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Change Passes Us By (standard:other, 1365 words) | |||
Author: awake | Added: Nov 16 2001 | Views/Reads: 3231/2150 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
This is a short story that is written in first person with a flair of southern dialect and mannersims. The main character, an older woman is thinking of an "friend" with a colorful past. In the middle of her thought she runs into the firend and | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story for two years until one day he ups and calls her and called her everyday for three months straight. Must've ran out of money. That's what he old buzzard deserves. By that time Neola had moved on found a real good man a mechanic who knows how to work them tools and things. Well Vernon ain't no Billie Dee Williams but I must admit she did alright for herself. I myself could never replace Charlie, there will never be another like him. Being a widow woman ain't as bad as everybody make it out to be. I get's plenty of rest, a nice pension portion, don't have to clean cook or dress anything if I don't feel like it. Those few small liberties still don't make up for Charlie's passing though. I know darn well she ain't back for good, cause all her peoples done gone away; moved up north or somewhere but I thought I'd give her a chance to state her business back in these parts. " Oh no I just passing through, tying up some loose ends is all, you know try to make amends and all." She almost said that like she meant it, since when you ever seen a cow change it's spots. The woman done did so much wrong on this side of the Mason Dixon she have to move clean out west just find territory unscathed by the likes of her. Make amends my foot; she must think I'm crazy, she probably back here to steal somebody else's man. I tell you I have to got to pray for this child. And I will just as soon as I tell Neola whom I ran into today. With all southern manner I could muster I said , ' Well, chile don't be no stranger you come on pass before you leave so we can take a walk down memory lane. "I'll do that Mayme, and maybe I can get a taste of those lima beans, rice and cornbread you always made." What the hell she know about my rice and beans, I only made that for Charlie to take with him when he was working overtime down at the post. She done really lost her mind, crazy bitty must've got me confused with Goergetta Green or something, the woman who used to sell soul food out her kitchen window. Where she get a notion like that, I'm telling you quiet is kept I can't stand that woman. ""All right, you take care now" I smiled my biggest sister girl smile and waved as she caught an up coming cab. And as if she isn't obvious enough, she makes it her business to yell out her destination to the cab driver, as if I give two cents about where she taking her tail off to. That woman is out of her mind if she thinks she'd ever sit at the likes of my kitchen table. No good man stealer, she just better be happy she ain't run off with my Charlie. I'd walked completely to Nevada or Kansas wherever she was and skinned her wide hide raw. How could a woman go for so many years and not change a bit? I sees through all that prim and proper nonsense. Let me make my way to get these eggs before the sale be over. Hold up, did that hussy say what I thought I heard her say . . . take her to 1213 Stribling Avenue. Boy I might have to play that number it sounds so familiar. Wait a minute 1213 Stribling Avenue, that's Neola's place. Lawd, get me to a pay phone quick, she's on her way to steal Neola's Vernon. THE END Tweet
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