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It's A Secret (standard:romance, 1090 words) | |||
Author: makepeaceken | Added: Nov 07 2022 | Views/Reads: 728/509 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Kelly goes out of her way to split up a boy and his girlfriend so she can go out with him, but do things go to plan? She hopes that they do but things take a turn that she may not be happy about! | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story heading towards her. Did she have a tale to tell him? She couldn't wait. She was going to drop Tanya well and truly in it. ‘Hi, Darren. You OK?' she asked when she got close to him in the street. ‘Why shouldn't I be?' ‘No reason. How's that girlfriend of yours?' ‘Tanya? She's fine.' Kelly couldn't wait to spill the beans. This was her golden opportunity. She had been waiting for this moment for a long time. So she told Darren all about Tanya's mysterious visitor, and Tanya's reluctance to say who he was. Darren looked intrigued at the news he had just been told. He then went on to tell Kelly that he was going to have a word with Tanya. He also told her that he was convinced she was cheating on him. A day later, Kelly ran into Darren again. ‘You all right?' he asked her. ‘Yeah, I'm fine.' ‘You were right, Tanya has been cheating on me.' Those were the words that Kelly wanted to hear. That had made her day. All she had to do now was get the nerve to ask Darren out. And she did. ‘So, I'll meet you outside the Odeon at seven, then?' ‘OK,' said Kelly, her heart feeling all of a flutter. She got exactly what she wanted. Wait till she told Naomi. She'd be so envious. ‘You've got a date with who?' Naomi asked when the two girls ran into each other just after Kelly had finished work. ‘He's taking me to the Odeon. I can't wait.' ‘What about Tanya?' ‘He's dumped her. She's been well binned.' Later that evening, Kelly went to get ready for her big date. She couldn't wait. She spent a long time looking for something nice to wear. She had spent ages trying different tops on until she came across the right one. Then she put on her jacket and headed to the bus stop, hoping the bus wouldn't be late. But, as usual, it was. After getting off the bus, Kelly rushed towards the Odeon cinema. When she got near, standing outside the entrance was Darren, waiting there so patiently. ‘Sorry I'm a little late, Darren,' she said to him as soon as she got close to him, ‘but it's that bus. It's never on time..' ‘Not to worry,' he replied. ‘Oh, I hope you don't mind but a couple of my friends are meeting us here. They can't wait to see you.' Kelly stood there confused. What friends? She thought that there would just be her and Darren on this date. He never mentioned anyone else. Then, a minute or two later, they arrived. ‘Tanya, what are you doing here?' Kelly asked. ‘To put the record straight, Kel. You've been telling tales to Darren, telling him I've been seeing someone else. This is my cousin, Tanya said, pointing to the person who was with her and also the boy Kelly had seen coming from the direction of Tanya's house. ‘We've been friends for years; long before I started going out with Darren.' Kelly didn't know where to put herself. She disappeared as quickly as she could. The others stood there laughing before making their way into the cinema to see the film. Follow me on my website - kenmakepeace.com Tweet
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