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If only...... (standard:romance, 1077 words) | |||
Author: Earl | Added: Mar 28 2001 | Views/Reads: 4357/2599 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A visit to a bank takes the person in the story back to his old college days and a girl he used to know. If only.... | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story create a scene in her own bank, would she? He would simply be looking her up as an old friend with no other intention whatsoever. But what if she wasn’t attached? What if she was free tonight? He was staying in the city and had no prior engagements. Until now, his intentions for that evening was a meal in the hotel, a call home, an evening in the bar and, according to custom, staggering to bed the worst for wear when all other hotel guests has exhausted their entertainment value. He would ask her to dinner at that restaurant they had been to on her seventeenth birthday all those years ago, he had seen it was still open from the taxi from New Street Station earlier. Wouldn’t it be funny if that waiter who laughed at their antics with chopsticks was still there and remembered them. He would arrange to meet her at the clock in the Bullring, just as they used to and then wondered if she would wear her black velvet jacket. He remembered that jacket, it made her waist look even slimmer than it was such that when his arms went round her, he felt as if he could break her delicate little frame in two. It struck him how much he wanted to hold her again, his little image of times gone and opportunities passed by. He wanted her and his youth back, to whisper in her sweet ear that he was sorry and that he would never go away again. To feel her willingly against him and responding. Oh Fi, what a stupid mistake I made. If only........ He was so lost in thought that he was oblivious to the door opening. “Miss Bingley will see you now” said the girl. With a murmur of thanks, and thinking no further ahead that the effort required to put one foot in front of the other, he walked into her office. His eyes met her gaze, and he found himself looking at a portly woman of about fifty in a suit of conservative tweed, a string of pearls and on onyx brooch. His mouth fell open in surprise as he looked at the name on a plaque on her desk. It said “Miss Freda Bingley” “Can I help you?” she said in a cultured Yorkshire accent. Tweet
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