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The Chess Player (standard:other, 1584 words) | |||
Author: Rattan Mann | Added: Oct 26 2007 | Views/Reads: 3385/2321 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A shepherd vs a king in a game of chess | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story distance. Panic gripped him. How would he play without the sheep? How would he know in which direction to move? Then he saw a herd of very ugly creatures tumbling out of the king's palace. They were very big and noisy and made of iron but they did run like sheep. Were they some kind of sheep he had never seen before? He asked bystanders if those ugly creatures were sheep, and if so, why didn't they look like Christ's sheep. The sophisticated city-folks laughed at him. They saw at once that he was a village fool who knew nothing about science and civilization. And so they answered him in his primitive tongue. Yes, they are sheep all right. But they are not Christ's Sheep. They are the King's Sheep. They are called battle-tanks. That eased the shepherd's mind and gave him his self-confidence back. He had his sheep for his moves. The king was very pleased that some fool had at last fallen in his trap, and ordered the game to start immediately. He was so thirsty for blood that he wanted to lose very fast. And the game started with great fanfare - music and dance, and a feast with the king and queen. Then everybody waited for the shepherd to make his moves. The shepherd's moves were the same old Christ's Moves that had always brought him victory. When he saw the battle-tanks going into the king's palace, he moved up on the chessboard, and when he saw them coming out of the palace, he moved down. And as the tanks turned left from the gate, he turned left on the board, and as they turned right, he turned right. And when the battle-tanks crossed a bridge, he moved diagonally. The game lasted for months, but to everybodys' surprise, the shepherd lost in the end even though the king had played as poorly as he possibly could. Even the king could not beleive that he had won against the best chess player in his kingdom, and that too after doing everything in his power to lose. Till now he had never won in chess - even against his own children whom he tried his best to impress. His own children made fun of him. That his why he wanted to wipe out any chess player that was better than him. But now he had proved his worth against the best. So it was the happiest day in his life, and he wanted to share his happiness with the man he had defeated. Instead of killing the shepherd, the king gave him a huge reward, and told him how lucky he was that he lost - otherwise he would have died. He thought that this would make the shepherd very happy. It had the opposite effect. The simpleton couldn't beleive his eyes or ears. He couldn't beleive that he lost and he couldn't beleive what the king said. Everything began to fall in place. Now he understood why even strangers invited him for supper. He felt betrayed - first by the chess master and then by the king and his Black Sheep. And the shock of defeat and betrayal was far more than any joy of getting a few pieces of gold. As he walked towards the gate, he had only one question in mind: How could he have lost to such a worthless player as the king? He went over all his moves a thousand times over to see where he could have gone wrong. But there was nothing wrong with his moves. They were all Christ's Moves. Then, as he reached the gate of the palace he noticed a strange coincidence. If all his moves had been the opposite of what they were, he would have won straight away. At first it didn't make sense. But then he understood why - the King's Sheep were not Christ's Sheep. They were the Devil's Black Sheep who had turned all rules of the game upside down. He started screaming and hitting his head against the gate in despair. He was defeated by his own innocence. "How could have I done that, how could have I done that - trust the grand chess master and then follow the Devil's Sheep? I should have known that the Devil's Sheep don't follow Christ's rules. When the Devil's Sheep moved up, I should have moved down, and when they turned left I should have turned right. And I should have turned diagonally only after they all fell in the river and drowned. Then I would have won - remained the greatest chess player in the kingdom." And wailing in despair, he hit his head against the gate so hard that he died instantly. The gold coins fell to the ground and were pocketed by the guards even before his body slumped. Then they threw him into the ditch because a proper burial would have been too expensive - both in time and money. And from the next day nobody ever remembered or missed him. Such was the strange life and death of a great chess player and a true man of Christ. The End First published on www.oraculartree.com copyright Rattan Mann Tweet
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