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The Early Morning Wake-Up Call (standard:non fiction, 854 words) | |||
Author: Juggernaut | Added: Jul 22 2013 | Views/Reads: 2827/1888 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
The noise from beating wet dirty clothes on a hard surface while washing was early morning wake-up call to Juggernaut growing up. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story bare footed on the mud carrying the loads on their head as if living in a rainforest. In the afternoon, the workers iron the clothes with a heavy steel or brass iron each weighing at least 10 pounds. Burning hot coal was placed into the iron by opening its top compartment. The hot temperature and heavy weight of the iron in combination was necessary to straighten out the wrinkles on rough cotton fabric. In front of each wooden shack was an open iron pot with burning coal to supply hot coal for the iron. It was common to see some pedestrians on the street stop by to light their cigarettes on the burning coal in the open pots. At one corner of the property was a small temple with village deity Yellamma, the namesake for many women in the area. The washerwoman Yellamma was named after the deity. Once a year, believers gather to celebrate the deity of Yellamma. Folk singers and dancers perform in front of the temple to please the crowds, merry go-round and other rides provide entertainment to the children and vendors sold everything from colorful clay figurines to paper dolls. The open air laundry turns into fair grounds with crowds walking up and down. In the evening, the washermen and some women drink Toddy brew Kallu to get drunk and quarrel. Yellamma, the matriarch love to drink; she was a habitual drinker though never gets drunk; one can smell alcohol in her breath all the time. A conversation with her was like a shouting match; not that she was an angry person but she was loud. She got used to shouting at her men and women from a distance all day long and with her customers she spoke with same loud voice. With muscular shoulders developed from carrying big loads and unruly grey hair falling all over her face flushed red from chronic drinking, she looked more like a ferocious lioness. Customers seldom argued with her over the laundry charges or a missing piece of their laundry. With no customer dare to question her, on occasions she randomly pick and choose to wear beautiful saris belongs to her customers. After decades of running laundry business from her property in the urban area, Yellamma cashed in on selling her land to the land developers eager to build a shopping center. She moved her operation to the town's out skirts near a water stream. The people in the area missed the early wakeup call, the synchronized sound of washing and evening loud brawls between the drunken washermen. Tweet
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