenue (Pt. 1 of 2) (standard:romance, 1201 words) | |||
Author: Chris Michlewicz | Added: May 13 2002 | Views/Reads: 3785/2354 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A man is in love with a girl he has never talked to. She is a mystery that Darren Aucoin intends to solve. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story Every man notices her obvious beauty as she makes her way down the peaceful street. Single men and married men alike will gawk without consideration of who may be standing next to them. Women notice Miss Grace as well, not with a hateful gaze, but with admiration for the delightful way she carries herself. Not many women can get away with such beauty while gaining the acceptance of others, but somehow Miss Grace does it with a wonderful attitude. Though no one, as far as Darren knows, has talked to the woman, she still carries with her faithful devotees of her...well, grace. It is not to say that she is the perfect woman, it's just that Darren thinks she is. On boring days, he envisions them happily married in a white house with a light blue trim. It's a place somewhere in the country, even Darren himself is not sure where, surrounded by nothing but sprawling flat land. For never having met her, Darren feels that he knows her better than anyone else in town. She has a familiar light to her that makes everyone who meets (sees) her feel as if they've known her for years, a history that starts and ends with the one smile she bestows upon that person. Darren often gets the feeling that she is an angel, but dismisses it with the reasoning he grew up on. He hopes she is not an angel because that means there is no possibility of being with her, unless it is on a purely spiritual level in a life after death. He doesn't want to wait until death to be with her. It is unfair to ask a man in love to wait for his partner that long, impossible to hold out for the prize that she is, even if it is for love. He will try to approach her despite what his father instilled in his memory. A lady such as this deserves a man that will treat her with everything she needs. Darren thinks he deserves her, too, for he has never been with a woman that makes his heart sing by a mere fleeting glimpse. His greeting will be carefully planned, not too strong, not too reserved. Just right. He wants to find out what her first name is, but most of all he wants to find out what is in the worn brown paper bag. Tweet
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