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Skinwalker ch. 2 (standard:travel stories, 6274 words) [2/5] show all parts | |||
Author: Eutychus | Added: Jan 15 2018 | Views/Reads: 1840/1226 | Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Jerry and Moe make it to the edge of the River Acheron and must deal with Charon to allow for passage into Hell proper. After a successful crossing (albeit not without a little drama), they make it to the castle of Minos. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story ("He descended into hell") and smiled at the event Charon was describing. "Sir, I was referring to an Italian poet from Florence. Since we both know what the waters will do to living human flesh, we know that Dante must have taken your ferry across." "Oh, him... But that was a special situation, and I don't think yours compares," Charon said. "If you would observe closely, you will see that he bears witness of Another who almost certainly made provision for him to be here." Charon leaned down and inspected me more thoroughly. "I see. Alive and a believer. That is indeed rare in these parts. Certainly you may cross, but you must stand where I tell you or we may not make it safely to the other side." We walked alongside the ferry and I read the letters "**id o* **e **st" painted on the bow, scorch marks having eliminated the missing letters. Though the passengers were elbow to elbow on the first level, as Charon stepped aboard a path opened before him. Moe and I followed close behind and I noted that when I stepped on board the ferry listed noticeably to starboard. "The Maiden's center of gravity lies directly below my feet. You must stand here during the crossing," Charon said grimly. "Now I must address the rest of my charges." He made his way to the upper deck and stood behind the pilothouse. He turned, faced the passengers below and shouted, "You have blasphemed your Maker by ignoring Grace dearly purchased and freely offered during your lifetime. Redemption is now beyond your grasp and deliverance from what awaits you will NOT be forthcoming. Enjoy the ride." The whistle sounded, smoke rose from the smokestack and the ferry began to move. There was no discussion among the passengers but the tension was thick. I could feel it in each person that was in contact with me. They were either rigid like someone having a tonic seizure or they quivered from fear. As soon as the shore was several ship lengths distant some guy five bodies away panicked. "No. This is wrong. Death is supposed to be the end of everything! I shouldn't even be able to think about this garbage. I'm out of here," he yelled, shoving his way to the rail. He was up and over the rail in a heartbeat. A second later came the splash immediately followed by a surprised scream. Then silence. "Gone." "Sank like a rock." "Did you see his face?" "Don't touch the water," different voices near the railing observed. "Any idea what happened to that guy?" I asked Moe. "The waters of the Acheron are very cold. They never freeze but their temperature is rumored to be well below the freezing point of water. They would crystallize living human flesh immediately." "Then what happened to him?" "He is unable to move, cold, and resting on the bottom of the river with others who made the same foolish choice. If the current is right he may find his way to one of the lower levels, but he will more likely become entangled in some rubbish on the bottom of the river for eternity." I tried to imagine the situation and as a cold shiver ran through me I turned my back to that side of the ferry. As I looked over the other rail the curved spine of something enormous traveling the opposite direction rose into view and then sank back down into the water. I initially thought ceolacanth but there were neither scales nor dorsal fin. In the midst of the nervousness the large beast caused among the other passengers I remembered something about another water creature from an Old Testament account. "Moe, does your knowledge of the Bible include the book of Jonah?" "Yes." "Do you recall what was said about the great fish?" "At the end of the first chapter we are informed that 'the Lord prepared a great fish to swallow Jonah'." "Right. So if God prepared a fish for a specific task, up to and including altering it in some way to accommodate a reluctant prophet for a three day and three night stay in its belly, is it possible Charon is another such special creation fashioned for the specific task of ferrying damned souls across this river?" "There is some sense in that speculation. It may very well be, though that fact will matter little to those for whom he provides his service." As Moe was speaking I glanced in the general direction in which the ferry was headed and noticed that the far shore was approaching...quickly! There was a lot of loud activity in the pilot house, Charon barking orders and underlings confirming the enacting of those orders. The ferry suddenly seemed to pivot on the bow and turned a quick ninety degrees like one of the Goodtime excursion ships that gave tours of Lake Erie and the lower Cuyahoga River, though they effected such maneuvers with 200 horsepower bow thrusters. How could a paddle-wheel ferry powered by a simple steam engine pull the same stunt? The ferry came to a gentle mooring against a stone pier. I looked up at the pilot house to see Charon glowering at me and pointing to the deck. The message was clear. Stay put! People began to climb over the rail out onto the "dock" and walk away from the river toward a pass between two cliff faces twenty some feet high and fifty feet from the water's edge. It seemed to take a lot less time for the deck to empty of passengers than it had taken for the ferry to load, which was odd given that the damned were walking in the direction of eternal punishment. I mean, why hurry? "You may now approach the rail," Charon called out. Tied to the stone dock, the ferry did not list as I moved away from the ship's center of gravity. I stepped over the rail and walked to where Moe was waiting. By the time I turned to look at the ferry Charon was already preparing for his return trip. A hose had been dropped into the river and one of his crew was operating a hand pump to refill the boiler's reservoir. I walked to the bow hoping to find a readable version of the ferry's name only to discover a similar scorching, though the letters on the port side read "M*** Of *h* M*** *n ser**ce 1898". I made a mental note to consider those letters at some point in the future. I turned away from the river and was surprised to see Moe standing by himself on the plateau between the river and the cliff. "Where did they all go?" I asked, amazed that the crowd from the ferry had disappeared so quickly. "Virgil explained that phenomenon to Dante by stating that 'all their fear is changed into desire'. For all the fear you sensed on the ferry, there is an aspect of their personalities that longs for, or desires, to see justice done. As a young man I had occasion to witness the effects of alcohol and other drugs in places like opium dens on the lower classes. Though the addictions produced only misery, the addicted would invariably return to the agent of addiction, hating the drink or the drug for the hold it had on them and hating themselves for returning to the chemical that had such influence over them. The fear of what it would do to them was overridden by the desire for the sensation it gave. I think it is similar here. The sin which they hated for what it did to them they now run to. A dog returning, so to speak." I thought about it briefly and had my own Romans 7 ("Why do I do what I don't want to do?") moment, understanding completely the dilemma Moe outlined. And had Moe said "lower classes" and "opium dens"? What portion of history was he from? "Why did no one stay here?" "This is a no man's land now. There is no longer anyone in this circle." "Then what became of those with whom Dante spoke? This is the first circle, isn't it?" "The technical term for the people Dante encountered in Limbo would be squatters. They have long since arrived at their proper place in hell. Some described this circle as Sheol, and Charon alluded to the event that caused its current state of emptiness. Should you care to discuss it, I would warn you not to use a particular proper name. It is not well received." "By whom?" "Rather by what. Hell itself reacts to the name of the One who bent its framework two thousand years ago." "If this was the abode of the righteous dead until that time when salvation was purchased on the cross," I said and felt the stone beneath my feet shudder a bit, "has Sheol changed noticeably? I have a hard time imagining Abraham and his family of faith residing for hundreds of years in this barren place." "There are ruins covered with graffiti written in demon tongues. The homes were Spartan but I presume perfectly serviceable. And if the oldest residents of hell are to be trusted, this area was grassy once." "Where are the homes?" "By now they are several kilometers from here. I'm told they used to be visible from this location." "The patriarchs lived in mobile homes?" I asked, not expecting Moe might not understand the term. "Mm, no. As hell increases in size artifacts within it change apparent position." "Hell is larger than it used to be?" "That is the only reason I can think of for the fact that we can no longer see the homes of the patriarchs." "Have you ever thought to do some exploring?" "There are stricter protocols in place these days that discourage such curiosity." "So we follow the crowd?" "An activity that contributed to large numbers of souls winding up here, but yes, let us proceed." We entered the pass between the pair of rock faces and I paid particular attention to what I was hearing. Distant echoes of a rational conversation, one voice louder than the other, but louder merely in volume, not intensity. The simple sound of people talking. For some reason it was comforting, which also made it seem out of place. The walls of the pass were plain, and about fifty feet in the color of the stone began to lighten. It was changing from the gray of granite to a marbling of limestone and granite and then to the white of limestone. So far I had seen sub-zero water that didn't freeze, banners that moved through the sky with no visible means of propulsion, and a paddlewheel ferry that moved with the grace of a hydrofoil across the surface of the water. Now I was seeing sedimentary and igneous rock blended together in a manner that would confound any geologist worth his salt. Hell seemed to be a place of anachronisms. The walls became less random in shape and more like a structure, flat and smooth with right angles indicative of architecture rather than nature. Soon it felt more like I was walking down a hallway than a space between rock masses. "What are we walking into, Moe?" "This is the palace of Minos." "Minos...the judge of the underworld in classical Greek literature. In Inferno he assigned the souls to their particular circle of hell, right?" I asked as I again noticed the discussion I had heard earlier. It sounded closer and the lesser voice was different now; definitely female. "Yes, that is his function." We crossed several intersections, the passages moving at right angles off the main corridor. One such passage was comparatively short and a bluish-yellow light was visible at the end. With a little persuasion I was able to convince Moe we should take the brief detour. The light was coming through a narrow opening in the wall, a slot through which defenders of a castle might have fired their longbows five hundred years ago. The view through the opening turned out to be striking but somewhat depressing as well. I felt like I was at one of those overlook pull-offs along the east rim of the Grand Canyon a few minutes after sundown. On the far wall of the "canyon" I saw flickers of light a long way down and realized that the wall was being illuminated by blue flames. "Do you see anything that surprises you?" Moe asked. "No, fire was expected as was the smell of the smoke rising from below." "Consider that an overview. It is time we move on to specifics," he said and headed back toward the main corridor. "You are going to be a surprise to Minos and he may spend some time in discussion with you. Don't be bothered by this because he, of all the persons you are likely to encounter, is most deserving of your trust." We walked for a long time past stone furniture, undistinguished artwork and nondescript rooms containing statuary reminiscent of minor cubist sculptors. The corridor finally opened into a large room. Directly across from the doorway we had just passed through was a large seat (throne?) occupied by a titanic being. Minos was enormous but he had the proportions of a normal human being, not someone with pituitary issues that exaggerated limb or trunk size to an awkward degree. For the moment Moe and I went unnoticed as Minos was engaged in discussion with a woman whom I thought I had seen next to the guy who had jumped ship partway across the Acheron. The discussion was thoughtful and surprisingly honest. Perhaps even friendly. The woman revealed details of her life to Minos such as I would never consider discussing with a stranger let alone a being straight out of an Albrecht Dürer woodcut of the Apocalypse. All the while I was conscious of movement behind Minos' throne and as he sat there pondering the discussion the two had just shared the movements became shorter and quicker. Minos stood, folded his arms and from behind him a prehensile tail wrapped twice about his midsection. He spoke the name of the woman, nodded, and she jumped as though she had been hit with a jolt of electric current. As she shook off the sensation a stunned expression crossed her face. She touched her own midsection and as she did I noticed that two rings of red had seeped their way to the surface of the robe she was wearing. She looked at Minos and he gestured toward a doorway to his left. Without a word she followed his direction. Immediately Minos looked at us and frowned. "I have seen you before. Your destiny is already established. Why are you here again?" "This is not my doing. I was summoned from my proper place to the vestibule. Since your judgment is both true and just, my being here must have been willed where what is willed is what must be," Moe said in his own defense. "A variation on a theme, but I'll buy it for the moment. What of you?" Minos asked me. "I can generally get a sense of the core disposition of a soul but I get no such read from you. How have you accomplished this?" In keeping with Moe's earlier caveat about the use of names, I took a moment to choose my words. "It's really nothing I have done. It's something that was done both to and for me. You are trying to deal with two separate natures, an old and new, and you are most likely only able to read the older of the two. The newer nature has been sublimating the old for a few decades now so I'm not surprised you are having a difficult time of it." "The sin on your soul reads more like a distant and indistinct echo than something that is part of who you are. It's almost as though there is nothing to judge." "Perhaps because that judgment took place two thousand years ago on a hill near Jerusalem. It's referred to as justification, being declared guilt free and righteous based on the fact that payment for my sin was made by Another," I said, adding the justification explanation to the mix because Minos seemed unsure how to react to me. "I have detailed knowledge of all jurisprudence based on the Law as delineated through human reason and its proper application. I have simply never encountered a redeemed soul before," Minos said. His tone was that of a child who had done his best with an unfamiliar task. I think I hurt his feelings. "When you say 'the Law', are you referring to God's Law?" "Of course. What other Law can there be?" "Understood. You mentioned human reason so I was thinking of a law with human rationalization attached, which would give that law every loophole imaginable." "The goal of a human's ability to reason, the function of the intellect, is to discern and apprehend truth, in particular truth about God. It is precisely that capacity for rationalization that works against what Aristotle referred to as the 'good' of intellect, the quest for truth. The intellect continues to function here, but it has no desire for truth which can no longer profit the soul. I will admit, however, as in the case of your friend here, there are exceptions to that maxim. He seems to maintain an academic curiosity toward his Maker." "May I ask what you did with the woman who preceded us?" "She shared her heart with me by responding to my questions. From the answers given I was able to determine which sin most defined her life and sent her to the appropriate circle. There is neither malice in the process nor rush to judgment, as we had been speaking for quite a while before you entered the courtroom." "She was on the ferry when we crossed. How did you get through that mass of people so quickly?" "You will discover that time does not flow here as it does on Earth. In fact it doesn't flow at all. It is always 'now'. That means I can accomplish a lot of work in an arbitrarily short amount of 'time'." "Alright. Now the two circles of red on her robe. They corresponded to the number of times your tail was wrapped around yourself, meaning that she was sent to the second circle. At first I thought reptile when I saw your tail. But the appearance of blood...would I be more correct if I presumed cephalopod?" "You are correct, it is more tentacle than tail. And as a tentacle, the suction pads have a serrated edge to them. I wrap it around myself the correct number of times and the person receiving judgment also receives the cuts from the suction pads. It is that simple." "It makes an interesting kind of sense. How long until she will reach her destination?" "As soon as she passed through the doorway she arrived at the second circle. And before you ask, had she been predisposed to pandering, gluttony, or had committed suicide, she would have passed through the doorway to the proper circle. There is an incredible economy of space in hell." "We thank you for your time. May we pass to the same circle she did?" Moe asked. "I sense that you are taking this task seriously, or at the very least are using it as an opportunity to alleviate the monotony. Know that when you have finished with Jerome here, you will return to your proper place." "I understand." "Be on your way. I have work to do. Charon has made another successful crossing," Minos said and we heard the shuffling sound of many feet coming from the corridor behind us. "Jerome?" " 'Jerry' is an accepted foreshortening of the name. In the 1960s no kid named Jerome wanted to actually be called Jerome by friends, teachers, classmates or parents for that matter." "I see. Are you wearing a belt?" "Yes." "Would you mind loosening it just a bit? I may require your services as an anchor." "What... That's right, wind." "Correct, but you have weight which should make you stable in a way the residents of this circle can never be nor would even choose to be." I stood before the doorway trying to sense what lay on the other side. Like the entrance to hell, this doorway was both open and gave no hint of what was beyond the opening. I half expected to see dust devils skittering about on the other side of the door, catch the edge of a gust coming through the door or be pulled toward the door by a strong wind blowing across the opening in accordance with the Bernoulli principle. That's the effect that allows an airfoil to create the lift necessary for an airplane to fly and pulls passengers out of airplanes when someone opens the emergency exit at 20,000 feet in disaster movies from the 1970s. Moe stepped through the opening and with a skeletal hand grabbed my forearm to urge me along. The expected maelstrom seemed somewhat lackluster. The "black wind" Dante described seemed to me more like a stiff spring zephyr. Excellent conditions for kite flying but not particularly hellish. Then I looked up. If the wind made it feel like spring, the sky made it look like fall, only instead of leaves, the sky was filled with people. After recovering from my initial surprise, I watched the activity above us with the curiosity of a three year old. The people, joined together in pairs, moved randomly, a combination of sudden shifts in the wind's speed and direction. And Newtonian physics at its purest was demonstrated when individuals collided. The reaction of the impact could have been demonstrated equally well on a billiard table. Impact resulted in both people acquiring a new trajectory and if one or the other was rotating, the new course was colored by that rotation, as when someone places English on the cue ball causing the target to move in a manner that somewhat defies the geometry of the table. Something about the way the people were moving seemed familiar. Maybe I would recall why before we left this circle. For the first time since we met, Moe looked somewhat uncertain, perhaps even a little frightened. Was he standing up straighter than he had been? He seemed taller. I looked down and noticed that his feet were three inches off the ground. "In spite of the fact that lust was not the predominant sin in my life, I had my moments of self-indulgent sin shared with another. And a lifetime of effort directed toward extinguishing that desire simply finds me agreeing with the old axiom that trying to extinguish any desire by denying its complimentary act is like trying to quench a fire with gasoline. That is the nature of this and the next few circles, the sins of incontinence." For a moment the only thing that came to mind were television ads for adult diapers, but then another definition clicked into place, a failure to restrain an appetite. These would have been the sins of the leopard, sins without malice per se, but sins which reflect those urges or bodily desires that echo the most basic impulses of human existence that, when separated from their divine source, are the most easily debased of all the gifts God gives to mankind. Though I had heard nothing to cause the reaction, I turned around because something behind me felt wrong. Peering at us from the far side of an outcropping of rock was the woman who had recently arrived here from Minos' court. "Hello... Magdalena?" "Lena is fine." "I'm Jerry," I said and extended a hand. "Hi. I don't mean to seem unfriendly but I don't dare let go," she said, her eyes widening at the prospect of letting go of her rock to shake my hand. "How came you to this place?" Moe asked. "Fog had dropped visibility to practically zero. I'm not sure where I was in the chain reaction, but there were horns blaring, hazard lights flashing, my car slipped under a jackknifed semi and I was here. Not here here, but no longer west of Terra Haute. Then there was that ferry ride, the monster in the palace and now here holding a rock." "No, I mean what caused you to be in this circle of hell. What did you discuss with Minos?" "The monster," I added when it appeared the name only confused her. "He asked a lot of personal questions. Boyfriends, lovers, spouse, affairs concurrent with the marriage, lovers following the marriage." "His questions are only as probing as is necessary to determine what he must. I'm sorry if you were made to feel uncomfortable," Moe said, looked at me and nodded in her direction. "That's very kind of you. You know, I never really thought of myself as a bad person. Certainly not the type deserving of hell. I just don't get it. I honestly loved each of the people I was ever with. How can love be so wrong?" Her intonation was well practiced, developed to convince others (and herself?) of her point of view. The way she reacted to Moe's baiting, showing concern for her discomfort at having her life scrutinized, revealed much. She immediately turned on the charm, responding to his manufactured affection with affection of her own. "I do not mean to heap grief upon you, but do you not see the contradiction in your question?" Moe asked. "You use love, the very commodity you have abused in your life, as the excuse for its misuse. A lover's tenderness and the passion ignited by that tenderness served to give you a rationalization for consent to sin, a first step in the direction of this circle of hell. And the history you mentioned makes me think that you were comfortable revisiting this sin, that your infatuation with love outweighed any commitment to loving one person. You were satisfied with the afterglow of an adolescent love rather than committing to the covenant that mature, adult love demands." "That's how you see it," Lena said, peevishness having replaced affection. "If there is one thing you can trust here, it is Minos' judgment. He is both just and true in his rulings. I have never met a soul who, upon getting to know their unique situation, did not belong precisely where Minos had sent them. He has a God-given insight into the nature of a person's heart." "Would any God worthy of worship come up with a place like this for the unbelieving? All I did was follow my heart. Can I be blamed for acting on those 'God-given' impulses?" "You are only held accountable for your choices, the choice to indulge your passions, the choice to believe that you knew better than God what was best, the choice to not believe that God had something infinitely better in mind for you should you yield to His leading." "Strong words coming from someone else in hell." "I claim no special status. My unique curse here is to hope where there is none. I want others to know and understand the truth about their situation, to know that God is just in creating hell." "True, truth? What is truth?" she asked and suddenly seemed confused by her own words. "That wasn't what I meant to say. That came from somewhere else." "Such instances will be annoying for a time. Eventually you will come to either embrace or hate these intrusions." "Then what was it? Where did it come from?" "The eighteenth chapter of John's gospel, Pilate's cynical reply to the statement that the Accused had come to bear witness to the truth," I offered. "And it came to mind because it was appropriate for it to have done so," Moe added. "Think of it as a white elephant of the mind. It can do you no practical good now, but you may access scripture should you choose to do so." "Moe, are you saying that the residents of hell have the Bible committed to memory?" "No, I'm saying that we may refer to scripture and that it is sometimes forced upon us." "But how do you acquire the words?" "Unsure. When it is needed it is there in my conscious mind." "Ah, cloud storage," Lena mused. "An apt description," I said. Moe looked at us, wondered, and must have decided that it was unimportant because he didn't pursue a definition. "Lena, how are the wounds Minos inflicted?" I asked. I had noticed that the robe clung to her skin where the red rings had formed earlier which indicated that clotting had resulted, but a childhood experience with a stinging jellyfish at a North Carolina beach made me think Lena might be dealing with more than just scabs. "The wounds sting like hell, if you'll pardon the expression. I'm guessing some venom was involved," Lena said and shrugged. "Warm water works best if you can find it here somewhere." "It's kind of you to care," she said with an unsuccessful attempt at charm. In my eyes she had used up whatever reserves of allure she possessed when she was speaking with Moe. She looked up at the sky as the winds died down, weighed her options, tossed her hair back and opened her robe, asking us how things looked. In opening the robe she ripped off the recently clotted blood and as the wind picked up the fresh blood streamed around her midsection looking very much like two rings of red. The wounds looked vicious, as though someone had repeatedly taken a razor-sharp melon baller to her stomach. There was a sudden gust, her robe filled like a parachute and she was ten feet off the ground in a second. "Carried away by her passions in death as in life. You saw the sardonic grin on her face as she opened the robe. She was trying to shock you for having the gall to lecture her about her life choices," I said and watched with surprise as two individuals came into contact twenty feet above us and tripled their speed away from each other as they collided. Based on what I had observed of souls being blown about this circle, that was an improper reaction. Why? "Here and in the next couple of circles you will observe desires that have been based upon perceived need or want. There is no real calculation involved. As we move deeper into hell, desires will increasingly be tied to the use of the intellect, so that as we proceed you will notice that more thought is required by the sinner to indulge in the sin. In other words, the more intentional the choice, the more severe the consequences." Intentionality. There shouldn't have been any based upon... "...the kinetic theory of gases," I mistakenly said out loud as I watched people moving about the sky above us. "The what?" "I've been trying to make sense of the randomness of their motion," I said, nodding in the direction of the sky. "The kinetic theory of gases makes the most sense except for a couple of instances that defy that theory. Like gas molecules, the people are traveling in straight-line motion and obeying Newton's Laws. Likewise, collisions between gas molecules or people are perfectly elastic. That is, no energy is gained or lost during the collision. Also, there are no attractive or repulsive forces between individual molecules or individual couplings. However, I have recently observed instances of repulsion where, upon collision, the individuals are sent seemingly to opposite ends of the world." "That's easy. In life they were actually in love with each other." "I suppose that should have been expected." "Why is that?" "I have been taught, and as I grew up observed, that man seems designed for relationship. Rapport and connection with other humans seems to be something that God not only expects but encourages in His creation. It therefore stands to reason that relationship as God intended it will not exist in hell." "And you presume this because...?" "Because relationship demands sacrifice on the part of each member. Believers are more apt to understand this because they have already received that kind of love from their Savior and have been given the ability to live out this kind of love through the indwelling presence of the Holy Spirit. Without that kind of reinforcement, I doubt a relationship can last. And in hell there is no such underpinning, so relationships here are illusory at best." "That doesn't explain the shift in your attitude toward Lena. When you first met you seemed sympathetic, even cordial. Then, just before the winds took her, your look was almost one of contempt. Where did that come from?" Moe asked as we began walking inward toward the division between the second and third circles. “Weariness, I think.” “What is the source of your exhaustion?” “Probably an accumulation of emotional fatigue from having to deal with an unending train of social ‘causes'. People were not designed for unrelieved tension, be it of a personal, work, or cultural nature. Was the world you knew ever ripped from one end to the other by a shift within the culture that challenged a longstanding status quo?” Moe looked at the ground, then at me, smiled and said, “You might say so.” Tweet
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