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Is It Ever Too Late? (standard:non fiction, 1112 words) | |||
Author: Lori | Added: Mar 08 2004 | Views/Reads: 3520/2297 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
I've re-worked it a little. It's still the story of my father. I just hope it's more understandable now. Thanks for the tips. As always feedback is greatly appreciated. | |||
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story you loved most die before your eyes. He thought that my aunt was dead instantly, so he went to my father's side. He stayed with him the whole time. He didn't suffer too many injuries, just scratches and bruises. He was in the truck each time it flipped, end over end, twelve times. He felt each flip, but not just with his body. He's prayers weren't answered that night. The real pain you can only see in his eyes. They tell their own story. He still wakes up on that night every year. Even though it's been almost 24 years. I don't know if he will ever get over it. Sometimes, I pray that he doesn't. If he forgot about it, it would be like him forgetting the worst night of his and my life. It would be someone else who has forgotten what my father meant to the world. I know it's too late for my father to make it up to me. All these years later, I still hold it against him. I hold it against him that he wasn't there for me when I needed him the most. He wasn't there for me when I got my first nightmare. He wasn't there for me when I got my first boyfriend. He wasn't there for me when I got my first heartache. He wasn't there for me when I got married. He wasn't there for me when I had each of my babies. He wasn't there for me when I went thru my divorce. He wasn't there for me when I got married again. Someone else had to step up to the plate and do his job for him. So, I do think it does get too late for us. I do believe that there is a higher price we have to pay. When you hurt someone, it will come back and bite you on the butt. In one form or another, it will happen. You may want to think twice before you decide that you want to give up on someone. You may not get another chance to make it up to them. You may never get the chance to say "I'm sorry". Think about it. Is it ever too late? Tweet
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