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The First Date (standard:romance, 1730 words)
Author: Steve CraineAdded: Aug 08 2006Views/Reads: 3799/2379Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
A story of a internet date that goes very well...if you have ever talked on line and met someone... this is a story for you
 



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the moment. So what are we doing as your pull yourself together ? He 
looks at you and smiles and says how about dinner and a surprise? Do 
you like surprises? Sure what woman doesn't? 

So you enter his car and off you go... So where are we eating at as you
look at him with one of your sexiest smiles? it's a surprise! His car 
is heading toward a area your unfamiliar with a beautiful winding road 
The trees towering above the road as the sky darkens and the evening 
stars pop out one by one. As the car whisks you up this scenic mountain 
road your in wonderment of the evening, the ride, and of course this 
man who as totally enchanted you. The car rounds the last beautiful 
curve to a sensational Chateau. The enchantment of this French Castle 
is literally breath taking. 

Opening your door and taking your hand he leads you to the huge wood
doors of this magnificent palace. As the doors open you feel as if you 
were a four year old entering the gates of Wonderland little miss Alice 
her self. The tall ceilings and the brilliant red drapery and evenly 
spaced lights that look like the torches of the past. Oh my God the 
feeling of romance is flowing like a water fall after a spring time 
rain. 

Your Seated at a superb table with the bright white napkins in teepee
shapes and large stem wine glasses waiting to be fill with a lushes 
French wine. Our waiter enters lighting our candles and pouring that 
nectar 

A hour of true amazement has past, a dinner so divine. The company so
enchanting and romantic yet stimulating to say the least. Out of no 
where there is music, would you please dance with me my sweet? As you 
dance on a marble highly polished floor he holds you so close your sure 
he can feel your heart beat. Your fluttering across the floor like 
Cinderella, When you see through the large windows the moon rising in 
the distance. Looking at him so innocent you say can we get some fresh 
air? Dancing you to the large French doors and he opens them to a white 
marble patio that had to of been in a movie. 

Walking to the railing of this exquisite retreat your thinking my turn.
He has dazzled you all evening now its your time. Catching him staring 
at you with a look of seduction, you move in. Placing your hands on his 
chest lifting your head to place a carefully planned thank you kiss, 
and with a slight batting of your eyes you say Your wonderful. You feel 
his knees buckle slightly. Oh yes you feel the romance yourself as the 
memorized moment is so delicious! Then he softly places his right hand 
under your chin drawing you into a kiss that melts you! So tender as 
your lips touch, you feel and taste his tongue moving and trilling 
emotions that have been dormant way to long. Bodies pulled close and 
arms around each other in such a tantalizing embrace. Catching your 
self as your hand slides down his back toward those tight jeans. 

Looking deep into your eyes with a smile that you have dreamed about
though out your years on this earth, He says to you ..... Will you see 
me tomorrow? What have you in mind, with you head cocked slightly to 
the side and with your sweetest smile. Well would love to take you on a 
train ride. it's a scenic romantic ride for those who love the view of 
nature and the true beauty of a sweet after noon of company that's so 
attracted to you! would love to, with his arms around your waist and 
your hands softly rubbing his chest. it's a date you say! 

The drive home is exquisite as the evening before, the stars are
sparkling with a glow that dreams are made of. Pulling up to you home 
and shuts off the car he opens his door and moves quickly to your door, 
Wow! So sweet to be treated like the lady you are. Holding your hand he 
walks you to the front entrance of your home, stopping under your dimly 
lit porch light. He turns to you and says I want to thank you for a 
beautiful night with such a enchanting woman. I am the one who should 
be thanking you, Its been a long time since I have had a evening so 
tantalizing as you have shown me. Yes he moves his warm wet lips 
towards yours and you can feel them before they touch. Hummmm the 
feelings are so sweet! it's a kiss good night, yet you know there will 
be more not tonight but more that will cause flares that will only be 
matched by a solar explosion from the Sun its self. Good night my 
sweet. Lets say 1pm tomorrow is that good for you? Oh yes I will be 
waiting. Good night. 


   


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