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The Rabbit's Foot Business (standard:other, 3398 words) | |||
Author: Kirdas | Added: Sep 13 2000 | Views/Reads: 4229/2483 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A twelve year old Ohio farm boy discovers a unique, though nearly fatal, way to win the respect of his eighteen year old brother, and in the process, he discovers something important about his own "manhood." | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story and the state championship surrendered. The kitchen's gas stove, where his mother bent preparing bacon strips and pancakes, made the room warmer than the boys' bedroom. George stood unnoticed just inside the narrow doorway and waited for his eyes to adjust to the bright kitchen. His head moved in jerks, as would that of a rabbit just emerged from protective brush cover into a sunny clearing. On the white porcelain table his father's plate sat empty except for a thin layer of syrup. Mr Byfield's enormous work boots were not beside the door. His father would be outside already, probably milking the cow in the shed behind the barn. His brother's shotgun leaned in the corner near the doorway where George stood. Bill had gone into the fields yesterday and returned in only half an hour with the ears of a large grey-brown rabbit in his left hand and the shotgun clasped in his right. George had skipped along beside him as Bill strode toward the house. "You got one, didn't ya? You got a big one! Hey, Bill, come on, let me clean your gun! I watched you before. I know how. OK? I know where the kit is - up in our room... OK?" Bill looked briefly at his brother and sniggered, "You want to clean something, kid? Clean this!" Bill threw the limp mass of bloody fur at his brother where it arrived with a thud against the boy's chest. George held it silently to himself for a few seconds to savor its raw odor of wildness. A wave of contained violence stirred in him and mingled with grief in the cold afternoon. George moved as quietly as a rabbit into the kitchen. When his chair bumped against a table leg, his mother turned from the stove to acknowledge him. "Your father's out in the barn," his mother began. "Wants you and Bill to get that last piece of beans out this morning. Radio says we got snow comin' tonight, maybe ice. Your father wants all the beans out today." In the middle of her message, George's mother had turned back to the stove to scoop George's bacon and pancakes onto a plate which she then took to the table. "Don't go and use all the syrup, now. Your brother's got to have some." George seemed always to be hungry. His mother said that was the way with twelve-year-olds. Bill had been the same, she said. George deftly pulled the pancakes onto his plate with his fingers and then snatched four pieces of hot bacon. The syrup bottle was still warm from his mother's running hot water over it in the sink. He saturated the cakes with sweet brown liquid. The hearty slap of Bill's hand on the doorframe caused George to snap his head in that direction. Bill smiled at having startled the boy again. "A bit jumpy this morning, ain't you, kid?" George didn't answer. He tucked his head to his chest and began to cut the pancakes with his fork. Bill bumped the table leg with his knee as he sat down, and George reflexively grabbed his glass of milk. The older brother dumped the remaining pancakes and bacon directly onto his plate then reached for the syrup bottle. "What the...? You took all the damn syrup! Look at that!" Bill pointed at George's plate. "Well, I was gonna get some more pancakes, but now you went and took 'em all!" George's tried to imitate his brother's vehemence. "Besides, I left you some in there. See?" Bill turned his head, heaved a disapproving sigh of resignation, and said nothing more during breakfast. When Bill had finished, George was nibbling a slice of cold bacon. Rising from the table, Bill growled, "You be outside in five minutes! Dad wants you to help me get the last of the beans out. Dad's gonna pull the full wagons back to the bin. You gotta ride with me on the 'bine, he says. So, damn it!, be out there in five minutes! I ain't gonna wait around all day for you." George's head came up and his eyes opened wide for the first time since Bill had slapped the door frame. Had his father really said he could go with the men into the fields today? To ride the enormous combine? To help them get the crop in? George stood to gulp the last of his milk, then pushed his chair to the table and walked directly to the wall by the outside door where his coat and hat hung beside those of his older brother. ------- Oaks lose their leaves last - weeks after the elms and maples do. Then the world becomes brown and brittle. Everything that can pull into itself does so, and whatever is soft and warm must hide, or die. ------- George Byfield waited beside the yellow monster. A constant wind swept across the farms that lay flat to the west. Coldness penetrated his blue jeans and his raveling wool scarf. The boy walked slowly around the combine and reverently touched it with his bare fingers. The buttons and dials, the rows of levers, the colored lights beside them. George stood very close to the enormous combine, letting it block some of the wind, but not actually on it, lest some ominous power be accidentally released. He waited beside the combine for his brother. Bill strode from the house, zipping his heavy blue parka against the wind. He immediately hurled his body up into the only seat and yelled to his brother, "Well, get on! You're not standin' around all day!" Bill dramatically turned the key, unnecessarily using his whole arm to do so. The combine groaned deep within itself as if it were angry at being roused from sleep. Soon the engine produced a sustained roar, the whole machine vibrating with the inestimable power of it. With a few throbbing jerks the combine resisted, seemed finally to accept the obligation Bill had forced upon it, gradually attained a steady pace, and moved like a huge yellow boulder out onto the field. George stood proudly on a small platform that protruded from the right side of the cab overlooking the paddlewheel. He yelled in order to be heard over the mechanical din. "This is really neat! It'll do six rows at once, won't it?" Bill ignored his brother's question and shouted back at him, "Now, listen! Dad wants you to look down the rows and check for stuff before we go through 'em. That pony of yours lost his rope out here last summer, and dad wants it back. Says it'll foul up the machinery if we don't find it. So, you keep a lookout for it! Hear me?" "OK!" George shouted back. "I'll find it, you bet! I'll spot it!" With intense determination, George began searching the bean rows as the mighty combine moved onward, devouring a sea of naked brown stems and their hanging pods. The wind howled around them as they moved toward the center of the field. Occasionally George looked back toward the tiny farm house and barn. The enormity of the field, the powerful roar of the combine beneath him, the threat of the coming ice storm, and the pride of working with the men produced a flood of ecstacy in the boy. For two hours the boys rode the mighty combine back and forth through the flat brown field. The bean rows seemed interminably long to George. He could neither estimate their length nor the amount of time in minutes it took to complete one swipe of the field. The boy began to mark in the dust which had collected on the bright yellow cab: one mark with his finger each time they turned to begin a return trip down the field. There were thirteen marks so far, but George thought he may have forgotten to mark at least one of the turns. He had a mental argument with himself about whether to make one more mark in the dust. Suddenly there was a prolonged scream of metal grating against metal. George looked up from his dusty tally. Bill quickly braked the combine, then jerked a lever on the panel to stop the paddlewheel. The lever would not stay down. Bill pushed it again and held it for a few seconds. Still the lever would not stay. Finally, he wrestled the handle and forced it down, muttering obscenities lost in the roar of the engine and the piercing metallic whine. Had George been searching for obstacles in the combine's path, he still would not have seen his pony's rope. It was the same dull brown color as the tired Ohio soil. The rain-splattered mud of early autumn had only camouflaged it further. Still, the boy felt immobilized by guilt. When Bill leapt out of the cab to investigate, George remained on the platform of the rumbling combine and stared crestfallen at his dust-record of the day's work. His failure to spot the rope seemed yet another irrevocable mistake -- like the football fumble and the basketball defeat of his morning fantasy. From the vibrating platform George observed his angry brother, hands on hips, standing in front of the machine and glaring at the full length of the pony's rope. One end of it was hopelessly enmeshed in the axle at one end of the enormous paddlewheel. The rope stretched thirty feet in front of the combine, ending in an open noose. George could see that Bill was shaking his head slowly. His large hands had already stiffened in the bitter wind. Bill stormed down the length of the rope and snatched up the simple noose which had almost closed due to the relentless tug of the paddlewheel. The older brother glared first at George and then, in rage, at the expanse of field yet to be harvested. In a furious gesture of defeat, Bill flung the noose to the ground. How the lever happened to slip again was not certain. George wondered for an instant whether he might have moved it himself. All either of the brothers knew was that the lever had somehow slipped, and that suddenly the paddlewheel was turning, and that the rope was slowly being wound around the axle again. The noose that Bill had thrown to the soil closed tightly around his left ankle. Bill hopped awkwardly on his right leg and tried to loosen the rope's hold with his numb fingers. Repeatedly the rope was yanked toward the combine, causing the noose to close again just at the moment when Bill might have stepped out of it. "Hey! George! Come here, quick!" Now Bill's anger was focused on the rope and at the relentless grip of the monster machine. "Gosh, Bill! Did you get caught in the rope?" George could see perfectly what had happened, but he did not know how to respond to his brother's physical awkwardness. The situation was too foreign for him to comprehend at once. He had never seen his brother defeated by any opponent. "Hurry! It's pulling my leg! I can't get out of it! George!" Now his brother's words sounded more fearful than angry. George jumped from the combine and ran to where Bill was frantically pulling at the rope. "The lever! On the combine, George! Push the lever down and hold it! Damn it! Go on!" George tried to understand how his negligence might have contributed to this strange series of events. It all happened so quickly, he thought, and now it seemed certain that his brother would be swallowed by the hungry wheel. He imagined Bill's body being dragged legs-first into the sharp prongs that combed the brittle bean stalks inward for thrashing. George watched the struggling body as the master combine slowly dragged it toward itself. The contest between this mechanical monster and his brother's strength aroused a new and nameless fascination in George. From deep within him some previously obscured emotion rose that utterly displaced his guilt. Then George left the combine and walked slowly toward the horizontal form of his brother. He observed his brother's trauma with aloof calmness. He sank his cold hands deep into the pockets of his jeans. He fingered the pen knife he'd put there while getting dressed that morning. Walking just outside of his brother's reach, it occurred to George that he might pace out the rope's remaining length and thereby estimate the time it had yet to travel before the machine had devoured it all. The metallic scream was constant now. George thought he would attempt a conversation with his brother. He wondered, then, if he and Bill could finally be like friends and if they might share secrets and plans with each other -- like brothers. "Hey, Bill..." George began. "Where's your knife? Get it out! Get your goddamn knife out and cut the rope, George!" Bill's voice slashed out to the boy from terror. His tears mixed with dust on Bill's cheeks. His hands no longer tore at the rope's noose but grasped outward to reach either of George's legs. "I got your rabbit all cleaned. Mom says we're gonna have it for supper tonight." George squinted calmly at the distant farm house and then looked at Bill's struggling body. He watched Bill's hands futilely grasping for his skinny legs. "Hey, you want a rabbit's foot? I'd give ya one if ya asked me for it." George considered the ridiculousness of his own question and quickly added, "You could maybe trade it off for something, I guess." Bill stopped yelling then. His body had turned so that he was being dragged on his left side, the whole vulnerable front of him facing George. Twelve feet of rope had already wound around the driving axle of the paddlewheel. The older brother seemed no longer to fight its steady pull. Instead, he stared in bewilderment at the form of the stranger who walked beside him. George played with his knife, threw it in spinning arcs into the cold air, caught it, threw it up again. "Hey, Bill! Ya' know... maybe you and I could start up a rabbit's foot business," George began again. "You could shoot 'em, and I could clean 'em, and then we could sell the skins and feet. And we could split what we made. I could skin 'em with my knife. See?" Bill stared into his brother's face. Something unmistakable had changed there. George was watching carefully, and acknowledged his brother's recognition with a brief nod. As if at a signal, George stopped tossing his knife, opened its largest and sharpest blade - its callous-shaving blade - and walked slowly toward his brother. Without saying a word, he placed the knife into Bill's hand. For supper that night, Mrs. Byfield served rabbit stew. A shared sense of hard-won accomplishment seemed to surround the white porcelain table where the family ate. Outside, the wind swept indifferently across naked fields and coated acres of bean stubble with ice. "I seen yesterday that Waycaster up the road was burnin' out the brush around his field," the father said. "We'll do the same, onc't that ice gets off everything." Bill looked at his father. "Why? What's the point in it?" "Nothin' really," his father responded, "'cept that it looks better, I guess. It's good if your place looks clean and kept up. Might kill off a few weeds for next year, too." "I say that's a damn stupid thing to do," Bill responded with his usual arrogance. "Huh?" said the father, turning to face his older son. "Well, I mean..." Bill sat up straight in his chair then and looked intently at his father. "If ya burn out all the brush, where are the rabbits goin' to live?" he asked. The father regarded his older son's point briefly, then turned with a grunt to his wife and said, "Ma, sometimes I'd swear we done raised us a couple crazies." George's head bobbed up to search Bill's face. Then, grinning broadly, he looked down at his plate again and continued eating his stew. Tweet
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