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COUSIN ANNA AND THE NIGHT STORM (Word Count 1957) (standard:drama, 1949 words) | |||
Author: Rosie Jay | Added: Oct 19 2006 | Views/Reads: 3475/2509 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
A stormy night becomes the catalyst to new understanding and acceptance for two estranged young cousins. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story chicken, baked potatoes and tossed salad, Penny lingered in her private little pout. Her stubborn dismissal of Anna was obvious as she remained rudely silent, allowing Mom to picked up the slack, even though she looked a bit edgy. Finally, Mom stood, checking her watch. “It’s six-thirty. Dad’s plane is arriving in two hours and I have a ways to go. I’ll need some lead-time, so how about if you girls tidy up?” she asked, with a quick glare at Penny. In moments Penny watched as Mom drove off. Then, while Anna cleared the table, she started the dishwasher. The silence between them was terribly uncomfortable as they made awkward efforts to focus on the window. The rain kept coming, cranking up to heavy downpour. Finally, Anna spoke first “I guess we’re stuck together, aren’t we? Your feelings are pretty obvious, Penny. I don’t know why, but you don’t like me at all.” Penny was shocked by her honesty. “I do like you, Anna!” she fibbed again in amazement. “Well, what is it then?” Anna’s voice was cracking, just a tad. “I thought it might be different this year, but I guess I was wrong. Don’t worry, though. I’ll find some excuse to go home early.” Penny was bowled over! Never, ever, did she expect that from Anna! She dug deep for response, but what could she say? She’d made it pretty obvious, had she not, about how she felt? To deflect such utter tension, Anna glanced at the window. The rain was pounding now, hammering. “You can’t see two feet in front of you out there,” she observed.” Penny drew her stunned face to the window as well, relieved to change the subject. “Gosh, I wish I hadn’t forgotten to listen for that weather report...not to mention the cell phone thing, you know?” “I don’t think it mattered,” Anna flatly commented. “Your mom was going anyway.” How different Anna was this year. In the speed of light Penny realized that she hadn’t really been fair—to put it mildly! “I’m sorry if I made you feel...well, not welcome,” she confessed, deservingly embarrassed. “Truly, I am. Can we start over?” Before Anna could respond, the ceiling light flickered—and, suddenly, totally gone. Drenched leaves now thrashed against the window as the howling wind rose to full crescendo. They were in complete darkness now—a blackout—and no telling for how long. Penny shivered slightly, remembering. Last year’s blackout lasted two whole days. But her conscience weighed heavier. At last ashamed of her unbelievably selfish behavior that day...well, if she could only wish it all away. Then there was Mom, out on the road in the storm. If she hadn’t been in such a snit, she might have been more responsible. Mom would have been warned, at least, and have her newly charged cell phone safely tucked in her purse if she needed it. But, thanks to her, that didn’t happen and Mom was out there—alone—possibly in danger, with no way to call anyone for help. It seemed the only light bulb working now was the one that lit up her brain. “There are lots of places for your mom to get off the main road and park until the storm passes—probably with lots of other stranded motorists for company,” Anna assured, surmising her thoughts. “Also, state troopers, don’t forget, are usually out in droves on a night like this.” A hopeful remark, comforting indeed, to which Penny replied, “Really, Anna, you might not believe me, but I’m really glad you’re here with me.” She made the first gesture, groping in the darkness to find Anna and give her a hug—her soapy hands saturating Anna’s yellow checked blouse. “Hey, there’s enough water out there,” Anna quipped, obviously accepting the apology. “I’d like to stay dry while we’re inside, don’t you think?” For the first time they joined in laughter. How grateful Penny now was for Anna’s supportive presence, marooned as they were with the angry, driving deluge outside. With no power, there was no way to learn about anything, except for a small transistor radio in the hall closet. But even that didn’t help because, in the pitch-black, they couldn’t find the flashlight or the batteries it needed. Only an occasional bolt of lighting lit the eerie darkness as Anna tried to quell Penny’s guilt ridden concerns, even though there was nothing they could do. What they could do, though, was talk—really talk—to each other. As the wind howled and the torrential rain gushed in buckets, Penny insisted that Anna begin first. Oh, the things she learned about her farm girl cousin! Anna depicted her life in rural Indiana, describing in fine detail the farm, in her dad’s family now for five generations. It was indeed a busy life, with cows to milk, chicken coops to be tended, the gathering eggs, collecting harvest—and even the baling of hay. This time around Penny actually found it interesting, but what surprised her most was that Anna had a horse, a real horse, named Monarch. Every day she rode, hoping to soon enter equestrian competition. How neat was that! Penny, in turn, talked about her school, her friends, cheerleading, the soccer she so loved, even her record collection. She was pleasantly surprised to learn that Anna did know what’s hot and what’s not in on the music scene, as well as in the movies. She simply wasn’t that interested in it, that’s all. But so what! The kitchen clock barely showed ten-thirty by the candle they eventually found in the back of a kitchen drawer, now placed safely in a bowl on the stove. They had talked a long while—but now, Penny’s anxiety returned. “I can’t believe they’re not home yet,” she nervously said. “There’s not much we can do but wait,” Anna replied, “Maybe we should just go to bed. I mean, the storm is bound to let up soon, and if we fall asleep, maybe you won’t worry so much.” As the lightening and lit candle aided them to the bedroom, Penny had a thought. “You seem so grown up, Anna. How can you be so calm on a night like this?” “Oh, I’m not always,” Anna replied. “But when you live on a farm, you learn to be calm, because everything depends on the weather.” A while later, still in the dark, they climbed into bed. Anna nodded off first while Penny wrestled yet again with her conscience about how she had messed up that day, and how, with Anna’s help, she got through. Then, after some unspoken prayers, she nodded off as well, exhausted. But by morning, how everything had changed as Penny observed the sunshine now peering through the blind slats! There was conversation in the kitchen and the aroma of brewing coffee wafting through the air! “Anna, they’re home!” she squealed, leaping out of bed. They were up in a flash, Anna clopping behind as Penny raced ahead. There, standing at the kitchen sink were Mom and Dad, safe and sound. “I’ll bet I can tell what you two were doing when the lights went out last night,” Dad quipped. He was putting away last night’s dishes. Mom, however, told the tale. “Oh, girls! You must have had quite a time! The plane was late arriving, then on landing hold a few minutes more. When we finally started for home, an uprooted tree was blocking the Little Brook Bridge, so we had to detour. You were asleep when we got home just before midnight, and we didn’t have the heart to wake you.” After a moment, she added, “Oh, the lights came on around that time. We hope you weren’t worried too much.” Penny smiled. “Nah, a piece of cake,” she joked, winking at Anna. How warm and relaxed they appeared, a far cry from yesterday—and Mom noticed. “I think, in spite of the weather, something wonderful happened here last night. Would I be correct in assuming that?” she asked. “Yep, you would be correct,” Penny replied. In a strange and peculiar way, the terrible night storm turned out to be a blessing. And, if Anna didn’t still want an excuse to go home early, they’d have two fine weeks to spend together. Tweet
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