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Midnight Sun (standard:mystery, 1113 words) | |||
Author: Cyrano | Added: Nov 25 2008 | Views/Reads: 4201/2392 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
Daniel Blake returned from work to find his wife had not returned home...she didn't return the next day or the next. Daniel feared for her safety. No belongings were missing and the weeks went by. Those weeks became months, then a year...till... | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story it is only a matter of time before the whole town, and therefore the golf club, will be limping. He steels himself and drains the remnants of coffee. The telephone rings, taking him away from his thoughts. Out on the course, two players competing for the prestigious Chevrolet Cup, stand on the sixteenth tee. A par three over creek. They appear to be debating the point of a balls entry. The concentrated debate over the rules is frustrating the following group, standing on the tee and making gestures. From the time they drove off the first tee Daniel has eaten breakfast, driven from home, spent an hour on the practice ground, glanced through the San Francisco Chronicle, taken morning coffee, and is now contemplating lunch. From his seat, through the large plate glass window he observes a small group of men braced against the stiff westerly. The rain has passed over. Daniel has as much interest in the progress of the match as the seagulls spiralling overhead. Suffice to say, he had posted the draw on the notice board in early spring and now, on this blustery Saturday, the competition is reaching its conclusion. Between times he was eliminated in the first round to the tune of seven and six, by a seventy five year old with a half set of clubs playing off a handicap of twenty-eight who could call on the use of only one sound leg. Sadie enters the office, looking ashen. Suddenly there is a thunderous noise. A helicopter chops low over the clubhouse and hovers above the golfers on the sixteenth fairway. “What the hell....” Daniel says, standing up to the window. “Daniel, there's an officer here to see you.” “An officer?” “Detective Brisbane. Shall I show him in?” “It's landing. What on earth...yes, yes, show him in...it looks like some kind of emergency landing.” “There's no emergency, Mr. Blake. I'm afraid we have a body in the creek.” Tells a tall thickset man, southern accent pronounced, standing in the doorway. Daniel's legs give way and he staggers to his chair. “Body?” He repeats, the word cotton wool in his throat. Sadie weeps uncontrollably. Tweet
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