21 (standard:adventure, 3046 words)
Author: Lowell Guerra	Added: Jan 27 2002	Views/Reads: 3328/2476	Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
ch 1 and 2 a story about a 19 year old boy with a good heart. a guy named Dragon finds that boy and makes him a better fighter, and also along the way, feeds him knowledge.This story has humans and also faeries. The 19 year old boy tries to save a little

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"Are you okay?" The white guy asked 21. 

"Yeah, I'm aiight." 21 picked up a few old black words going to black
shcools. 

"What's your name, kiddo?" he asked 21. 

"21," he replied. 

"I said your name, kiddo. Not your age." 

"That's my name! I'm 19 years old." 21 told him. "What's your name? 

"My name is Dragon." he introduced himself. "By the way.... Happy
thanksgiving." 

Chapter two: save the little boy! 

"Let's see how well you fight!" The white guy said as he dashed a very
quick and strong punch to 21's eye. 

"No!" 21 screamed right before he got punched in the eye. Dragon grabbed
the back of 21's head and pulled it down as he kneed him in the mouth. 

"Show your true power!" Dragon told him. I know he can fight better than
THIS! thought Dragon. 21 layed knocked out on the floor with a black 
eye and a bloody mouth. 

"Was this 21's true power?" Dragon asked himself. 21 didn't fight as
well as Dragon thought. "Oops.." said Dragon out loud. Dragon had very 
short, spiked hair. He wore a sleevless t-shirt with the letter D in 
the middle covered with a circle. He also had on baggy sweat pants. 
"Was I wrong to believe...." Dragon started. "...That this man would be 
the great fighter I was looking for? But that can't be.... I had a 
strong feeling ... that he'd be the one." Dragon felt bad that his 
instict had betrayed him for the first time. "My strong feeling was 
never wrong before." Dragon kneeled down in front of 21's beaten up 
body. "I have to get him healed. He didn't deserve a beating like 
this." He looked down at 21's clothes. "Ah.. I see...one reason he 
couldn't fight was because he was wearing jeans... so he couldn't move 
fast enough."  Dragon took 21 and flew him up to the healing palace. 

"Dragon, my good friend," said Jane. Jane was a human sized faerie. She
had pretty white wings, blonde hair, blue eyes and 36d tits. She had on 
a baby blue sweat shirt showing her cleavage. Instead of walking, most 
of the time she floated, even when she is just in one place; like when 
someone stands. She carried a wand with her, it looked like a staff 
with a bright yellow star at the top end. 

"Please heal this young man, Jane." Dragon pleaded as he layed 21 softly
on the ground.  Jane lifted 21's body up with the power of her magic 
wand and let a yellow light surround him as it wiped away the blood 
from 21's mouth, and healed 21's pain. A second later he had awakened. 

"Here, come and be healed. Come back to let me heal yo the next time you
are hurt." 

"Where am I? What am I doing here?" 21 asked Dragon and Jane as he
looked around the area he was in. He saw that Jane was floating in the 
air. "Hey how is you doin' dat?" 21 asked Jane. 

"21... I am a faerie, I can levitate myself at will." she explained. 

"Faerie's are real?" 21 asked. He heard Dragon tried to hold in a
giggle. 

"On earth, Faerie's are not real. But this is not earth." she told him. 

"WHAT!?" 21 exclaimed. "Then where the hell am I?" 

"You're on planet Precept," Dragon told 21. 

"Dragon brought you here and had me heal you." 

"Huh, but why would he have me healed? He was the one who beat me up."
Dragon scratched his head." 

"Hehe! Sorry 'bout that, 21. You see, I had this feeling that you were
this great fighter I was looking for." 21 then giggled himself. He 
thought it was hilarious that someone would think that he was a great 
fighter. 

"That couldn't be me. I never won a real fight in my entire life!" 

"Yeah, I kinda figured that. Need a lift?" 

"Yeah," 21 replied.  Dragon didn't feel like flying unaided, so he
called his 'Candy Cloud.' The Candy Cloud is a cloud that Dragon can 
summon at any time he wants, and it flies where ever he wants. 

"Candy Cloud!" called Dragon. "Take 21 and I back to Earth." The candly
cloud appeared in front of Dragon. Dragon climbed on his cloud. "Hey, 
c'mon! Hop on!" 

"OK," 21 said as he hopped on. As they hopped on, before they flew,
Dragon had to ask 21 where he lived. 

"So where do you live?" he asked. 

"I don't really live anywhere. I travel everywhere. I don't have a
steady place to stay." he explained. "Just take me to the Milky Street 
Valley." Milky Street Valley was the valley right next to where 21 last 
traveled. Dragon thought 21 just might want to continue his traveling. 
21 was just a few steps away from reaching Goten road. Dragon thought 
he should keep an eye on him though, just until he reached Goten road. 
During the flight, 21 screamed as he held tightly onto the cloud. 

"What's wrong, kiddo?" Dragon asked. 

"We're so high!"  Dragon giggled. 

"What? Are you afraid of heights?" 

"YEAH!!!" he said. 

"OK, we'll fly a bit lower." Dragon said. "Candy cloud, fly us lower." 

The cloud flew a lil lower.  21 was still a lil' scared. 

"Can you fly lower?" 21 asked. 

"Lower?! No way!" Dragon said. "If we flew lower, then the USA
government, or people who would tell the government, would know about 
me and my Candy Cloud!" 

Dragon paused. "You want to go to America, right?" he asked 21. 

"Yeah." 21 replied. "Dragon.... I don't wanna sound mean... but so what
if they know that you and the candy cloud exist?" he asked. 

"If they knew that this candy cloud exists, they would send all the
marines, the navy seals, the FBI and the CIA to get my cloud and they'd 
also know that other world's actually exists. They would go to Precept 
and take the aliens, kill them and disect and study their bodies." 
Dragon explained to the young man. 

"Isn't that, being a lil'... paranoid?" 21 asked. 

"Being paranoid keeps me safe. And there's something else I want you to
know, 21. America, and it's government has more power than you think." 

"What ya mean?" 

"What you think is impossible, and also what they want everyone to think
is impossible, is really possible." 21 was still kind of confused. 

"I still don't get it." 

"You think... mind control is impossible right? Well... it IS possible."


21 understood. "And I have a feeling, what happened to your Earth, on
Sept. 11, 2001, had something to do with mind control." 21 remembered 
watching the news on every channel that day. The TV stations also 
recently still talk about it. 

"And.. on the Ananda Lewis show, Tuesday, January 22nd 2002, there was a
kid who had a friend who flew a plane into a building and had died for 
it." 21 remembered that episode he was talking about. It wasn't even 
too long ago. 21 loves to watch Ananda's show a lot. 21 thought she was 
so sexy. He especially remembered the part that Dragon was talking 
about; the part where a guy had a friend and his friend flew into the 
building and had died for it. His friend had told him he got offered a 
job as a pilot, and his friend told him to watch the news the same day 
he flew into the building. 21 had a flash back of the show. It made 
really good sense to 21 now. There HAD to be some kind of mind control 
being used! Why would so MANY people be willing to die for Osama Bin 
Laden!? thought 21. Dragon, had to be right on that one. 

"How do you think Bin Laden got a hold of mind control ability?" 21
asked. 21 was so focused on this information that he forgot that he was 
flying. 

"Bin Laden, must be a smart and powerful man. Usually your country, USA
would have found him and destroyed him by now. He might have stole it 
from America's authorities. Either that or bought it from them." he 
said. "But I don't think that your country would sell something like 
that, as they want to remain the most powerful country on Earth." 

"If you don't live on Earth, then how do you know all of this?" 21
asked. "I visit this planet a lot. It is an interesting planet as it is 
the only planet that has air."  That's true, said 21 in his head. They 
landed on Milky Street Valley as 21 thanked Dragon for the ride. 

"No prob!" Dragon said as he flew out of sight. After he was sure 21
wasn't looking, he called the Candy Cloud away. 

"HELP!" said a little boy as he ran as fast as he could. 21 looked and
saw that he was running away from a muscular black man with a knife in 
his hand. 

"Gimme yo money, nigga!" he said as he chased the little boy. Could this
be, Maurice? 21 asked himself. No, Maurice's eyes were shaped 
differently and this guy with a knife; his lilps were bigger. 21 could 
feel his heart pounding. He didn't want to witness a death of a child 
over some money. 

"I gotta help dat boy! I gotta do something!" 21 whispered to himself.
21 saw a rock on the floor. He no longer had time to think as he saw 
that this new buff black man was catching up to the kid. 21 made sure 
his target was on lock. He couldn't miss, he knew if he missed, then 
the boy would have gotten hit instead and it would have been made 
easier for the new guy. The kid was also black. He wore a hat 
backwards, black jeans and a red sweat-shirt. 21 threw the rock, and 
hit the new guy directly on his wrist in which he was holding the 
knife, causing the knife to fly back. 

"What the fuck!" the new guy exclaimed as he turned to 21. The new guy
grinned. 

"Damn, white boy! Do you really think that a CRACKER could ever beat the
almighty black man!?" he said. This new guy started to look familar to 
21. He squinted his eyes and looked harder at the new guy. 

"Allen?" 21 asked. "Is that you?" He was surprised that 21 remembered
him. 

"Hey. It's been a while." 

"21? I remember you, fool!" Allen also remembered him. "You was dat
scrawny lil' cracker that I used to beat up and put your head in the 
bathroom toilets and flushed in elementary school."  Allen said as he 
smiled and cracked his knuckles. 

"I hope you're not tryin' to fight  ME, Cracker! Don't you remember what
we learned in science class?" 21 remembered clearly. He could still 
remember the voice of the science teacher say those words: 

'It's a 'scientific fact' that all black men can beat up ANY non-black
guy.' 

"Yeah, I remember it perfectly clear, Allen." said 21. "And that's
probably why you got so cocky." 

"What the hell you doin' here anyways, 21! Dis be an all black
neighborhood! Except for da females of YO race! Did ya hear, white boy? 
We takin' ova yo race! Us black niggaz fuckin' all yo' girls, cracker. 
Bitches can't resists da black dick! And black girls would never touch 
an ugly ass cracker!" 

"Am I supposed to get mad now or someshit?" 21 asked as he bent his eye
brows at him, and half grinned. 

"Ah I see you finally got the mouth to use bad words." Allen said. "I
remember in elementary school... you never used a single bad word." 

"I see you never change. You still pick on people that are weaker than
you." 21 told him. The kid was leaning against the wall of the alley 
scared to think what might happen. The kid saw that Allen had much more 
muscle than 21. What the hell is this 21 guy doing standing up to this 
buff black guy? Is he tryin' to get himself killed? thought the kid. 

"I wouldn't be talkin' shit if I was you, 21. Do you want me to dip your
head in a toilet and give you a swirly like ol' times? I can go to any 
house on dis' block and they'd be glad to let me dunk a white boy in a 
toilet and flush. It'd be easy to drag you as I see you're still 
scrawny as when you were in elementary!" 

21 saw that Allen's knife was on his side. "Allen, if you're so tough...
then why do you need a knife to fight people that are much weaker than 
you?" he asked the bully that picked on him in elementary school. 

"SHUT UP, CRACKER! Your words bore me! I'll run and get that knife and
cut those white boy fingers off!" Allen yelled. "You remember the 
phrase we always used in elementary school, honkey? Let me refresh your 
memory! BLACK POWER!!!" 

Allen yelled with pride as he ran up to 21 charging a fist. 21 didn't
know what to do. 

He wanted to protect the scared kid in anyway he could. He wasn't gonna
run, being philipino, he had too much pride to run away from fights. He 
quickly picked up the knife and held it in his right hand. 21's eyes 
said as if; if you come closer, I'll stab you. Suddenly, Allen stopped. 


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