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Mayhem Swamp (standard:fairy tales, 1706 words) | |||
Author: Alpha43 | Added: May 10 2005 | Views/Reads: 3896/2534 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
The lost boy gets some good advise about getting back to civilization from a very unusual source. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story “Excuse me mister, who are you?” The boy cautiously asked. The little guy did not turn and look at him; he just kept rubbing his hands over the fire and said, “ Well my lad, it‘s good you finally woke up. I’m Jay Riley, outdoorsman extraordinaire, and who might you be?” The old man announced, completely at ease. “I’m Cal Applebee and I have never been so happy to see anybody in my life. I don’t suppose you would have anything to eat?” The old man laughed out loud and said, “What would I be doing with vittles?” Then the old man quickly spun around and said, “You don’t look too successful with your hunt, your gun is still clean, and fully loaded I might add. I suppose by tomorrow you will either shoot a deer or you will have to be heading out for your home, correct?” The boy did not really know what to say, he did not want to admit he was lost, but he was tired and so hungry that pride would have to take second place for now. “Yeah, I think I will head towards town about noon tomorrow if I haven’t filled my license. Towns that way, isn’t it?” as he pointed towards the same old path he had tried so many times. “I think my compass says that way is south.” The little fellow said nothing for a long time, then after a couple chuckles he said; “When you decide to head out tomorrow, hold your compass way out in front of you to see which direction is south. Your hunting knife and belt buckle are made of metals which could make the compass needle point in the wrong direction. Your old enough to know that, what’s wrong with you. Only a fool would get turned around out here in No-Mans-Land! Well, I’m warm now, I gotta go.” The old man stood up, all four foot of him, and stepped over the stones, directly into the fire, through the smoke, and he was gone. Gone, Cal could not see him anywhere. Cal was upset because the old man called him a fool, but after the old guy stepped into the fire, Cal thought he might just be dreaming, and soon he was. The next morning, as the sun lit the eastern sky, Cal got up, took out his compass and held it in front of him and the needle pointed in the same direction that it had before. Slowly, he pushed the compass farther out in front of him and the needle slowly swung to the left a full 90 degrees. He grabbed his gun, looked around for anything he might be forgetting, and then he noticed that the campfire pit was cold and wet, with his footprints still in the snow and ashes from his first day hunting. He leaned down and touched the ashes, cold and damp. This didn’t make any sense. He had a strange feeling, shivered with Goosebumps for a second, then quickly headed out in the new direction. After an hour, he walked into an open field that looked familiar, and yes, he was back at Excelsior. He stood there grinning, then wiped the grime off his clothes and prepared to go in the house and get a good chewing out. Listening to how he should never have been hunting alone in the first place, ‘too young’ and ‘too green to the outdoors,’ but he did not care. It was great to see his folks and to be safe back at home. Things were pretty much as he expected, some yelling, a lot of questions, and even more tears. He had never been hugged so much in his life. He felt silly, but he kind of liked it. His dad told him to run down to Dexter Brown’s farm at the end of the road and tell them he was all right and see if they could let the other neighbors know, so they could call off the search they were organizing. As Cal was about to close the back door, his dad yelled out, “Can you go that far without getting lost?” His dad had a big smile on his face. Cal told Mrs. Brown that he appreciated everybody’s concern and he wondered if she could call the neighbors to let them know he was all right. She gave him a kiss on the forehead and told him she was glad he was safe and she would call everyone with the good news. Walking past the cow barn, Cal ran into Dexter, and he shook Cal’s hand, asking him if he was scared in the swamp. Cal admitted he was pretty scared. Then Cal felt a little embarrassed as he asked Mr. Brown if he had ever heard of anybody named Jay Riley? Mr. Brown broke out into a laugh and said, “Son, everybody for miles around knew Jay, he was the town drunk, our very own Village idiot, and a con man from way back. He poached more deer than most people will ever see. Spent half his life in jail. Darn fool lived here 67 years, fished every creek and poached all the open farm land in the county and still managed wonder into the Mayhem swamp some 12 years ago and nobody’s seem hide nor hair of him since. “If that damn fool was alive today there is little doubt that you and every other...” Tweet
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