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Down memory lane (standard:other, 1472 words) | |||
Author: Lev821 | Added: May 18 2012 | Views/Reads: 2861/1913 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Returning to his childhood home after all these years. Is everything as it seems? | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story rooted in the past, as though progress had upped and left, and spread across everywhere else except here. He gripped the handle, and slowly pushed it open. Apprehensively stepping in, he saw that a thick layer of dust covered everything, and daylight forced its way through the grimy windows. Everything was as he had expected. There were no signs of anybody having been here in the forty-five years since he'd left. It seemed that he was the last person to leave the house. His mother was still in her favourite chair, dressed as she was, knitting needles in hand, pattern on the arm-rest, with an unfinished cardigan. Her skeletal features had a thin layer of flesh stretched across them, everything else having decayed. Any permeations she would have excuded had long gone. He didn't know how she had died. Yet, he was with her when she did. One day she had been complaining about how she was convinced the electricity company were overcharging her, and knitting at the same time. How she could concentrate on both he never knew. She was certainly practised in each. He had looked up from the TV then because she had fallen silent. She seemed to have fallen asleep, so he continued to watch his programme, and only later did he discover that she had died. Without tears, without any frantic calls for an ambulance, he thought it would be easier for him to leave. He was leaving anyway, but didn't think it would be quite that early. Somebody else would see to her, he had thought, and maybe discover how she had died. His disappearance though, would probably have aroused suspicions, and maybe even a murder hunt, but he had decided to take the risk. Little did he realise, even at that time, that around the village, things happened slowly, if at all. Perhaps the locals knew about her, knew that her son was incapable of murder, were not aroused by her absence, and decided to leave her there, entombed as she would perhaps have wanted. Her final resting place in her favourite chair with her favourite pastime, in front of the TV in the house she had always lived. He wasn't going to change that. There was no point in disturbing her, so he left, not bothering with the rest of the house, feeling no need. He had seen what he had returned to see, and had his beliefs confirmed, about this place being a relic of the past, where you could leave your door open and no burglars would enter, where people trusted each other, everybody knew one another. He liked it, liked its parallel reversion of modern society, and wondered if he ever might come back to live here. Yet, he also liked the challenge of the big cities, where everybody looked after number one, even if it was to the detriment of other individuals, where money ruled, and people strived to make more and more of it, where stress and hostility thrived. He was used to it, and didn't really know anything else. Perhaps one day he would return, if circumstances permitted. He was sure everything would be as it was. Back out onto the path, he walked back to the gate and took one last look at his childhood home, smiled a humourless smile, and turned and walked back into the village where his car was waiting. He drove back the way he had came, watching the village recede in the rear-view mirror, where all his childhood memories were. After a few minutes, he was back on a main road, and because he maintained the speed he was driving at along the lanes, a car behind him beeped its horn, the driver wanting him to speed up. Welcome back to society, he thought, stepping on the accelerator. Tweet
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