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A time to die (standard:mystery, 1345 words) | |||
Author: Wendy | Added: Sep 27 2001 | Views/Reads: 4002/2404 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A woman splits up from her husband and thinks about taking an overdose. She decides not to but then events carry on regardless. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story had always known. It was warm and comforting and she realised with a start that she had smelt it on her mother. It was the first memory she had had of her mother for many years. It had taken her 2 hours to get back to sleep after that and in the morning she put the experience down to alcohol and tricks of the mind. A lady Gill worked with, who fancied herself as a bit of a medium had once told Gill that her mother spent a lot of time around Gill. Gill never spoke of her parents and it had given her a chill to realise the woman knew her mother was dead but she had laughed it off in the end as a load of rubbish. She thought she would go back and speak to the lady when she returned to work now and then she laughed out loud to herself and told herself not to be so stupid. She had now definitely made up her mind – she would return to work – stop the pills and booze and as she had been told to do ‘pull herself together’. The thought was like a refreshing breeze through her mind, she hadn’t felt this determined for years. She would do it now. She decided to empty the tablets and booze down the toilet but if she didn’t do it straight away she never would, so she jumped out of bed and grabbed the bottle of pills and vodka. It was as though she had run straight into a brick wall. There was a flash and her head felt as though it was going to explode. The bang was almost worse.It felt as though it took 30 seconds to work through her body when in fact it was nearer one. There was a pain in her chest that felt as if a red-hot poker was being pushed into her and then she felt nothing but she could smell perfume. It was the one she had smelt in bed and was accompanied by a feeling of euphoria. Her heart leapt, she could see an outline in a bright light. She knew this person. She had needed this person all her life. It was her mother. Even without seeing the photographs of her mother that her aunt had kept for her she would have know. This woman was part of her life. “Darling, it was the thunder, just as it was for us. You have to come with me now, Dad is waiting”. Tweet
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