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Bloodstains (standard:fantasy, 2778 words) | |||
Author: Zell | Added: Apr 25 2002 | Views/Reads: 3155/2238 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This story starts en media res, but includes Zell's fight for the honour of his love, in an ancient deul. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story “I know, but it wouldn't be the first time...” I let loose another of my characteristic sighs. I didn't know what to say or what to tell her. The whole thing sounded like a bad movie. Who actually had these conversations anyway? A long silence lingered in the room. “I have to get to the match.” I kissed her lightly on her cheek, the same as before every match, fight, or duel that I've been in, but this time it felt different; her worries left her entire body rigid and tense, and her deluge of shivers chilled me to the bone. I walked hastily out of the room, my heavy footsteps echoing from the walls. I entered the stadium. We called it a stadium, mostly for lack of a better word. I guess we could say ‘kijatka', but nobody spoke the native tongue of this antiquated religion anymore. I sought out Christopher, my friend and a fourth order priest. We teased him about his name, and everyone called him ‘Chris'. We all thought a name meaning “child of Christ” didn't fit an Apocalyst cleric. He insisted people call him Sharakun. I called him Shar, but I suppose I did that because he let me. We didn't need to exchange any words; he shared his discontent with me long before Diana. He handed me my sword, ‘firebrand'. Remembering the look of the sword gets more difficult with each passing day. I can remember the damascus blade; it shined like any sword; the pommel and scabbard carried a deep garnet red stain. The braided leather grip almost covered the glossy handle, but its terra cotta polish had as much beauty as the exquisite golden hand guard that crowned it. I slipped the sword and scabbard between the layers of the sash at my waist, and knotted the scabbard to my belt. I strapped my long shield to my arm and stepped into the ring, each of my steps sounding heavily off of the empty stands. Meanwhile, Pat had been making the same preparations. His attire had the same scheme to it, mostly black and steel. His dagger had the only color in his wardrobe, and its indigo finish seemed quite menacing. I can't rightly explain how a colour could have such a characteristic, but it seemed to pierce my very soul. Perhaps the countless foul things its owner must have done with it granted it such an aura. His sword drew as much attention as his repulsive dagger. He insisted it to be the legendary masamune, but I knew better. While he fought with a quality sword, but who believes that fairy tale? Where would he get such a blade, even if it did exist, anyway? He pulled “masamune” free from its scabbard and held it firmly in front of himself. Only my fear drove me, but I had to do this. I trembled, desperately trying to gather my senses, finally returning to the task before me when my hand came to firebrand. I freed it from its wooden imprisonment and accustomed myself to its feel. “There's no shame in giving up now.” Pat's words startled me, but it somehow seemed natural to the flow of things. “Are you calling me a coward!?” “No, I'm just giving you a fair chance. I am not exactly noted for my merciful... well, anything.” I grabbed my pant legs at mid- thigh and pulled them up ever so slightly, crouching into my fighting stance. Pat's left foot glided back, putting him into a far more aggressive position. He placed his off hand on his sword and waited. The sound of the two swords tapping each other worked like the bell of a boxing match. The both of us flew into our opening barrage of attacks. My shield and sword deflected his lightning quick strikes. I soon found myself relying on my feet to do the attacking. The occasional kick found its way to his knee or thigh, but that did little against a man of his build. We fought with a vigour unknown to anyone in the stadium. Finally, an opportunity to strike made itself. A quick feint with my sword left me an opening to pin his sword to him, and so I took it. “One of us has virtue; he's fighting harder, and he's going to win.” My heavy breathing must have been quite pungent to my opponent, but I doubt he cared. “Can you guess which one I am?” “When I kill you, you wanna know what I'm gonna do to Diana?” He calmly stared at me, and licked his lips happily. Rage boiled from within me. What would happen if I lost? No! I didn't have the option anymore. I knew him all to well; even a scumbag like him couldn't speak those words in vain. “You wouldn't... I won't let you!” My screams seemed to shake the foundation of the stadium. The fighting had already brought about a painful swelling to all of my muscles, but I didn't care. I summoned all of the strength I could, and pushed Pat away from me. Dust clouded up from the arena floor as he slid back. Unfortunately, my shield still stood clutched in his hands. The heavy steel guard hit the ground with an echoing clang. I adjusted my stance and placed my second hand on my sword. “I guess I leveled the playing field,” Pat sneered. “That damn thing was getting on my nerves.” I glanced at it quickly, not wanting to take my eyes off Pat for too long. Dents and scrapes covered its surface, making it hardly worth using anymore. Then I discovered that I looked too long, and Pat had already sprung at me. The butt of his sword slammed across my face, launching me across the ring like a feather in a hurricane. I tasted blood, lots of it. A cough splattered red on the sand covered arena floor. Finding my footing, I focused on my opponent. “This is it” I thought to myself. “It's now or never; this isn't going to go my way unless I hit him hard, now.” I charged at him, starting with a feinted roundhouse that he easily dodged, but that gave me momentum. I feinted the next strike, but less obviously, and he parried the high strike to his head. I spun around and brought another cross cut to his abdomen. A flash of panic came to Pat's eye as his blade swung down to stop me. By the time I saw the crimson pattern spattered on my breastplate, something hit me in the face, hard. My left eye stung as blood flooded into it. I looked to Pat through my good eye. A massive cut ran across his entire face, from the right side of his jaw to the left corner of his forehead. I looked to his sword. It must have broken when he parried. “So much for masamune,” I chuckled to myself, but that ended soon enough. I looked to firebrand, and saw that the blow had shattered it, too. I dropped what was left of my sword and released my sodes. A symphony of chiming metal filled the room as the chunks of our swords rained from the cavernous ceiling. My sodes sounded like the thunder to accompany the raining steel as they hit the ground. “I don't need masamune to kill you.” Pat shook as he stood. “I have all I need right here.” He drew his dagger with his now ghostly white hands. His loss of blood quickly took its toll. “Stop this, Pat. If you keep going, you'll die.” I knew showing concern only showed my own weakness, but my nature always betrays me. “You're cut too; it's still an even match.” I had trouble focusing, but I couldn't stop now. Blood dripped from my chin as I moved back to my fighting stance. He meant to win; the tragic flaw of arrogance cursed both of us. He charged at me, very much in the same fashion as I had at him only moments earlier. He swung his dagger with all of the force he could muster. The moves where all predictable, but my body wouldn't respond the way I wanted it to. I barely evaded his strikes. Then he spun behind me and sliced open my lower back. I cursed loudly; he'd cut me deep, too. I had learned how troublesome keeping my balance was with a cut like that was when I remembered my wrist sheath. With the flick of my wrist and a flash of steel, the thin dagger found its way into Pat's right shoulder. I took the initiative to kick his knee out, and my gauntleted fist slammed against his jaw. Pat's eyes lost their focus as he fell backwards. He still looked fine when he landed, but one of his friends ran into the ring anyway. “He's unconscious” I fell over. Lying on my back on the cold arena floor, staring at the massive arched ceiling, I laughed. I couldn't stop it; it just seemed so great. I had won... it didn't seem possible, but I was alive... and I'd won. I even got to see a doctor sewing the massive gash on Pat's face. Soon a medic came to me. I felt a pinch on my forehead, and then a couple of tugs. The next thing a knew, a stream of water hit my face, washing the blood away. The doctor shined a flashlight in my eyes. I untied the heavy headband and looked at it. “If it wasn't for that little guy, I'd have put a lot more stitches in you.” The doctors words made me happier, and I hadn't yet stopped laughing. “Roll over, I have to look at that cut on your back.” I did as he said, and I felt more stitches being put in. “The cut on your brow needs to have the stitches out in a couple days, but this one on your back needs at least a week.” The sting of alcohol shook my whole body. I got back on my feet, and slid my hauberk back to its rightful place. I thanked the medic and walked towards the familiar faces at the edge of the ring. My joints creaked painfully and my head swam, but I still couldn't stop grinning. “You're so pale... Are you going to be okay?” Chris' voice comforted me. “According to those guys,” I gestured weakly over my shoulder, “I'll be fine.” “You're a wreck. I told you that you shouldn't fight...” The concern in Diana's voice somehow comforted me. “It's... okay... I'll live.” Chris looked at the both of us, and then his watch. “I'd hate to leave you right now, but I have to go... see you later” “Enjoy your hot date.” I chucked to myself, far too exhausted to notice his face turning red. He got embarrassed so easily. While he headed off as hastily as he could, I found my way to the lockers. Diana followed me, but I guess I didn't have any particular objection. “Something's on your mind.” I unbuckled my breastplate and tossed it into my cabinet. “You didn't have to fight him for me.” I unlaced my bracers. “Sure I did.” A long silence followed. “What would he have done if I didn't?” My gauntlets and bracers fell to the floor. My whole body screamed in pain as I bent to retrieve them. “I... guess he would have kept trying to get you into the ring... but you could have just refused.” “Pat... would have gone too far. My wounds will heal, but the kind you would have gotten wouldn't.” I slowly lifted my leg to the footlocker to remove one of my grieves. “I... I guess I didn't want you hurt on account of me.” A long silence floated in the air. “Then you know how I feel.” My other grieve dropped from my leg, ceasing my concern with its unbearable weight. “I tell you what. Come over to my house, and I'll make you dinner.” I untied my sash and lifted the final piece of armour from my shoulders, putting it in the cabinet. “That'd be... nice.” Tweet
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