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Tempest Relief Prologue (standard:drama, 1371 words) [1/4] show all parts | |||
Author: Ari Walker | Updated: May 09 2002 | Views/Reads: 3791/2331 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
sorry, this comes before chapter one. but i just wrote it last night, so... :) | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story Edith leaned against her counter, and looked Jade Anabella Louise Spencer up and down. The girl was just past five feet tall, and slender. She had just a hint of curves showing through her worn out Aerosmith T-shirt and holes in both knees of her jeans. Her baseball cap was pulled low over her eyes, but her shoulder length hair was loose, the color of caramel, wild and curly. Her lips were full and serious, her chin stubborn, her nose short and straight. Edith had a feeling that if she peered closer, she'd see freckles beneath a pair of wide set, apple green eyes, and a dimple in her left cheek. The girl was almost identical to Callie. "How old are you, Jade Anabella Louise Spencer?" Edith asked, her face expressionless. "I turned twelve in February, Mrs. Edith," Jade answered, her head tilting to the side. Her stomach rumbled and she lowered her lashes, embarrassed. "Edith's how I introduced myself, Edith is what you should call me," Edith straightened up and made her way to the Deli. "Thank you, Mrs.... Edith. You can just call me Jade." Edith laughed, opening the deli case with it's matching containers of mayonnaise, mustard, tomatoes, pickles, olives, lettuce, peppers, sprouts and onions. She leaned down and pulled out a sourdough roll. "Waddya like on your sandwiches?" "Oh... nothing. I mean, I'm not hungry," Jade blushed as her stomach rumbled again. "Sure..." Edith shook her head and sliced the roll open. "Why don't you just tell me what you like and then we'll get to your missing person problem." Jade looked down at the ground, and then over her shoulder, her gaze following a young couple as they crossed the highway to the beach. "Mustard, tomatoes, Swiss cheese and salami," Jade said quickly. She wasn't sure how she'd pay for it, but maybe once she found her father, he'd pay for it. Edith hummed to herself as she made the sandwich, her eyes watching Jade. Jade was trying not to stare at the sandwich. And failing miserably. "Go on and sit yourself down," Edith pointed to the tables and chairs on the far side of her store with her chin as she held the sandwich firmly and sliced it in half. Jade nodded and picked her duffel bag up. "Here you go," Edith said a moment later, placing a plate with a huge sandwich, a slice of orange, and a pile of chips in front of Jade. Jade's eyes widened. Never had she seen such a big sandwich. "Small town sandwiches are big, aren't they?" Edith laughed. "What's your preference, Coke or Pepsi?" "Pepsi, please," Jade answered, picking up half the sandwich and wondering how to get her mouth over it. "Just start at a corner and work your way through it," Edith grinned, bringing a glass of ice and a can of Pepsi over. Jade smiled and nodded, then opened her mouth wide and bit into the sandwich. Mustard and tomato juice squirted out the sides and down her chin, but she was so hungry she didn't care. "Wonderful," she managed, when she finished chewing and paused to pour her Pepsi. Her eyes stared in wonder at the glass of ice and Pepsi. "It looks so pretty," said softly. "I've never had soda but in a can, except for at McDonalds last Thanksgiving, where they serve it in paper cups." She turned red the moment she said it and concentrated on her sandwich again. Edith sat down across from the girl and leaned back, her arms crossed beneath her breasts. She liked the girl, and she had a real bad feeling about whoever she was looking for. When Jade sat back with a sigh, looking like she'd burst if she had a another bite, Edith leaned forward, her elbows leaning on the glass table. "So tell me, young'un, who you looking for?" "My father," Jade answered, her eyes peering at Edith hopefully. "His name is Koby Ayala, and I know he lives here. A girl I know from school came down here on vacation last summer and said there was a man named that who lived here. Do you know him? Could he possibly be my father?" Edith chewed on her lip and thought about what she should say. Sure, there was a Koby Ayala who lived here. And Edith was damn sure it was Jade's father. The kid looked too much like his oldest daughter, Callie. Edith would have loved telling this lonely, lost little girl who her father was. But Koby was the biggest bastard Edith had ever met. He didn't give a fig about anybody but himself, and Edith had a feeling he'd end up hurting this little girl more than she had already been hurt. "Ah, honey," Edith said softly, carefully. "I am so sorry to be the one to tell you this. Koby Ayala died last summer." The look on Jade's face would forever be imprinted in Edith's mind. Copyright 2001 by Ari Walker Tweet
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